Date: 06/24/11 05:41 am Title: Chapter 23
A.M.A.Z.I.N.G !! I .L.O.V.E I.T!! :DD
Date: 11/14/10 11:58 pm Title: Chapter 22
Yep! Still out here. I'm proud of Bill! I like him with Jess and I'm glad he can be closer to Tom ;)
Date: 09/26/10 08:32 pm Title: Chapter 21
well u have a new reader! this story is awesome!
Date: 09/23/10 10:11 pm Title: Chapter 21
Aww they're cute I love them and I think maybe Bill could handle Jess. As long as she can keep in control. I just hope that he can be close to Tom soon. They really need eachother.
Date: 06/25/10 10:04 pm Title: Chapter 20
Humm... now this is interesting. I want to know more about this situation with Bill's father. It changes everything and how I view Rachel. She seems kind of torn at the moment though. I can't wait to see what heppens.
Date: 05/19/10 09:52 pm Title: Chapter 19
FINALLY!!!!! We're getting some where!!!! Keep it up :)
Date: 05/06/10 09:22 pm Title: Chapter 18
Yep Filler but still ok
Date: 04/26/10 01:36 pm Title: Chapter 17
Bill likes older women :) Good, but.... what's going to happen? Will Tom be changed will this horrible vampire Rachel is so scared of get to Bill? eeps it's killing me to know.
Author's Response: I'm glad! I hope to keep you guessing for a little while longer too! Thank you for reading and reviewing.
Date: 03/14/10 11:50 pm Title: Chapter 16
Michelle is an interesting character and it will be interesting to see how he plays into the rest of the story for Bill. It's nice to know that Bill has another option. I can't wait to read more of this and I hope you can fix your PC. Good luck and hear from you soon.
Date: 03/06/10 09:52 pm Title: Chapter 15
WOW So Bill could become like this Michelle. I like it I can so see Bill in this way, but Tom. Bill needs Tom and I just feel that Tom will have to change for some reason or another. I know Bill doesn't like it but there is more to Tom changing that we think. I guess we will just have to see what happens when this Terrel (that is his name right?) person shows up.
Date: 02/20/10 02:03 am Title: Chapter 14
Oh Bill. he's so caring eventhough he cannot be with his brother he still want him to know he cares. Their friends too. I just hope that if Bill goes after Rachel it won't lead him to Terril. I'm a little scared for him right now. The decision to loose your human life would be very difficult indeed but Tom has already lost his brother once and I would think that knowing he is out there and you cannot be with him would be more horrible than if you were to become a vampire to be with him. The twins are and were so close that I'm not sure that now that Tom knows Bill is alive that he could live without him.
Date: 02/03/10 12:09 am Title: Chapter 13
Ha ha the Gs are always good for a laugh! I love them and the picture thing with Tom was so perfect but like Tom I too wish Bill were there and yes, Then everything would be perfect but that wouldn't make this story would it. I do hope that they can work something out but something is coming and it's not good.
Date: 01/06/10 11:04 pm Title: Chapter 12
So, Tom believes now but what will happen with everything els. I just can't wait anylonger... Ok I will wait but this suspense thing is making me crazy waiting for something to happen and hell to break loose. Anyway... can't wait to read more.
Author's Response: So glad you like it! But I am a bit of a drama queen, especially in front of a keyboard!
Date: 12/30/09 03:59 pm Title: Chapter 11
It would be interesting to change Tom as I said before he could help Bill more but I'm not sure how Bill would feel. I just know they need each other. Still it would be interesting to see.
Date: 12/03/09 06:14 pm Title: Chapter 10
Tomi! I don't know how I feel about this but I do know that Bill needs him. I'm so scared for them. I think it would kill Bill more if he got his brother back and then had to leave him again. I'm just curious now as to if Rachel will change Tom. IT makes sense. Tom would be able to help Bill more easily but would Tom be cohearent enough?
Author's Response: This little voice inside my head tells me that Bill would never go for changing Tom---unless he knew how much danger his Tommi was in!
Date: 11/30/09 10:00 pm Title: Chapter 9
Choices.... Choices for what? I feel so badly for Tom. To see his brother that way, but maybe now he will believe Bill. I'm concerned though. SOmething is up and I'm not sure what. Short but a total cliffy. How evil of you!
Author's Response: I'll try toget more up tonight or early tomorrow, things get clearer then. Thank for reading.
Date: 10/20/09 10:31 pm Title: Chapter 8
Oh Tom. I feel for him right now. He wants to be with his brother, but Bill can't stay in control yet and Tom had to be there to see him. I want them to be able to be around eachother, they need eachother. Tom is still Bill's twin and they have always been so close. If somehow they could be together I think it would make things better for Bill at least a little.
Date: 10/06/09 10:43 pm Title: Chapter 1
eeeeee!! twists and turns!! can't wait! thank you!
Date: 10/06/09 04:21 am Title: Chapter 7
NEIN!!!
I like Bill and Jessica.... *pout*
Awesome chapter, btw. n_n
Author's Response: Thank you! But don't get too comfortable, Terrel has plans for all of them.