Cute, funny and hot!

I really liked Simone in this one.

Author's Response: I'm glad that it was all of those! Thanks - I was pleased with the way Simone came across.

Bill's straightforwardness made me lol...although I almost feel a bit sorry for Andreas. ;)

Author's Response: He's accustomed to being blunt, especially with his BFF - though I think this time it was a bit too much for poor Andreas to handle! Thanks for your review.

It had been a near disaster, but the greater share of Bill's anger had seemed to be at the fact that Tom had kept their kinship from him until after they'd slept together, when it hadn't been Tom's intention. – they always get mad at the stuff you don’t expect.

Any coherent thought Tom might entertain had been dissolved to nothingness at the touch of Bill's skin against his. – ha ha he’s screwed!
Bill had seemed swayed by that argument, but there had been another tense moment when Tom had been truly unsure whether Bill would tell him no, he couldn't have him again. Tom might have gone a little crazy in that split second; he couldn't recall it with absolute clarity. He remembered thinking something about changing Bill's mind no matter what; maybe frontal assault by mouth, if nothing else. – ha ha ha *cracks up*

"No, come on, we've just showered and I want you to meet someone," Bill had insisted. "Someone important; Tomi, please?"
And Tom had discovered that he was unable to resist his twin's pleas, even when it wasn't for sex. – ha ha you a puppet to his whims lol

He was wearing lip gloss, not much color but with a faint shimmer.
Tom wanted to lean over and find out how it tasted. – delicious, it tastes delicious.

He squeezed Bill's knee and leaned closer over Bill's shoulder, tipping his head so that his cap wouldn't get in the way when he whispered into Bill's ear. "I love you, Bill."
Tom found himself flat on his back along the length of the car's backseat with very little transition of time. He looked up into Bill's wide, excited eyes. Then they were kissing, Bill's mouth pressing onto him hungrily. – apparently we found Bill’s magic words. I love you! Ha ha

Tom groaned into his twin's mouth and angled his hips up. Now all he could think of was Bill riding him, sitting on his cock so pretty, his mouth slack with pleasure and their eyes locked as they approached orgasm. - *shudders* so hot!

"Yes," Bill moaned, as Tom broke the kiss and moved down Bill's neck. His arms clutched around Tom's middle and he pushed his groin up. "Yes, Tomi, yes, let's do it. Pull my jeans down a little and push my legs up." – lol in the back of a hired car? Lol

"Don't have any slick stuff," he complained.
"Damn it!" Bill's fist pounded into the car bench and Tom heard a spring snap in its depths. "Don't you have anything?"
"Uh...how much lip gloss do you have?" - *giggles* I think they are going to have to start carrying around lube with them, at least in the beginning!

"Later," Bill promised, patting Tom's shoulder comfortingly as though he hadn't been gagging for it a moment before. - *giggles* nice recovery

"Why have you been renting a car, anyhow?" Bill asked curiously.
"Oh." Tom bit at his lip ring as Bill walked them toward the front steps of a brownstone home. "Well, I don't have a license yet. Wasn't sure if I wanted to go through the bother of going through either the proper channels or the illegal ones." – best question is can you drive?

Simone straightened, wiping at her face again with the backs of her hands, and she lifted her chin. "It was nearly eighteen years ago that I met your father, Jorg Kaulitz. He wanted a child, and he was willing to give me a considerable sum – I was young, and struggling to get a business started. And so." She laughed, the sound mirthless. – and you didn’t think twice about giving birth to demon children or to dealing with the demon Jorg?

"Why didn't you..." Bill began, and Tom already knew the shape of his question and the answer. "You could've tried to get him back, at least!"
Simone shook her head immediately, going pale beneath her makeup. "Jorg is a Nephilim, a full-blood Nephilim with all the resources of a minor demon House," she replied at once. It was clear the thought had haunted her over the years. "I was so happy that Jorg left you alive, Bill; though I had some powerful wards of my own, it could have become a fight to the death. Mine and yours. I didn't go after Tom because... Jorg let me keep you. I knew that was the price." – I figured it was something like that. A trade of sorts.

Tom shrugged. He was still deciding whether there was something to forgive. The one choice that Simone had had was whether to tell Bill the truth; that he had a twin, that he was a Nephilim of the House Kaulitz. Then again, if she had told Bill earlier, and Bill had decided to come looking for Tom, outside the Walls that protected the human cities from the Nephilim world... the smallest of shudders passed through Tom. – there’s my logical little Tom!

Bill said dismissively, cuddling up against Tom's shoulder and pulling Tom's hand into his lap, trapping it between his thighs.
Tom's eyes rolled back into his head a little. It didn't produce quite the same violent reaction as touching Bill's skin, but having his hand pressed between his brother's thighs sent a tug straight to his dick. – I love!!!!! The power of touch in this story!

"They could have taken you from me, enslaved you," Tom said, turning his head and speaking the words muffled against Bill's hair. He could hardly stand to speak the words aloud. "Someone could have kept you from me forever." – ooohh yeah that would suck big time! I wonder will the other one feel it when the other one dies (ie Bill dies will Tom feel it?) hum?

"Me, dead," Bill supplied, his dark eyes going flat. Now he shuddered, too, leaning in to nose softly at Tom's chin. "Would you have even known?"
"I would have," Tom said with absolute certainty. "I'd have known, and would've taken out whoever did it, and followed you soon after." – awh!!!

I think Tom needs to start training Bill to fight and how to be evil soon before they leave New York.

Simone returned to the living room bearing two cups of steaming coffee. She handed a full mug of liquid so light it appeared blond to Bill, and passed a mug of black coffee over to Tom.
Tom eyed the coffee in his hand. "No sugar?"
Simone nodded, her expression somewhere between bashful and nervous. "It's black."
"How did you know?" he inquired, biting down on his lip ring.
Simone tilted her head to the side. "A mother knows these things," she replied, looking from Tom to Bill and flushing. "Er. Then, I'll leave you to it." She beat a hasty retreat back to the kitchen. – lol she knows something is going on lol

"Hey," Bill said, setting his own mug down and leaning in toward Tom, setting a hand on his thigh. "Want to come upstairs and see my old room?" – lol very subtle lol

He'd found that Simone had done her best for Bill, after all, and Tom couldn't fault her for it. He had nothing to forgive. – good!

He was already favorably disposed toward the woman who'd given birth to him and Bill. She had done her best for Bill, and Tom would do his best now to get to know their mother.
And she hadn't lied. That was crucial. Tom wouldn't have forgiven a lie. – well she doesn’t know what a temper Bill has as well as she knows that they can tell lies so why would she be that stupid?

Platters of steaming, fragrant food were placed before them, and Tom's stomach let out a vicious snarl, reminding him why he was here and not balls-deep in Bill right now. – lol

They were definitely mated, the thought struck Tom; nothing but that most visceral bond would make Tom forego even food for fucking. - *giggles* he is sooooooooo cute!

"She's something, isn't she?" Bill spoke to him around a mouthful of food. His words were garbled but Tom could still understand him.
Tom cleaved a sausage in two and nodded. Bill was fishing. "I don't hold anything against her," he answered the unspoken question. – I don’t know why you just don’t ask what you mean? *shrugs* you’ll learn.

"How many times do I have to tell you not to inhale your food?" Simone demanded, turning toward Bill.
"At least one time more, obviously," Bill replied, snickering when their mother sent a rude gesture his way. – ha ha nice!

Nephilim didn't get attached to family; not parents, not siblings, not children. That was the rule and that had been how Tom himself had been raised - everyone was competition except your mate. But this was the human world, and Simone was human, and Tom already felt an odd affinity for the motherly blond witch who had birthed him. Odd, because he wasn't sympathetic to anyone as a general rule. Yet they'd cleared the air regarding Tom and Bill's separation and Bill wanted Tom to give Simone a chance. Maybe that was enough. – hum!

Bill scoffed. "Rules are for the narrow-minded and the unimaginative." – ha ha!!!

"I know exactly what I'm doing." He giggled a bit and rocked in Tom's lap as though unable to resist the innuendo. - *giggles and gasps*

"Yes, I know. I just... I hadn't expected this to be the result." She met his eyes now and there was regret in her expression, a fair amount of resignation, but no condemnation. She wasn't rejecting them, but she was making it clear she didn't have to like it either. "It's not... it's not something that humans would be quick to accept, and, well, you're twins - it's not..."
Bill hitched up in Tom's lap and laid his head against Tom's shoulder, yoking his arms possessively around Tom's neck. "Not normal?" He snorted. "Like I've ever been normal." – are they planning on living in the human world for long?

Simone gasped and averted her eyes even though neither of them were doing anything extraordinarily shocking - then again, Tom was a poor judge of human values. "Your auras," she exclaimed, then looked up again with a newfound expression of respect, almost awe. "Manon above, no wonder Jorg was frightened. When you join your auras, it's a great deal more powerful than either of your individual auras. Sweet gods, I've never seen anything like it." – oooooohhhh O_O *Grins*

"No sex at the breakfast table," Simone snapped, standing up and beginning to gather plates. - *cracks up* OMG!! What about the lunch or dinner table? Can they have sex at those?

"Now that we've got all that worked out, can I give Tom a tour of my old room?"
Simone turned, planting her hands on her hips. "No, you can't," she stated plainly. "Not with those auras. Some other time, maybe. Right now I'd rather you wreck Tom's hotel room, dears, or at least go back to Bill's hole in the wall." – ha ha ha Not with those auras!!!! Lol!!!

"Come on, Bill, let's go break some furniture," Tom muttered in Bill's ear.
"Oh?" Bill looked at him, brightening. "Oh! Maybe we'd better go to your hotel, then; we already need to replace my couch."
Simone covered her eyes with one hand. "I love you both, and your mother doesn't need to hear those kinds of details."
"That wasn't even bad!" Bill said indignantly as Tom took him by the hand and led him from the kitchen. "Not at all! Bad would have been telling you what we did to break it..."
"Bye, Mom," Tom said, having decided to call her the same thing Bill did. She was his mother too, after all. "We'll be in touch." - *cracks up, pants with laughter* OMG!!!

Author's Response: They definitely can't keep their hands off each other! And...very good question about whether Tom can drive. I think it's more Tom's assumption that he COULD drive if he had a license, thank you very much. The power of touch - they still have that skin hunger thing going on! It's been so long they'd be touch-starved for each other even if they weren't having sex. Thanks for your review! ♥

I'm seriously crazy about this fic, it's not even funny, damn O.O *HOT*

Author's Response: I'm really pleased that you're enjoying it! Hope you liked the rest as well! ^_-

Oh god. Just so you know, I was up forever reading this last night and then it was the first thing I came to again when I woke up. This is absolutely amazing. The way you describe everything down to the very last, nit-picking detail is mouthwatering. I am completely ensconced within the delicious world you've created here. If I could swim in this fic, I would do so until my fingers and toes were pruny. Absolutely stunning.

Author's Response: I'm glad, I'm glad! Ah, thank you SO much, I really appreciate the compliments. Thanks for giving this a chance - and your review!

Right you are correct in dubbing this the porn.

Author's Response: "The porno," and yes! It really, really is. =)

Is the next person Simone?? That should be interesting. And I'm amazed that Jorg hasn't come looking for Tom yet.

Poor Andreas, I felt sorry for him...but I still had to snicker under my breath anyway.

Author's Response: Oh yes, the next person IS Simone. ;) As for Jorg, well, we'll find out about him later. I felt so bad for Andreas but that's just how it played out! Poor Andi, by the end of that conversation he was in shock.

*is too dead from the amazing to actually review anything coherent* Guh.

Author's Response: I'll take that as a compliment. Thank you! ;)

My. Brain. Just. Has. Disappeared!
What have you done to me? 0_o
And they are under way done?!?!?!
*goes to lay down*

Author's Response: Hee hee, mission accomplished! ;) Yeah, this was less than half but more than a third of the way done with the story. =D So pleased it caused you to have a lie-down. ♥

Tom stuck close to Bill as they stepped into the top floor hall, all but molding himself to his backside. Bill fumbled with the front door and gave a split second's consideration to simply tearing the lock out. The key finally went in and turned, though, and they tumbled inside. – I love the desperation.

Tom's mouth found the back of his neck and Bill hurled his handbag in the general direction of the spindly table by the door. He laughed as he heard something shatter – ha ha

Bill yanked it up over his head with alacrity and tossed it aside, a little surprised when nothing ripped. – me too

Tom swooped in on him at once, hands pressing against Bill's belly, skimming around to his bare lower back, mouth tracing a hot wet line across Bill's collarbones as he steered Bill backward through the apartment. Bill cried out, stunned at how good those hands felt on him, that mouth playing over him - they were barely doing anything yet but everything, anything was so good. – hot not yet sex!!

Bill fumbled with his buckle, a part of his mind bemused to realize his hands were trembling, and he gave up trying to work the complicated clasp after Tom began to tongue hotly down his neck, biting down ever so gently on Bill's pulse point. – lol they are already in so much trouble ha ha

He squirmed, mostly naked against Tom's clothed body now, and wanting more of those hands and mouth on him. He'd never had such a craving for someone else's skin before. – lol it’s called skin hunger *grins*

"Pants too."
Tom's mouth smirked and his eyes raked up Bill. "I'll trade you pants if you get rid of the boyshorts."
"Deal," Bill said immediately. – lol quick to cave *snickers*

"You've got such a nice body. Why do you keep it covered with such baggy clothes?"
Tom pushed his hips forward, his erect cock striking near Bill's mouth, painting him with a moist kiss of pre-come. "Because where I come from, these clothes aren't in style," he replied. - *shakes head* Tom!

"We are going to have so much sex," he told Tom, not even needing to ask whether Tom would be good for all night. He would. Bill would make sure of it. - *giggles*

"Are you gonna suck it?" he questioned Tom, his voice coming out hoarse as though he'd already been fucked. – I love the desperation, but it’s clear it’s not just Bill who’s gagging for it!

"Oh my GOD," Bill moaned, fervent and scrabbling for Tom's dreadlocks to express appreciation for that talented tongue. He was trying his best not to plead, but more and harder and coming were all essential concepts to Bill right now. "Tom, Tom... I need... ugh, Tom..." - *giggles* I love it!!!!

What do you want, Bill?"
Bill couldn't decide if he wanted more tonguing on his balls or Tom's mouth on his cock again. "More," he whimpered, pushing his ass toward Tom in lieu of making any kind of real choice. "Damn it, Tom, just...more!" – lol

"What are you...ohhh..." Bill moaned.
Tom's tongue was circling his hole now. He lapped at it, his lip ring bumping repeatedly against Bill's hole as he gave it wet, thorough kisses. – ta da, hot!!!!

One finger was joined by a second and they sank into Bill, connecting with his prostate like a live wire being triggered.
Bill screamed and thrashed, nearly throwing Tom off him as his legs uncoiled like springs from his chest - *grins* delicious!

"I know you," Bill gasped as his orgasm crested up and over to roll him like a tidal wave. "I know you, I do... Tom... Tom, Tom, Tomi." He almost had it, then, but it washed away under the expanding supernova of his orgasm. – lol I love that he can’t remember and he only does when he comes and then forgets!!!

"Good?" Tom asked, looking into Bill's eyes.
Bill rolled onto his back and bit his lip. "It was okay," he said nonchalantly. He turned his head away as his expression contorted; he couldn't keep a straight face.
Tom's low chuckle made it clear he wasn't fooled - *chuckles* so funny!!

"What do you want?" Bill murmured, stroking Tom's back as Tom sucked on his pulse. "Tell me what you want, it's yours." – wow you were easy…well for Tom anyway!

"Suck me," Tom gritted, his eyes glinting to Bill's sight even in the darkness of the bedroom. "I want you to suck my cock."
Bill hummed happily at the demand, thrilled both by what Tom wanted from him and the raw need in Tom's voice. He'd fully expected Tom to flip him over and ride him to completion, but they were still in total accord - Tom wanted what Bill wanted. And Bill had wanted to get his mouth on Tom's dick since the hard, slick red tip of it had cleared Tom's boxers. - *smiles* well you are twins

So familiar, the thought chased through Bill's head briefly, and a frown flitted over his brow as he bent over Tom's stomach. Not just familiar. Bill's frown cleared. Tom's cock was a near-exact replica of his own. He grinned widely; he was such a narcissist. No wonder he'd thought Tom had the perfect cock. – duh! Lol

He sucked harder, tonguing the slit of Tom's dick and swallowing down the first burst of pre-come. He was hoping if he was good enough, quick enough, he'd get to drink Tom down, but if Tom wanted to finish in his ass, he'd take a lot of pleasure from that too. – I’m pretty sure you get both!

humming as he took Tom back and forth, satisfied by the strangled noises above him that he was doing his job. – lol

Tom groaned and the hard cock in Bill's hands twitched. "Fuuuck, I want you to suck it," he breathed, pushing his hips up. "Suck it, Bill, keep sucking."
Bill allowed himself a tiny smile of utter satisfaction and bent over Tom's cock once more. – Tom’s happy cause he gets to come and make Bill happy and Bill’s happy cause he gets to suck Tom’s cock. Such a win, win, win moment!

"Come for me," Bill said, greedy for the taste of it. He wanted to see if the taste of Tom's seed was just as good as the pre-come, the subtle appeal of his skin, the rising intoxication of his scent. "C'mon, fuck my mouth, Tomi." He brushed his lips over the head of Tom's cock. – very hot! OMG so hot!

Tom's laugh was low, throaty. "It's not, if you're planning on taking responsibility for making it that way."
Bill purred. "I've been called a lot of things but 'tease' isn't one of them." - *giggles*

Now Bill got more of what he wanted. He loved having a cock in his mouth more than almost anything, and already he thought he might be addicted to the taste of Tom's. - *grins*

"Not when you're giving me exactly what I never knew I wanted."
Bill peered into Tom's unreadable eyes for a second, puzzled by the comment, then dismissed it as bedroom talk. He'd heard such before, but none so sincere as Tom's simple offhand comment. – awh Tomi’s being all warm and fuzzy!!!

"No, not really," Tom replied, reaching down to push sweaty hair back away from Bill's face. "Just...I want to fuck you. Really want to fuck you, but I gotta, you know..." His hips twitched, drawing Bill's attention back to the softening cock between his thighs.
Bill's stomach did a quick somersault and a pleased grin tugged at his lips. "Well, most guys don't like having it sucked again so soon after." He'd found that out early. …
Tom's eyes flared with heat and something Bill wasn't quite ready to recognize - something possessive. "I'm not most guys," he retorted. - *giggles*

The hunger swept through Bill again, the overriding desire, no, need to put it in his mouth. He shifted, curling himself around Tom's groin and resting his weight on one of Tom's hips as he lowered his face again. – they aren’t going to be able to separate for weeks are they? Lol

He couldn't stop little sounds of enjoyment from escaping his mouth, no matter how much cock he drew between his lips. - *giggles* Bill!

Sorry got to caught up in the story to comment mostly panting and uggghhhing

Mouth open and eyes nearly closed – lol we’ve seen this face!

Normally he preferred sex on his hands and knees; better angle for his prostate, less having to look someone in the eye when he was probably going to ditch them in the morning, but being face to face with Tom was...intense. It was just right. ... you're giving me exactly what I never knew I wanted.
"Me too," he whimpered, ignoring Tom's puzzled look and clenching hard onto Tom's cock. – lol way to confuse Tom

Tom finally pushed himself up on both hands above Bill and began to roll his hips, sinking his cock deep and pulling out almost all the way, repeating and repeating that one move and doing Bill just right with each stroke until Bill was shouting loud enough the whole goddamn building had to know what he was doing tonight. - *snickers*

"Tomi," Bill whispered again, slinging his arms around his lover and just holding him there against his body – awh all snuggly puppies!

Lovely just lovely!

Author's Response: Skin hunger, definitely. In my first draft I described it as "skin craving" but my beta reader recommended I rephrase it. So happy you're still enjoying! Thank you for the awesome compliments and again, I love seeing the parts of the chapter that you really liked. =)