Date: 11/17/09 08:11 pm Title: Severing the Ties
Haha suspense xD
I read the 8 chapters in a row and liked it a lot. Some parts made me laugh so loud my mum came to check out what I was doing. Good job, really.
I can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response: Awww, thank you so much! I have two more fics to update before this one, but this is my favorite, so I'll try to be quick! :)
Date: 11/13/09 05:47 am Title: Severing the Ties
oh my....
that was stupid! i thought it was going great! why would bill still want to break up, like this? i mean i know that was the initial plan but.... Things changed....damn.....
he could have said Bu that it was a scene, nothing more! a fake!
or he thought Bu won't let him do it! won't let them break up? So, Bill understood already than Bu loved him? jeee....
Bi is in deep shit, sorry
So now ppl think of him as a slut and a heartless bitch, so he has nothing to lose. Guess he might say something in an interview, huh? like saying he's sorry?
why he is such a coward? he had the right to tell Bu he wasn't in love and he didn't need these relationships, he like only sex? i think Bu HAD to respect that. That you can't make yourself fall in love, right?
Author's Response: lololol. Bill is indeed in trouble. XD
Date: 10/31/09 12:35 pm Title: Severing the Ties
I want to slap Bill, hard. Because Bu was just being so friggin' nice, and then this thing... Actually, I think I want to slap David more, he was the one who ruined their relationship, by pushing Bill to end it.
“Don’t- don’t say shit like that,” Bushido replied. “It’s not like that. He’s- just- Fuck, can we talk about the music or something? My relationships are none of your business.”
Go Bu! None of the world's business, let them believe whatever they want. And Bill a slut? Okay, well, sometimes I can see that, but looking at this from Bill's POV, I don't find him all that slutty... lol XD I feel something in writing was missing a little when Bu dropped the L-bomb... I'm not sure what, you were able to make up for it later in writing, but I felt like something was missing, maybe Bill not saying it back XD idk lol n_n lovely chapter.
Author's Response: Bill didn't say it back because he doesn't feel that way for Bushido at that time.
Date: 10/30/09 10:57 pm Title: Severing the Ties
Awww is really good story i like it alot
i like the idea of daves ! it meant to make them less together but it made them more together
Bill is acting like Bitch to Bushido when he been nothing to nice to him. so far it look like Bill only like Anis for his sex and his feel for him are getting there with him.
Awww Bill flip out on Bu in public and broke his heart...i guess Bill never knew Anis love him
it made me sad :( and now bill notice what he did and feel wrong for what he did to him
but Anis is too upset to talk to bill right now..i hope everything work out bewteen them i would really like to know *Hint hint* LOL i would love for you to carry on will is ^^ i enjoy it alot and i would love to know what happpen nexts with is please ^___^ I'll be waiting
Author's Response: I have three other fics, too, but this one will definitely be updated as soon as possible. <3 :)
Date: 10/29/09 03:29 am Title: Severing the Ties
AWWWWW T_T
But...Bill & Bushido will end up together, right? RIGHT!?!?! *is worried now*
Yeah, that was kinda bitchy of Bill to do that :/ He couldn't have just set Bu up and made Bushido out to by the lying bastard?
but no, I'm actually estatic that it's Bill's fault. Everyone seems to bash Bu WAYY too much XD
And now I'm going to end this ridiculously long review and ask for more...of both this story and your other ones XD
Author's Response: The next one up is Rivalry! Do you read that one? And I totally agree. Bu is made as the bad guy way to often. Where't the Bu-love?? It's right here, that's where. XD
Date: 10/28/09 09:32 am Title: Severing the Ties
Well hell bill was a dick now its bushido turn. What comes around goes around bill
Author's Response: Yep. :) Thanks for reviewing. <3
Date: 10/27/09 10:02 pm Title: Severing the Ties
I hate you...oh wel, not really... but you know... (sigh)
I honestly hope you update soon after this, but I won't beg (yeah... I kindda hate you too much to beg right now...)
Author's Response: XD LOLOLOL. Sorry!
Date: 10/27/09 07:51 pm Title: Severing the Ties
Someone deserves to get cunt punched.
Author's Response: You better not be talking about me. That's ALL I'm gonna say about that.
Date: 10/27/09 07:40 pm Title: Severing the Ties
Best scene si far
U're really talented
Author's Response: Wow! Thank you so much! I really appreciate that. <3
Date: 10/27/09 07:09 pm Title: Severing the Ties
aaaw -.- u have to update soon!! I want to know what happens next
Author's Response: I'll update as soon as I can.
Date: 10/27/09 06:28 pm Title: Severing the Ties
you are going to get them back together very quickly right? I hope so!!
Author's Response: Ummmmm.... Wellll........ I hope so, too...
Date: 10/27/09 06:22 pm Title: Severing the Ties
oh no! what a tangled web xxx
Author's Response: :) Thanks for reviewing! <3
Date: 10/23/09 03:47 pm Title: Flying
UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!
Author's Response: It's about halfway done! :) Soon, I promise! <3
Date: 10/03/09 12:09 pm Title: Flying
lmao poor Tomi...I need more of this fic soon =D xxx
Author's Response: Thank you! I have a few more fics to update, but this one will NEVER be forgotten. :)
Date: 09/29/09 11:55 pm Title: Flying
Ah Ha!! Poor Tom (^_^)
Author's Response: ;D Thanks for the review!
Date: 09/28/09 01:22 am Title: Flying
Bill telling Tom all the details because he just can't help himself...that would be awesome. I like this story a lot!
Author's Response: Thank you. And that's how I image Bill is. Waaaaay over-the-top and unable to control himself. XD
Date: 09/28/09 12:11 am Title: Flying
lol, I snorted a lot in the chapter, just because of Tom. I giggled when the couch tipped over. Just because, idk, I found it horribly hysterical. lol, poor poor Tomi. lol, lovely job hun, fun chapter XD
Author's Response: :D Thank you! I liked the couch thing, too. XD
Date: 09/27/09 08:50 pm Title: Flying
haha.:).
Author's Response: Ummmmm.... thanks? o.O
Date: 09/27/09 06:37 pm Title: Flying
ooh, the fucking,
ahahahahahahahaha
ok, so only sex, huh?((((((
damn! what shoulf Bu do to make him think with his heart?!?!?!?!? huh?
doesn't he feel anything? or he'll understand when he loses Bu?
thank you for the long awaited update
xxx
Author's Response: You're very welcome. And you'll figure out how it'll be resolved soon. Only two or three more chapters left until it's over! :)
Date: 09/26/09 11:26 pm Title: Flying
Oh poor Tomi... but lucky Bill! Gah! So smexy right there! I am officially Billshido smut addict, and you just fed the fire! More please [insert puppy dog eyes here]!
Author's Response: I'm glad I could pass on the Billshido love. :) More soon. This fic is almost done, though. Only two or three more chapters left.