Date: 09/15/09 01:40 am Title: Chapter 6
Poor Tom! He must be so happy and so worried at the same time. To finally hear your twin's voice after so long it must be so emotional! I'm glad that he called his mother and Tom though. He needs them but I'm worried... this person who made Rachel he uncle is it? I"m worried that he will do something terrible. I think Jessica is sweet but I like Rachel's slight evilness. She's bad in a good way. I'm not sure which pairing I like better although seeing Bill with a human is kind of romantic.
Author's Response: Thank you for the sweet review. I'll give you a little secret, Rachel is older than Bill thinks!
Date: 09/14/09 01:29 pm Title: Chapter 6
Awwww....I like this..I really do! :)
Author's Response: Thanks!
Date: 09/14/09 06:22 am Title: Chapter 6
Poor Bill...He's so strong and beautiful, but so sad though. Maybe he'll finally be happy...with Jessica.
Author's Response: Thank you, thats just how I pictured him in this, having all the power in the world and yet he's as gentle as a lamb.
Date: 08/28/09 03:01 pm Title: Chapter 1
This is interesting. I like it but i'm having a hard time picturing Bill blond. I think that is the only thing I find hard about this story. I realize he is truly blond but I can't imagine it though. I feel sorry for Tom because he lost his brother so early, but I think more so for Bill. He knows his brother is looking for him and he can't do anything about it. He can't see him because it will put him in danger and when he does call him how will he tell Tom what happened to him. How do you tell someone you are a vampire and that seeing them could hurt them. The thought that Bill wants to be human and if he could turn human again interests me. Is there a way for Bill to turn back and survive it? This woman who changed him. She is very cunning and I do believe her when she says she changed Bill to save him, but maybe the cost is too much for Bill.
Author's Response: I had a hard time with Bill going to his natural hair, but I struggled with how he wouldrnbe able to run around Berlin and not be discovered, so having his hair color change and his tattoo's fade was the only solution! Thanks for the lovely comment.
Date: 07/08/09 08:31 pm Title: Chapter 1
i can't wait to read the rest of it :D
Author's Response: Thank you for reading it. Theres more, along with plenty of twists to the story!
Date: 07/02/09 05:04 am Title: Chapter 1
Dark story indeed (shivers)!. But he is nice to girls, isn't he? and it is wonderfully written too...Good work!
Author's Response: Thanks! This popped into my head and I started typing like mad!
Date: 07/01/09 04:28 pm Title: Chapter 1
ooooohhh *giggles* i love it it just jump started my deep dark vamp thoughts about Bill keep going! it sounds awesome already :)
Author's Response: I had too many romance stories, and when this thought came to me, I couldn't wait to try it!