Date: 07/24/09 10:35 pm Title: Chapter 2: Late Night Arguement and The First Dream
Poor Tomi, at least Georg likes him, Gustav's kinda stupid and I simply want Camilla to freeze to death.
Date: 07/24/09 10:24 pm Title: Chapter 1: Hypothermia & Chores
OMG!! She's a BITCH!!!
Author's Response: I actually based her off someone I know, too... >.>
Date: 07/24/09 03:48 pm Title: Chapter 6: Board Games & Thunderstorms
plzplzplz update soooon thx soso much=] i freaking luvz thiz story=]
Date: 07/24/09 01:38 pm Title: Chapter 6: Board Games & Thunderstorms
I just finished reading all six chapters and I love it. One thing confuses me though. George and Gusty aren't really brothers so why is it considered to be incest. I mean they were raised as brother but she is not Georges mom and Tom's father was not his dad right?
Author's Response: Thanks ^_^ To answer your question, they share the same dad (Camilla's first husband). Gustav and Georg are not related to Tom at all, since his dad was their stepdad. I hope that answers your question ^_^
Date: 07/24/09 10:37 am Title: Chapter 6: Board Games & Thunderstorms
-giggles- Bill is so irrisistably cute.. more?
Author's Response: The story 'The Laundromat' by Lrigrl inspired Bill's attitude. Read it if you get a chance ;)
Date: 07/24/09 03:08 am Title: Chapter 1: Hypothermia & Chores
Great story so far. Had me shaking my hands at my comp. at the end of the last chapter because I wasn't ready for you to stop yet. So you best be getting on with the story, don't make me come over there.
Later, for now.
Author's Response: Working on it ^_^
Date: 07/23/09 05:26 am Title: Chapter 5: Abandonment & Bill
i like the story very much im just a little lost so why does bill only live there a few times a year? wouldnt it be only during winter? or.. help me out
Author's Response: Yeah, you've got that right. He's only there a few times a year (mostly winter). Like, he'll come during all the really big snow storms, so the few times would be during the winter months (like he'll come for a few days, then go somewhere else, then come back again for another big storm). I hope that helps ^_^
Date: 07/22/09 07:01 am Title: Chapter 5: Abandonment & Bill
hehe yay!!BiLl!!!
Oh i liked this chapter I could so see Bill dancing in the snow lol
and and and Bill is Tom's step son...hehe ... i have no idea why i didn figure that out sooner....
Author's Response: lol if it helps any, I was still trying to figure out if Bill was Morana's son, cousin or brother until I wrote this chapter XD
Date: 07/21/09 11:25 pm Title: Chapter 5: Abandonment & Bill
Finally Bill! YAY!
I liked this! I wonder.....how old is Bill? Update soon please!
Author's Response: I'm still trying to figure out how old he is, too XD
Date: 07/21/09 11:24 pm Title: Chapter 5: Abandonment & Bill
Finally we get Bill!!! Yayness! So...update soon? Pretty please *pouts*
Author's Response: Writing chapter 6 still ;)
Date: 07/21/09 10:48 pm Title: Chapter 5: Abandonment & Bill
plzplzplz update sooon and whoa this is hecka good=] hurry plz thx soso much=]=]
Author's Response: Thanks ^_^
Date: 07/19/09 08:09 pm Title: Chapter 4: Surprise & Punishment
hehe i loved all of the subtle innuendos to the G's relationship...
and i dont mind that Bill hasnt appeared yet it is important to build the character;s life before you rip him apart from it
I really like this story so far hehe more please soon
*pulls out patented Bill Pout (TM)*
Author's Response: The G's belong together, just like Bill and Tom. Maybe even more than Bill and Tom, because there's a lot of Bill/Andi and Billshido out there ^_6. I'm working on chapter 5 now!
Date: 07/19/09 03:31 pm Title: Chapter 4: Surprise & Punishment
I cant wait for Bill! Im excited!
I think the G's relationship is ok but i think they need to be more nicer to Tom though. I liked how Tom finally spoke up to his step mother and told her to basically fuck off! Update soon!
Author's Response: lol Tom almost told ME to fuck off, he was so mad about the marriage thing XD
Date: 07/19/09 03:10 pm Title: Chapter 4: Surprise & Punishment
no i dont think tom should tell...pzlpzllpz updateosoon thx soso much=]=]
Author's Response: I'm writing the next chapter now ^_^
Date: 07/18/09 04:55 am Title: Chapter 3: Dreams and Interrogations
I really don't like here. Seriously! Bur I think Georg is going to do something bad to Tom when the snow storm comes since he asked about his jacket. I feel sooooooo bad for Tom. Make Bill hurry up! I sooooo excited for him to be in the story! Update soon!
Author's Response: lol Bill will come with the snow storm, I promise!
Date: 07/18/09 01:24 am Title: Chapter 3: Dreams and Interrogations
i could just bug you the whole review... wheres bill? but i really do like the development of your characters. its really rather interesting without bill in it so far but the cherry is knowing he will be there.
Author's Response: I know, I know. I promise, Bill will be in either Chapter 5 or 6. >_> I would just rather not rush the story and ruin it be accident.
Date: 07/18/09 12:35 am Title: Chapter 3: Dreams and Interrogations
Camilla seems like a bitch (which I know she's suppsoe to be), but it's great! I really like how you write about Tom's life.
Author's Response: Thanks :)
Date: 07/06/09 02:03 am Title: Chapter 2: Late Night Arguement and The First Dream
I really like this...can't wait for your next update!
Author's Response: Thanks :) Hopefully I'll be able to update again later this week--I'm usually pretty on top of all of my fics :)
Date: 07/03/09 10:27 pm Title: Chapter 1: Hypothermia & Chores
update sooon plz thx=]
Author's Response: I will as soon as I have time to write more <3