Date: 03/05/23 10:43 pm Title: Up Bill's Skirt
So as I've mentioned on other reviews, I came into the TH and THF game late - the vast majority of stories I've read are over a decade old and I'm sure the authors have moved way on, and probably wont even see new reviews, BUT, why not shoot one over anyway.... OMG this was a roller-coaster! The back and forth between them with who's sure of themselves, and who falters, each taking a turn with the high ground. Then the will he/wont he of Tom forcing Bill or not, gah! Then Tom giving up the bravado, just so good!
Date: 11/28/15 10:34 pm Title: Up Bill's Skirt
Can't believe I've never reviewed this before - well, it's absolutely amazing. Such a good read. Ahhhhhh, seriously. great job! :D
Date: 03/09/12 07:21 am Title: Up Bill's Skirt
I read this fic again just now. I'm so in love with this story. Gah! Love it so much! :)
Date: 11/25/11 12:39 am Title: Up Bill's Skirt
THIS STORY IS AMAZING!!!!!! I swear I think I've read this before, a few years ago I bet. I LOVE THIS STORY.
It has everything good twincest can possibly have, no joke... you have angst, self doubt, twin bond, twin brotherlyness, whole ton of sexiness, bunch of taboo and naughtyness, a bit of crossdressing for Bill, funny parts with the G's.... and not only that, but the writing is really good too! Everything is perfect IMO! I'm so in love with this fic. I think I could read it another 100 times and it would still be good.
Thanks so much for writing an awesome fic like this!! Well done. :) :) :)
Date: 04/03/11 09:55 pm Title: Up Bill's Skirt
Blew my mind away!!!
In love with this fic!!!
Thanks for sharing!!!
Date: 01/07/11 09:20 pm Title: Up Bill's Skirt
Haha that was awesome! :D
Date: 10/14/09 05:22 pm Title: Up Bill's Skirt
LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOVE IT!
Date: 08/11/09 02:32 pm Title: Up Bill's Skirt
xD I loved it!! :D I wish so hard to watch such a scene xD
xx Chi ^^
Date: 07/27/09 04:51 pm Title: Up Bill's Skirt
Oh wow...O___O I have no words for this. It's more than amazing! You describe everything so well! The feelings, the sex, the construction of the story. I love the combination of pure smut vs. the bond between the twins. Just wow. Definitely saved as a favourite.
Date: 07/24/09 05:57 pm Title: Up Bill's Skirt
Where can I buy that needy begging Tom? :D It was awesome, it was really long and it made my uhm... Friday night great ;D
Date: 07/02/09 05:04 am Title: Up Bill's Skirt
okay... where to began... first that was great... the * dress up* was good... i love the black lace things... i was hopping tom would walk in... and that was good... the sex was amazing... only thing... leading in... a few doubts is natural... but like that had to have been almost a whole page ... so maybe next not so much... all in all that was good... very good... im adding it to favorites for future reading... and i never do that with one shots.... so feel good... hope you write more soon... i think you should write a 2nd part.... making bill top tom....
Author's Response: Thank you! Well, we wrote a lot about Bill having doubts because we didn't want to rush it. Just imagine having someone you're not supposed to have feeling for begging you to have a relationship with them. You're bound to have doubts. So we made Bill doubt a few times before giving in to Tom. And this is a one-shot, so no second part. Sorry! But thank you for reading and reviewing.
Date: 07/02/09 01:39 am Title: Up Bill's Skirt
naah aah being gay isnt thaaat bad AT ALL
and with those damn hot scene u guys put on my mind
maaaan, tonight im gonna have the best dreams ever
i can feel it HAHAHAHAHAHA
fuckin' hot, im still speechless
Author's Response: LOL we're so glad you liked it! We hope you have awesome dreams, we sure had a lot of fun day-dreaming about it lol. Gracias for reading and reviewing!
Date: 07/01/09 02:44 am Title: Up Bill's Skirt
Denial. What's to do with this? *sighs*
OMG!!! Finally!!!
I swear when I read the title it was like.. mhhmm..reminds me of something... and then I read the authors and I was like "OMFG!! IT'S FINISHED, IT'S FINISHED!!!"
And then I read it and omg: You don't know how much I love those dirty mind of yours. Both of you. Though I only know Vale =P
I swear when that part or Bill seeing himself in the mirror, I was freakin out, I was completely hysterical.
But I really wonder if Bill *actually* ever tried woman underwear. Guess we'll never know *sigh*
And Tom is kinda creepy o.o... I mean, he seems like... obsessed. Poor him, though, having to restrain himself with such a god next to him.
But, omg, it was so worth the waiting. Definitely goes to my favs =)
Love you, Vale =*
And You, Ana, though I don't even know you, but Vale loves you so I like you x)
And I don't even know why I'm talking in english. I missed it, though. I have nobody to speak it with, now that I'm here in Valdivia =(
ok, this got so out of the point. SoI'm saying bye. Besides, it's almost three in the morning and I have to wake at 6.30 tomorrow D:
Yes, ok, *now* I am going. Seriously. I'm not lying. I'm leaving...
I don't want toooo T.T
Ok, I drop it. Or I'll never makeit to classes tomorrow
G'bye!!
Kizuu!! =***
ps. kinda long the rr, huh? xD
Author's Response: LOOOL. Dude, you're totally awesome xD We're glad you thought it was good. I'm sorry I enticed you so much and took so long to finish it xD But you see, it was worth it, y/n? rnrnLong reviews are the best, but Vale replying to them and trying to write same length replies is hard haha. rnrnSo yes, just gonna keep this short and simple. I LOVE YOU, YOU'RE AWESOME and thanks for taking the time to read this looooong story and reviewing! MWAH.
Date: 06/30/09 11:25 pm Title: Up Bill's Skirt
First of all: that was the longest one-shot I've ever read. And it was spectacular. I'm not kidding. Lots of twincest one-shots are very quick to get to the action and have a lot of strong emotions that seem to pop out of nowhere, but this story took the time to develop them. No joke. When you decided to have Bill question it, then go for it, then question it again, it was pretty damn realistic. I mean, people don't always decide to go all the way through right away. And Tom...at first I thought he was just going to get horny and fuck his brother, but the whole conversation and realization thing you had, along with his actions, made his character so believable. I'm also glad it was all from Bill's point of view and that it was about his discovery. It gave the story a better base, I felt and turned it into something outside of just another twincest one-shot. Their characters remained very consistent and there weren't any cliche moments when I knew exactly what was going to follow simply because you had a character enter a room a certain way or say a certain line. I had to read the whole thing to really take it in. I feel ridiculous for writing such a long review for a twincest one-shot, but seriously, this was so amazing and that's how I feel about it. Well written and well done in my opinion.
Author's Response: Wow, that was the best review we've ever gotten! Thank you so much! We're so glad you liked it so much. We hope the length isn't a bad thing. We wanted to develop their feelings and what happened thoroughly, and though we wanted this to be a short one-shot smut story, we ended up writing 15,000 words. But we're happy with the result!rnrnWe wanted to avoid the cliches, so reading you say we did so, puts a smile on our faces! rnrnThank you so much again, fellow Javey lover :D
Date: 06/30/09 02:16 pm Title: Up Bill's Skirt
That was SO amazing! Seriously! You guys are so good at this! Keep up the good work! *0*
You've got a fan here! *bows*
Author's Response: Wow, thank you SO much! And don't bow, we just write from the bottom of our dirty minds lol! Thank you so much for reviewing :D
Date: 06/30/09 11:51 am Title: Up Bill's Skirt
Wow... *runs off to take a cold shower*
Author's Response: LOL! We needed one, too after writing this. Thanks for reviewing! ^^
Date: 06/30/09 10:59 am Title: Up Bill's Skirt
So sexy!
Author's Response: Thank you! Glad you think so ^^
Date: 06/30/09 10:13 am Title: Up Bill's Skirt
awesomeness.... geeeil! :D
Author's Response: Danke! :D Glad you liked ^^
Date: 06/30/09 09:14 am Title: Up Bill's Skirt
Oh dear gawd that was some sexy smut!! I'm definitely gunna read this again. Gawd dammit, gots me huffing and panting. Delicious!!!!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! We're so glad you liked it :D And that was the response we wanted to get lol!
Date: 06/30/09 05:30 am Title: Up Bill's Skirt
UHM.......
I really think this was like so fucking amazingly sexy and hot and ugh.
*Goes to change underwear.*
Author's Response: LOL that's what we're here for, writing hot smut :D We're glad you liked it :)