Date: 07/21/09 08:40 pm Title: Piercing
Oh no, he actually bit her. I want to pet his little head. He's going to keep lashing out and not understanding why isn't he...poor Tomi. But wow on the protective streak. Go Tom! Lol.
I wish you could post the next chapter now too! Lol
Author's Response: I know, it's startling. Poor Tom! His protective instincts are definitely on overdrive. And, next chapter is up!
Date: 07/21/09 08:36 pm Title: Piercing
Ack, poor Tom!!! *cuddles*
Author's Response: I think cuddles are definitely in order. If you can catch him.
Date: 07/21/09 12:18 pm Title: Notes
it was a bit odd.,
but i liked it a lot.
great job on this.
Author's Response: I know it's quite different - I'm pleased you enjoy it anyhow! Thanks for your review. =)
Date: 07/21/09 11:40 am Title: Notes
Ah, it's already over? I don't wanna wait for more chapters...
You're amazing. I can't wait for updates!!!
Author's Response: *grins* Yep, you're caught up, sorry... I will keep trying to turn out at least a chapter a week, though; no worries! Thanks, I'm blushing!
Date: 07/21/09 09:41 am Title: Twin Beds for Twins
Aww, they are so sweet. I love how you portray their love for each other. It feels so real and natural, as if there really couldn't be any other way.
Wow, i'm so amazed by this. I feel like i'm repeating myself but I don't know what else to say... you are an incredible story teller and this is just brilliant.
Thank you for sharing! It deserves to be read and loved and I hope more people will find it now that it's featured.
Author's Response: Thank you, I'm really pleased that it comes across that way! Your saying that really lets me know I'm doing it right, because that's what I'm aiming for. ♥
So glad you're continuing to enjoy, and I really appreciate your review!
Date: 07/21/09 08:09 am Title: Musical Aptitude
The twins are adooorable. I love them.
This universe is magical and I find myself completely absorbed. As i said, I never want it to end! You are amazing.
Author's Response: Yay, thank you! I'm so pleased everyone loves them. ♥ And to hear what you think about my universe makes me really very happy. That is one of the best compliments a writer can get!
Date: 07/21/09 06:59 am Title: Feeling Changes
I never want this to end.
I adore this. It's the best I've ever read.
Author's Response: I feel the same way and don't worry; we've got a long road ahead of us with this one. =) Thank you so much. That is the most amazing praise.
Date: 07/20/09 04:59 pm Title: The End of the Name Game
I am so glad this was featured and that I gave it a try. It's worth it and I'm already in love with the whole thing. I love your writing style, I love the characters and I love the setting. I'm so curious of how it's going to develope!
So very good and I'm happy there's several more chapters left before I'll have to wait for updates.
Thank you!!
Author's Response: I was so incredibly surprised and flattered to find it featured! Very pleased that you gave it a try, also. I am so, so happy that people like this story so much. It's totally my pet project right now and I'm very much enjoying working on it. Even once you're caught up I plan on keeping the updates regular! Thanks for your review.
Date: 07/20/09 01:34 pm Title: Firsts
aw!they're adorable!Wonder how their "powers" will manifest themselves ...
I know there are some chapters left for me to read,but i miss Vardunzel ;___; He had a playful personality,very likable.I loved reading about him and his mate(who seems to have a strong persnality and make the other man stand on his knees lol!They sounded so in love)
Author's Response: Glad they are so cute! We'll get into the powers later, much later. (And I'll give you a little spoiler - Vardunzel WILL come back into the story, but much MUCH later. I really enjoyed him too, he's one of those minor characters who grabbed himself a bigger role than I intended.) Thanks for your review!
Date: 07/20/09 10:44 am Title: Enter the Trumpers of Leroux
Oh my - I stumbled upon this on the featured fic and it is adorable, I am only up to chapter 3 so I have lots more wonderful reading ahead of me, but so far your world is wonderfully described and filled.
Author's Response: I'm very glad that you found it and pleased to hear you think so! Thanks so much for your review and I hope you continue to enjoy the story.
Date: 07/20/09 09:49 am Title: Modesty and New Things
“Kidnap us?” Bill screeched. “Don't you mean youko-nap? Aha, or 'kit-nap!'”
BWAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!! I laughed so hard! still do LAWL!!!hahahaha!!! that was hilarious!
Author's Response: *grins* Definitely had fun with that part! My cute lil' kits.
Date: 07/20/09 03:33 am Title: They're Not Human
"We're mates, Briyen calls it. You've gotta be Bonded to have kits, if you're two guys.”"
Love that sentence! hehe!I love the idea ;)
I am reading this since last night but i was in my bed and the frce to type left me lol!Now I'm in my office for my traineeship and look where I go XD Reading a fanfic!haha!I can't help it it's so addictive!people don't cease to recommend it and umetnica's fanart dedicated to this was gorgeous!I'm sorry I didn't left many reviews till now, but like I always say, masterpieces don't deserve crapy reviews.I will not let many either till I reach the last chapter posted.I'm sorry too about that, but I promise to let you know every few chapters what I think about it.After all,if you post it, it's to have opinions,and seriously,it's the least I can do to thank you for this. Now, english is not my mothertongue, and i am still learning.I wish I was a native to give a proper review with all the good and bad criticism and stuff.Well,I can do that now, but most of the time i sound like an idiot because I learned most of my english in forums,and the speech there is not the most proper lol!
I continue!
Author's Response: Heh heh, a bit of exposition. He was a good character to help out with that! I'm happy people recommended it to you, that makes me so delighted to hear. Umetnica's fanart for this is phenomenal, I can't praise it enough! Hey, I'm glad you're reviewing, every single one matters, believe me. Thank you for reading and letting me know what you think. :)
Date: 07/19/09 10:33 pm Title: Notes
I adore this. :)
Author's Response: Thank you, I am so pleased! =D
Date: 07/19/09 05:31 pm Title: Notes
Now, that's what the Feature is for. I would never have clicked on this story, i have to admit, had it not been featured, but how glad I am that I did! This story is amazing and deserves a whole lot more of reviews. I hope people will start to take notice and give it the appreciation it deserves. Until then, I'm here and I'll be waiting anxiously for each and every update! I must tell you how incredibly good I find your writing style. You have a real gift for storytelling, the kind of storytelling which is a slow current drifting towards its goal unperturbed. You take your time and you enjoy it. The way you build up this story will make everything that is to come between the twins even more exciting, more sensual, more satisfying. But the real proof of your mastery is that although I can't wait to see the physical side of their relationship to develop, I'm not in a hurry. I can't get enough of this amazing world you have created. And the way you portray the twins, their dependence on each other, the love that connect them...one of the best portrayals I have ever read.
Congratulations.
You have won an admirer.
Please, update soon!!!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for giving this story a chance! I was so stunned and pleased to wake up and find this featured. I really appreciate the compliments, I'm so glad to hear your opinions of my style and pacing. I am very much enjoying the writing process for this, and taking my time with it - so I'm glad it's coming across that way, that you're enjoying how it is now while looking forward to what's to come. I very much hope that you continue to enjoy, and thank you for this fantastic review!
Date: 07/19/09 05:02 am Title: Notes
♥ Very chuffed for you, like I said. This fic is awesome and deserves the feature. Hopefully you'll pick up new readers now! Enjoyed this chapter, like always. I like the way Bill's singing has been introduced; it's gorgeous to have their love of music running through such a different world.
Author's Response: Thank you! ♥ I hope so, too. I'm still a bit worried simply because it's going to be so LONG, and usually people lose readers over the course of a long WIP, but I hope it will be a strong enough story to hold most peoples' attention. =) Thanks! The music is definitely very much a part of them both.
Date: 07/19/09 03:01 am Title: Notes
ohhhhhhh *_*
I adoooored that ending. you're right, they're getting there!!
Author's Response: *grins* Slowly but surely... Thanks for your review!
Date: 07/18/09 10:06 pm Title: Notes
First of all - congratulations on being featured! You deserve it :)
Lol, the first part of this chapter reminded me of when my brother and sister were born. Twins certainly bring a special kind of chaos with them! ;)
The kits just get more and more adorable as this goes on. I really like how you continue to work their grief into the plot. So many stories move quickly on from horrific situations, but here it's so realisitic, in that it would obviously continue to affect them.
I've always found it hard to relate to fantasy type fics, but this world you've created is so well written that no effort at all is needed to be drawn into it. It's automatic.
Oh, and once more for the record - the twins are totally ADORABLE!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I was surprised but soooo happy to wake up and see that on the home page. ^_^ I'm reliably informed by a twin acquaintance that twins = four times the mess. I'm so pleased they're still coming across so adorably! And, yep, the grief definitely continues to play a part in their lives. It will take them awhile, you know?
Thanks so much! I'm really glad you gave this story a chance and that it's working for you as a reader.
YAY for adorable twins. ♥
Date: 07/18/09 05:13 pm Title: Notes
Ah my little babies. They're so sweet when they're messing with people. I wanna fluff their ears when they get all cute like that. I hope the talk with the school head isn't too bad though. I don't think the twins really ment any harm they just need something to do. Anyway update soon:)
Author's Response: *snicker* They will surely try it again, before they start to differentiate in appearance. Ear-fluffing would be the natural response, I think! And the talk with the school head may surprise you. They definitely didn't mean harm. Well, mostly. Will update soon, thanks!
Date: 07/18/09 03:45 pm Title: Notes
update sooon plz thx=]
Author's Response: Almost caught up on reviews! I will be updating within the hour. Thanks!
Date: 07/17/09 11:01 pm Title: Discord
I'm very glad you liked the picture. :)
Poor things, I hope their school gets better. And that they find a way to play while Tom practices guitar. :) The kits are just adorable and every chapter seems to leave me with a warm feeling.
Author's Response: I like it so, so much. ♥ I need to go comment over on the fanart site, too. It's just phenomenal.
School will get better! In some ways, at least. Thanks, I am so glad they're continuing to be adorable and very happy to hear that the chapters leave you with that feeling. That is such an awesome thing to hear, as a writer. ♥