Date: 07/02/09 08:18 am Title: A Safe Place
Poor Tom :( He's got so much on his little shoulders. He's caring for Bill, but he needs to be cared for to.
I hope he learns to trust Simone and Gordon so that he can let them comfort him, and share the responsibilities of looking after for Bill.
It was nice to see things from the kits point of view. It's brings them more into the story as characters in their own right.
Author's Response: He's taking all the weight! In a way I think it's what Tom needs, to hold himself together. He's slower to trust than Bill but I have faith in the Trumpers. We're going to gradually ease into seeing a lot more from the kits' point of view, glad you liked.
Date: 07/02/09 06:58 am Title: A Safe Place
Bless Tom's heart. He's putting so much on himself to be so little. He's gonna crack under the strain. I'm worried about him. :(
Author's Response: He's gonna give himself a heart attack by the time he's ten, I swear. He's definitely the worrier. But he DOES have Bill, and that's all he needs to stay on an even keel!
Date: 07/01/09 04:25 pm Title: They're Not Human
plz update sooon thx=]
Author's Response: Updated! =D
Date: 07/01/09 07:52 am Title: They're Not Human
Uh oh Gordon, you better watch them little ones. Baha! Love that he can't even fathom what the guard is talking about. :D
Author's Response: He'll be watchin'! He doesn't know what he's watching for yet, but he's watching! And it's not, you know, most peoples' first thought, so... understandable. =D
Date: 07/01/09 04:19 am Title: They're Not Human
I really don't have much to say except that I read every new chapter. This is very good and interesting. Original plot, nice to read something new.
Interesting to know what will happen after a couple of years even though I can quess.
Keep up the good work!
xx
Author's Response: Thanks so much for reading! I'm so happy you're enjoying it, and very pleased to hear you think it's original. It's going to take us a bit to get through those couple of years... I tagged it "epic fic is epic" on my journal and I've got years' worth of development outlined. They ate my brain, I swear! Hope you continue to enjoy.
Date: 07/01/09 02:07 am Title: They're Not Human
Well, I have to say that this information is interesting. It's nice to know a little more about the Youko aside from the fact that they are incredibly cute when little and beautiful when older. This cultural aspect is what will validate the twins reactions when older so it isn't just oh the twins are in love. There is actually justification to some point.
I love your story and i want to read more. The detail is clear so far and it has a nice flow. Update soon:)
Author's Response: Yup, the world-building is coming through, in bits and pieces. And there are definitely major cultural differences between youko and humans. I'm so pleased you're enjoying it! I've been having so much fun working on it and there's lots more to come.
Date: 07/01/09 12:44 am Title: They're Not Human
oh i can't wait for gordon to find out what the man meant. i love the story, please,PLEASE! update soon.
Author's Response: Heh... well, it's going to be a bit. ;) Thanks so much, glad you're enjoying! And, regular updates are on their way for a bit.
Date: 06/30/09 12:34 pm Title: The End of the Name Game
Gah they are just too damn freaking cute! "I come first, I'm older" bahaha! Love it, I think little Tom is my favorite. Forgot to add to favorites, but I'm taking care of that right now! Love how quickly this is updated!
Author's Response: Too cute for me! They slay me. Aw, Tomi's gotten to you, huh? Thank you for adding to your favorites! ♥ More updates to come!
Date: 06/30/09 01:06 am Title: The End of the Name Game
Aww YAY!!! They finally talked and let Simone know their names. This is so cute and I know I keep saying it, but really it is. Please update soon. I want to read more.
Author's Response: They finally talked! Poor traumatized darlings. Thanks, I'm so happy you think they're cute - I totally agree. A good sign, right? More updates coming!
Date: 06/30/09 12:05 am Title: The End of the Name Game
When I came to the site I was actually hoping this fic had been updated. That's gotta be a good sign, right? ;)
Damn if those twins aren't the cutest things. I keep imagining them snuggled up under their tails together, lol.
Also love how quickly this is being updated. It's so much easier to really get into a story this way.
Looking foward to next chapter :)
Author's Response: It's a good sign for me! =D I'm happy you're looking forward to updates, and hope to continue to give you something to look forward to! Snuggly twins are the best, they are too adorable. I have plenty of parts still lined up ready to post, so I should be able to keep updating on a regular basis for a while. =) Thanks!
Date: 06/29/09 05:49 pm Title: Scream
Aww poor babies. One of them had a nightmare. At least they knew Simone would take care of them. The twins are so cute in this. So tiny and scared but really cute how they take care of eachother. Update soon.
Author's Response: They are my poor babies. But Simone is looking out for them. Thanks for your review, I think I'll post another part tonight.
Date: 06/29/09 04:28 pm Title: Scream
I like your story. It sounds very interesting and you write very well. I enjoyed reading your writing.
Curious to know what will happen :)
xx
Author's Response: Thank you very much! I've gotten really into this idea and I'm happy that others are becoming interested as well. I appreciate the compliment.rnrnWe will see soon where things go! ;) Thanks for your review.
Date: 06/29/09 04:17 pm Title: Scream
That they were what? Did it cut off? Where's the rest...*searches in vain* :D
Author's Response: Argh, it did cut off!! Thanks for letting me know. I've edited it to add what got cut off.
Date: 06/29/09 04:11 pm Title: Playing the Frets
I love how you're taking your time with the trust in this story. It's not rushed at all and I'm glad. The twins are adorable and Tom is too cute with his protectiveness. Love it!
Author's Response: I did my best to develop things gradually. =) I'm glad it shows. The twins totally get me with their cuteness, I'm glad I'm not the only one! Thanks so much for your review.
Date: 06/29/09 03:06 pm Title: Enter the Trumpers of Leroux
Oh my God, they couldn't sound cuter if you tried. I have no idea what a youku is but now I want one. I'm glad I tried this story out, moving on to the next chapter now. Bless their little hearts.
Author's Response: I could try, but I think they do most of the work themselves! Bits and pieces about what youko are will be sprinkled throughout the story, I didn't want to go too heavy on the info dump in the first chapter. Very glad you gave this a try! Thanks for your review.
Date: 06/28/09 06:06 pm Title: Playing the Frets
Awww They are coming around finally. This is so creative and cute. I think its fun how Simone is trying to guess their names. Tom is so cute in this. the way he protects his brother. Please keep going I want to read more and see how they progress. Update soon:)
Author's Response: They are, but it takes some time, poor kits! Hee, you can totally tell which is Tom, right? Thanks for reviewing! I will update pretty regularly at least for a while.
Date: 06/28/09 04:01 pm Title: Playing the Frets
This is kinda weird for me. If I'm honest, this is not the type of fic I'd give attention to - as in fantasy / furries etc.
But I found this quite interesting and the twins are awfully cute, lol. I'm going to keep reading anyway. I've enjoyed it so far :)
Author's Response: Don't worry about saying so, I know it's not everyone's cup of tea. :) Thanks for giving it a chance anyhow. I do hope you continue to enjoy it and I appreciate your review!
Date: 06/28/09 02:28 am Title: Enter the Trumpers of Leroux
This is fun and creative, I like it. The twins are half human correct? They are fairy type beings but with tails and not wings? Or do the twins not have tails since their mother was human? I like this and want to read more. I feel that the twins are not furries so this warning is not needed. Please update soon. I want to know more about them and how this story plays out.
Author's Response: Thank you! I get into it in an upcoming chapter, but although the twins have a human mother they are fully youko. It has to do with the peculiarities of youko reproduction. They have fox ears and tails, but no wings.rnrnMore updated! This is going to be a long WIP, so bear with me. I really appreciate your review!
Date: 06/28/09 02:28 am Title: Enter the Trumpers of Leroux
I'm so pleased to see this up on here - I only hope people give it the attention it deserves ♥
Author's Response: Thank you again for your encouragement! =) We'll see how it goes, I guess... this is pretty different.