Date: 07/19/09 06:10 pm Title: Chapter 1
Lovely!
I really liked the build-up.
From Bill's thinking, to why he's thinking, then the confrontation with Gustav and last but not least the adorable result of the thinking and confronting.
Nice work!
Date: 07/01/09 10:52 am Title: Chapter 1
Tom couldn't help noticing how Bill was a rock of stillness in the midst of complete chaos. Since Bill usually was the chaos this struck him as very odd. – hum?!
When Bill sat quietly just thinking rather than throwing ideas at anyone who would listen, it was usually big. – what kind of big?
They all knew Bill's habits, but it was Tom's job to deal with them. – ha ha
"Thinking deep thoughts?" Tom asked as Bill turned back and looked at Gustav again.
"I think so," Bill replied, sounding not quite sure. "I've been noticing things."
"What kind of things?" Tom asked, knowing that when Bill was in this sort of mood a straight answer was not something that was easily found.
Bill made a quiet humming sound to himself as if thinking about that.
"Gustav things," was Bill's enigmatic reply. - *giggles* awh
He had picked up Gustav's phone by mistake and Gustav had clearly been sorting his photos. Bill knew he was nosy, he couldn't help it, and he'd had to peek and he'd found an entire directory of just him. There were directories for Georg and Tom as well, but theirs had a couple of funny candid shots in them, his directory had loads. - *squiges up nose* so cute!!!
"Juschtel," he said, watching very carefully, "how do you feel about me?"
He could actually see the mental eye roll and realised that Gustav thought he was looking for some reassurance. – lol
"No, Juschtel," he said calmly and seriously, "how do you really feel about me?" - *giggles*
"I like you, Bill," Gustav said eventually, sounding as if he was signing his own death warrant, "I like you a lot. More than I should. I'm sorry, I didn't meant to freak you out." – awh!!!
"Do you love me, Juschtel?" he asked simply and seemed to manage to catch Gustav completely off guard again.
Gustav just sat there staring at him and then swallowed hard.
"Yes," was the quiet but firm response. - *squiges up nose* awh!!
Then he leant forward and gently put his lips against Gustav's, giving the lightest of kisses before pulling back.
"Think about it too and then come talk to me," he said, not expecting a sensible reaction out of Gustav quite so soon after such a big shock. – awh!
"I don't need to think," was what Gustav said, "kiss me again and I'll show you."
Bill beamed at that and did as he was asked and the way Gustav's arms wound around him possessively and the kiss went from light to passionate in little more than a heartbeat set his soul on fire. He didn't need to think anymore either. - *squiges up nose* awh!! Soooo cute!!!!
This wasn't just big, it was huge and he had to reassess several things he had thought were unshakable facts in his universe.
No one said anything, clearly as stunned as he was and then Bill and Gustav broke apart and he heard the most amazing sound. Bill laughed, a light, delighted sound that was so full of joy Tom felt his heart burst with it even as he heard it. – awh!!!! I can see butterflies and hearts in the air around Tom lol
He was already mentally rehearsing the speech about Bill's heart and Gustav's balls and how their relative condition was now irrevocably linked, but he was going to save that up until he had Gustav alone. – lol!!!
Date: 06/28/09 05:39 pm Title: Chapter 1
Wow, amazing. Its great to see you writing again, it was amazing. XOXOXOXOXO
Date: 06/28/09 04:41 pm Title: Chapter 1
A very sweet, and romantic fic!! I like so much when Bill interrogate Gusti!! And calling him Jüschtel is so sweet!! Thank you so much for sharing!!
Date: 06/28/09 04:41 pm Title: Chapter 1
A very sweet, and romantic fic!! I like so much when Bill interrogate Gusti!! And calling him Jüschtel is so sweet!! Thank you so much for sharing!!
Date: 06/28/09 04:36 pm Title: Chapter 1
Awwwww!! That was so sweet!!
Tom at the end made me LOL. He's such a good older brother, haha!!
