Date: 11/17/09 10:18 pm Title: Up in the Air
:D :D :D :D :D
i can only imagine.
Awesome chapter!
Date: 11/17/09 10:10 pm Title: Explaination..
Idk what Bill will think..
Hes very unpredictable.
But cute. XD
Anyways, you did a great job!. :P
Date: 11/17/09 10:04 pm Title: Don't Jump
0_______0
Hooly sheeeeeeeet.
Just.. Whoa.
The Dont Jump scene was cute. :)
Poor Raven.
Date: 11/17/09 09:53 pm Title: Punishment
Ouuuuch.
Bill and Tom are devils! XD
Im officially hooked to this.
Date: 11/17/09 09:44 pm Title: Bought...
Like it?
I fxcking loved it.
Usually, I dont really favor multi-pov stories,
but this one is.. magnificent:)
Date: 11/17/09 09:32 pm Title: Trapped
Whoa.
I really. Freaking loved it. C:
Author's Response: I'm so glad you love it!rn
Date: 10/11/09 06:40 am Title: Trapped
new reader i love the story and bill has a sex freak to what ever happened to sweet little bill lol i love it
Author's Response: hehe
Date: 10/06/09 11:53 pm Title: Six Tickets to Leipzig
update soon...i NEED more drama!!
I CRAVE IT!!
=D
btw...i loved it...again
=)
Author's Response: X3 I'll try to add more drama! X3 rnGlad you love it!
Date: 10/05/09 08:01 pm Title: Six Tickets to Leipzig
omg i love this story!!! its the best combination of tokio hotel, sex, vampires, blood and rock n roll! its amazing!
Author's Response: Thanks, I'm glad you like it!
Date: 10/04/09 05:29 pm Title: Six Tickets to Leipzig
xD
AWESOME!
Author's Response: Danke!
Date: 10/04/09 04:50 pm Title: Six Tickets to Leipzig
update faster
Author's Response: Will try!
Date: 10/04/09 08:14 am Title: Six Tickets to Leipzig
i really dunno what to say about this story...i don't mean to cause offence but i've gone from loving it to kinda disliking it.
the major change in Ravens character disapointed me a little, and now it seems that it's turning from a 'dark vampish' storie into a 'happy go lucky' type of storie.
what i did like about this story at first, was that the idea that you had seemed original and wasn't like the other stories that i usually read, your stalker storie, for example, was a brillinat idea, i understand that you ran out of muse and i like that you can think outside the box, cause honestly many stories that i've read are mostly the same damn things.
You're writing qualities and imagination are exceedingly clever and original but i'm not really liking were this ones going :-(
On the otherhand, i will look forward to reading your halloween oneshot about Tom XD
Have a nice Halloween :-)
Author's Response: I know.... As for my stalker story, I was going to bring that one back when I finish this one. But, I'll try to make this like it was before! X3 Hopefully, I can make it into that again.rn
Date: 10/04/09 12:38 am Title: Trapped
liked this chapter so it didn't suck at all..........
Author's Response: I'm glad!
Date: 10/04/09 12:36 am Title: Six Tickets to Leipzig
I love it, i can't wait till you post the next chapter. this might sound weriod but i want to know what Raven's punishment is. Post more soon.
Author's Response: Hehe it's not weird. I think everyone might be curious.
Date: 10/03/09 10:41 am Title: Trapped
I hope so to that you update before halloween hahah because that's end of this month and we are in the beginning of october :-) hope your writersblock will be over soon..............
Author's Response: X3 I'll try and I have an idea for a Tom oneshot for Halloween! So, be on the look out for that too!
Date: 09/26/09 05:08 pm Title: Naughty Boys
did it have to end now!?!? khh what.a tease. *sigh*
Author's Response: No, it's still going. It's just I have a Writers block... But, the next part should be up soon! Hopefully before halloween!
Date: 09/26/09 04:18 pm Title: Surprises just keep on coming..
what are you complaining about,Raven!?
First this Raven is being a total slut.. THEN she runs away.. and now she's complaining that the sexiest twins on earth have powerful desire for her..
That girl's not even messed up.. She's dumb!!
Besides.. I disagree on Bill and Tom fighting.. I mean.. they barely KNOW her.. they've met each other like a week ago.. and they've pretty much had no decent conversations at all.. SO it doesn't make that much sense for such inseparable twins to fight over a girl they barely have a clue about .. Even if they always make up in the end..
I dunno.. make her smarter and more sexy.. Not innocent and vulnerable.. But witty and inventive ^_^ It will contribute a lot to her character.
Author's Response: I know that in real life Tom and Bill would get to know the girl more and start liking her. But, there is such a thing as Love at First sight. Raven's just a bit on the naive side to realize it. As for the Sluttiness... Let just say I get carried away sometimes. X3rnrnAnd I will try to make her smart and a bit more sexy. But, the Twins (In my head) keep telling me to make her seem innocent.
Date: 09/22/09 01:23 am Title: Naughty Boys
Awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: X3 Danke!
Date: 09/20/09 09:43 pm Title: Naughty Boys
hot damn!!
wow...that was freakin sexy!
lol
i loved it!!
update soon!!
=D
Author's Response: X3
Date: 09/20/09 09:20 pm Title: Half-way into the MHC
I LOVED IT!! You MUST make more scenes like that.. you know.. violent.. you can also include some hardcore rape while she is sleeping.. well.. it wouldn't be hardcore if she wasn't awake.. but eh.. the hardcore part usually begins AFTER she wakes up!! OOH! I can totally get the picture!! WWEEHAH! tadaatata tum du dudududum *dances in excitement and anticipation*
Author's Response: X3 You know, I've never thought of that.. Hmm..