Date: 01/08/10 04:23 pm Title: This is Home
sorry simone....but thats not gonna happen. like ever.
Author's Response: Oh, you're not kidding!
Date: 01/08/10 04:04 pm Title: Malaise
lol gordon still doesnt get it. i wonder what their responses will be?
Author's Response: Nope, nope he doesn't. :D Should be interesting, you know?
Date: 01/08/10 03:31 pm Title: Scream
*tears* that ending was sad...but sweet in a way.very well written though ^.^
Author's Response: Aww, sorry you teared up...but glad you found it emotionally affecting!
Date: 01/08/10 03:04 pm Title: Enter the Trumpers of Leroux
awesome start!*clicks next hungrily*
Author's Response: :) Thank you!
Date: 11/22/09 04:30 pm Title: The Road You Travel
This story was so...wow! I really felt the pain in Bill and Tom's life. The part of the tribute in the end I cried like a baby.
Really great
Author's Response: It's not easy for them at all. Poor kits! Thank you so much, I'm really glad to hear it was so emotional for you.
I really appreciate your review. :)
Date: 11/21/09 08:07 pm Title: Choosing Sides
Ok so I can't read more for tonight cause I'm working tomorrow morning but this few chapters were really great! We can see the beginning of the separation (or kind of) for the twins and Bill is the one to let go of Tom more than the other way round like in most of the fan fics where Bill is the clingy one.
He is here too but still...
I'll be back tomorrow to read the end of this part 1 and then the rest.
Author's Response: Awesome, I am so glad you enjoyed the first few chapters! Bill starts out being the first to let go but I think they go back and forth, from here on out. It's such a gradual process. Thank you for reading, I'm very pleased you like it!
Date: 11/02/09 10:18 am Title: Heads in Uncomfortable Places
Simone didn't expect to get that kind of prejudice in her town. Well welcome to the world of being different.
Author's Response: She sure didn't. It was a hard thing to face!
Date: 11/01/09 11:34 pm Title: Night Terror
I'm glad they have each other but I'm not sure if not letting Simone in is a bad thing or a good thing?
Author's Response: Always they have each other. It's tough, with Simone - at the very least this scene lets her know however close she is to the twins, there's something she can't get between.
Date: 11/01/09 07:55 pm Title: Musical Aptitude
This was a fun chapter. I liked the parenting issues Gordon had. I liked little naked Bill and Tom, they made me laugh. I am really enjoying the character development.
Author's Response: Thanks! Gordon's a new parent but he'll pick it up quickly, I think. Kids and their nudity fetish extends to kits as well! Glad you're enjoying the character development.
Date: 11/01/09 07:11 pm Title: Modesty and New Things
I like the depth that Tom is starting to get. Bill is still doesn't have the depth that Tom does yet. I like Tom. And I'm starting to like Simone better but she's not very good with kids is she? She's never really been around them to know that they are like little adults with a werid perspective.
Author's Response: Tom and Bill are especially similar to little adults with a weird perspective; they're developmentally advanced, though extremely naive in most ways. I really enjoyed writing Tom, but Bill was harder for me to get a grasp on, and your comments let me know that shows. Thanks for your review!
Date: 11/01/09 06:05 pm Title: This is Home
I'm not sure I like Simone she's all soft and mushy. The twins need support but sometimes you have to be strong and soft to be supportive.
Author's Response: I like to think that Simone and Gordon create a good balance between them. :) But you're definitely not the first to dislike Simone. ;D
Date: 11/01/09 04:15 pm Title: Feeling Changes
It seems that Vardunzel does know what may happen in the future. *grins* I hope it will be well detailed!
Author's Response: Indeed! And the gradual development of it is very well-detailed. :)
Date: 11/01/09 03:36 pm Title: Malaise
I wonder if Vardunzel know's really that the twins will *coughs* become closer? is that normal for youko?
Author's Response: Vardunzel has a pretty good idea, but his knowledge was second-hand and came from casual remarks. And yup, it's not only normal, it's basically expected for youko.
Date: 11/01/09 03:05 pm Title: A Safe Place
More details, that's good. I like that. I'm ready for more meat of the story I'm tired of vegetables.
Author's Response: *laughs* That's an interesting analogy. Thanks.
Date: 11/01/09 02:38 pm Title: They're Not Human
Well this is much better. I like that we're finally getting some inforatmon about them. It helps me develop a conneciton to characters when I have details and reactions. I hate flat characters, they're so two demential ha ha ha >.< sorry
Author's Response: Thanks! Maybe that was the trouble - too many chapters up front from Simone and Gordon's perspective. Hopefully you are able to connect at last!
Date: 11/01/09 01:48 pm Title: The End of the Name Game
I like that Bill and Tom finally opened up. I like how it was done.
I'm still working into the storyline. Am I, was I the only one it took a while to break into it? It was like that for me with MirrorImage too. That one took 10 chapters to get into and then I was addicted. I've found the ones that are the hardest to get into are the ones I most get addicted to.
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad that played out well for you. You're not the only one; at least one other reader let me know they had a hard time getting into the story even after giving it several tries. :)
Date: 11/01/09 01:25 pm Title: Scream
awh it's very sweet. Very real. Crying children in the night. They of course would run towards someone who had offered them comfort. All children do.
Author's Response: Yup, that broke through the barrier of being scared, for Bill. And where Bill goes, Tom follows!
Date: 11/01/09 01:15 pm Title: Playing the Frets
hum...still pushing forward trying to get the tone and measure of the story. I bet this isn't the usual review.
I'm still not sure how I feel about the characters. Perhaps this is what's holding me up. I think I need to know the characters more before I make a dertermination on the story.
Author's Response: No worries! I appreciate your giving it a chance. I'm sorry if it was difficult to get into. =/
Date: 11/01/09 12:33 pm Title: Enter the Trumpers of Leroux
I know this story is well loved by many of your readers and I finally decided to read it. I'm still trying to get into it. It's well written like everything you write so that's not the problem. The subject matter also isn't the problem. I'm guess I'm just having issues wrapping my brain around a new story with new rules to a new world. I'll get there I'm sure.
Author's Response: I understand; it's definitely not for everyone. It's an established world for me although I tried to make this stand-alone, and it's a very different setting. Thanks for giving it a try!
Date: 08/26/09 05:46 am Title: The Road You Travel
Gordon is a man of much wisdom, and I think he will be a big help in the years to come.
Very nicely done, and I look forward to reading Year Two.
Author's Response: He's pretty awesome, I like how he's shaping up as a character. I definitely think he'll be a big help. Thank you! Year Two will hopefully be filled with lots of goodies. =)