Date: 08/07/17 02:11 pm Title: Drei
I just read this today and I'm so upset that you haven't updated since 2009.. it could have been such a great story.
Date: 07/30/09 01:43 pm Title: Drei
Oh, that's creepy. 0.0 I imagined the car chase perfectly. ^-^ I really liked it.
I'm glad you updated again. :)
Author's Response: Thank you =) I meant for the car chase to be a little longer, but I was falling asleep! I can tell you though that all hell is about to break loose.
Date: 07/30/09 12:57 pm Title: Drei
The suspense is building. I'm getting really nervous for them. I hope that they can stop these guys soon, but I have a feeling something is going to happen to them first. I like Tom wonder what happened that these people are fallowing them. It would make sence to be one of the boyfriends of the stalker girls. Idk maybe it's something more. Update soon. I want to know what happens.
Author's Response: Thank you so much asahi. I always look forward to your reviews because they are about as interesting to me as you find my story! I'll tell you this: you have part of it right. Just wait another chapter or two, and you'll know what I mean.
Date: 06/29/09 10:00 pm Title: Zwei
Holy crap. This definitely has got me sitting on the edge of my seat. That guy and phone call was uber creepy. I is scared for Billa and Tomi. The others too. *shivers*
Cant wait for the next part. =D
Author's Response: Wow, thank you! I know, I was freakin out when I was writing about the phone call. And then I was scared to go downstairs cause it was the middle of the night XD
Date: 06/29/09 05:59 pm Title: Zwei
Coffee would be good, but now complaints though. It's getting really good. and I can't wait to read what happens next. Update soon:)
Author's Response: Mmm I had an iced coffee when I posted the chapter =) I'm glad you like it, and I hope you continue to like it =)
Date: 06/29/09 03:15 pm Title: Zwei
Just finished reading the two chapters. *.* Oh. I really like this! I got a shiver right at the part that described how it got dark out, because I couldn’t help but think, Guh! Imagine walking around an empty house at night after that! Creepy stuff. *nod nod*
Can’t wait to read more! And 2000 isn’t that short. ;)
Author's Response: Thank You!!!!!!!! I know, that would give me the creeps, being in my house alone at night with some guy threatening to do horrible things...and I wrote that chapter in the middle of the night too. I was half-expecting a guy with a hockey mask and a machete to jump out of my closet.
Date: 06/29/09 12:12 pm Title: Zwei
great story so far. I'm really enjoying it.
Author's Response: Ooh thank you! Reviews make me happy =) At first I didn't think anyone would like it, but proved me wrong =D
Date: 06/29/09 11:38 am Title: Zwei
Ahh I love creepy stories! I look forward to more of this one. :D
Author's Response: Yeah, I actually scared the crap out of myself while I was writing it (it was like 2 A.M. when I was writing the part with the creepy voicemail)...and then I went downstairs and I had to turn on all the lights because I was scared there would be a murderer or something down there XD Thanks for the review *does happy dance*
Date: 06/28/09 01:50 pm Title: Eins
Aah it's gooood, do continue. please?
Author's Response: Ok =D At least npw I know I'm not wasting anyone's time =D Thank you!!!!
Date: 06/28/09 12:19 pm Title: Eins
Oooh scary:( A scary white jeep withe scary guy. I'm curious now and want to read more. Update soon.
Author's Response: Thank you! I guess I'll have to start writing chapter 2 now =D