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Reviewer: thywillbedone Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 08/14/09 01:56 am Title: Adventures at the Town Fair – Part I

They really are adorable together and I SO had a bad feeling about that choker!!! Why was I the only one reminded of the LAST piece of jewelry Bill owned??

Author's Response: I was wondering who all would know about the choker right away. XD

Reviewer: parallelheartz Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/14/09 01:53 am Title: Adventures at the Town Fair – Part I

*falls over* i love you. this chapter was amazing....JUST AMAZING xD

Author's Response: *helps up* XD Thanks, I'm glad you liked it. :) :)

Reviewer: GiraffeJumper2008 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/13/09 11:27 pm Title: Because Tom's Day Couldn't Get Any Better

Awww, poor Tomi, I wouldn't mind pampering him =)

I liked the period bit, but it'd be really great if he actually did get a period...hehe...I laugh just thinking about it. But anyways, great as always!

Author's Response: Hehe Tomi needs lots of pampering, I'm sure he wouldn't mind. ;3

Lol thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it. :)

Reviewer: Yin8 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/12/09 06:46 pm Title: Because Tom's Day Couldn't Get Any Better

lol im just wondering where andi is?? i mean did i miss something in the past chapters? O-o

Author's Response: Lol shhh, you'll see him again very soon. ;)

Reviewer: KookieKannibal Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/12/09 12:25 pm Title: Because Tom's Day Couldn't Get Any Better

wooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo :o

Author's Response: Lol :D?

Reviewer: Mary-L Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/12/09 11:28 am Title: Because Tom's Day Couldn't Get Any Better

I just read the entire fiction. At the beginning, I liked the Ranma spririt, you made that very well. Then, you took liberties and made a fluffy story! I liked the way you're going. This story is great even if I imagined the characters in japanese house and stuff! x) I look forward to read the next chapter!

Author's Response: Thanks for taking time to read it. :) :) I'm glad you're enjoying it, and yes, the next chapter will come soon! :3

Reviewer: thywillbedone Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 08/12/09 06:44 am Title: The Beginning

What I have notice is that when Tom is in male form, Bill doesn't mind giving more open kisses and whatever else Tom asks, but when Tom is in girl form, Bill gets shy, gives her quick kisses so that no one sees him almost. Again, I may be reading much into it, but if it's what you say and he's just being so frigging polite and not act like a horny male towards a girl, then I love him ten times more!

Author's Response: LOL! Wow, does it really appear that way? I should go reread some of the old chapters then. But uhm, yeah, it's not supposed to be like that. XD I'll be sure to add something in showing that Bill loves Tom the girl as much as he loves Tom the boy. ;3

Reviewer: AngelKisses Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/12/09 12:24 am Title: Because Tom's Day Couldn't Get Any Better

aww this is really good. i like the girl Tom and the guy Tom. i hope it doesnt rain on Tom again at the fair

Author's Response: I'm glad you like it. :) It probably won't rain, but that doesn't mean there won't be other things that might change him. ;3

Reviewer: thywillbedone Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 08/11/09 09:54 pm Title: Because Tom's Day Couldn't Get Any Better

I'm getting a slight feeling that Bill isn't as bi as he thinks he is, because when Tom wants to be affectionate as a girl, he gets more of a response from Tom when in male form.

Hmmm, or am I reading too much into it?



Author's Response: Does it appear that way? I didn't mean to make it like that if it does. Bill loves on Tom no matter which form, but Tom doesn't like being a girl which is maybe why she never gets much time with Bill? Or if you were referring to the previous chapter, Bill kinda "respects" Tom enough to not stare at her so openly since they haven't really gotten that far in their relationship.. or something. I dunno. Like I said, it shouldn't appear like that and if it does, I apologize; Bill is supposed to appear to accept Tom no matter which form. XD

Reviewer: Lady Tiadalma Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/11/09 06:28 pm Title: Because Tom's Day Couldn't Get Any Better

Everyone loves a town fair.

That's not fair that Tom doesn't get her period. If she's female, she should.

Bushido is a real pain in the ass. But something tells me he's mostly harmless.



Author's Response: Yup. Lots of great fun coming. Hopefully. o_O

Lol yeeaah. We'll she's only half, so she doesn't count? ;P

Bushido is definitely harmless. He's just an idiot. An annoying one at that. ;)

Reviewer: makemesmile Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/11/09 04:47 pm Title: Because Tom's Day Couldn't Get Any Better

ahahaha! i loved this chapter. an overdramatic Tom is priceless. especially with the needing all the extra pampering. lol loved the chapter. i was actually qondering bout the period thing too and have one thing to say about that: LUCKY BITCH!! lol it would be funny to see something like that in this though. would be crazy funny. lol more soon?! Ö

Author's Response: Yep, Tom likes to make a big deal out of the smallest things. XD Haha yeah, I envy Tom too. ;P I don't know I just don't really want to write something like that. Plus it'll be strange if he changed back to a guy and like, then what? It just stops? Lol.
Yes, of course more soon! :)

Reviewer: tokio_hotel_luver Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/11/09 11:54 am Title: Because Tom's Day Couldn't Get Any Better

o.o Bushido is a weirdo! lol



Author's Response: Lol, yes indeed. ;)

Reviewer: DaveyDel1Cious Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/11/09 11:41 am Title: Because Tom's Day Couldn't Get Any Better

Yay! I can't wait for the faaaiiirrrr! Poor Tom. That is the shittiest day imaginable. I would hate going back and forth so many times.

Author's Response: Yay! ;) And yes, such a horrible and shitty day. :( *pats Tom*

Reviewer: Katanasai Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/11/09 07:49 am Title: Because Tom's Day Couldn't Get Any Better

:) More Bushido, oh, lord. I adored his corresponding character in Ranma, and I'm starting to really like him in this! He's so funny. Anyway, we're having a rainy day here- can I have some of Gustav's hot chocolate? Pretty please?

Author's Response: Lol Kuno was such an idiot yet I also just loved him for it. I'm glad you like his Bushido version. XD And yes, I'm sure Gustav would be happy to share some of his infamous hot chocolate. ;)

Reviewer: BlackLamb21 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/11/09 03:14 am Title: Because Tom's Day Couldn't Get Any Better

poor tomi almost had to have a bath with bushido. XP

I wouldn't blame him though. i'm getting the chills just thinking about it. >_

Author's Response: Lol. Creepy indeed. ;3

Reviewer: Ladite Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/11/09 03:12 am Title: Because Tom's Day Couldn't Get Any Better

You knew I was going to review, right? ;)

Oh my, poor baby Tom, it's good that there's Bill who can give him a lot's of pampering XD And way to go Tom to show Bushi show is boss ;)

And don't worry about updates. We can wait :) You update so often so it's not killing to wait a few more days.

xx

Author's Response: I adore you and your reviews. ;) *loves on you*

Tom tries to act so big, but he definitely needs Bill to pamper him like that. XD And of course, we can't have a chapter with Bushido and not have him get smacked around by someone. XD

It's so good to hear that. :) :) I'm always so paranoid about posting late, even if just by a few hours like I've been doing lately. XD So thanks, it's nice to know I'll have at least one patient reader. XD

Reviewer: LYNgo85 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/11/09 02:42 am Title: Because Tom's Day Couldn't Get Any Better

I was happy to see Bushido make an appearance in the story, he is one funny character. I find it hilarious how Tom always end up being all over dramatic about whatever Bushido did to him.

Author's Response: Hehe that's Tom for you. Thanks for the review. :)

Reviewer: twincestkindom Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/11/09 02:13 am Title: Because Tom's Day Couldn't Get Any Better

amasing thanks!!! XD continue!!

Author's Response: Yes, soon! :)

Reviewer: Synnie Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/11/09 02:12 am Title: The Beginning

Bushido totally reminds me of . . .*goes to look for his name*. . . Komiyan III! That's his name. He's in love with the main girl, Rena. At one point, his wish is to own her socks o.O

Author's Response: Her socks? LOL! How strange. XD

Reviewer: Synnie Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/11/09 01:50 am Title: Because Tom's Day Couldn't Get Any Better

“Yes, Bill. I was staring out the window and saw my own ass out in the middle of the street.”

That line made my night. I shared it with everyone I'm talking to on msn.

I loved how disgruntled Gusti got over the hot chocolate.

I loved the Bushido thing. Do you know .Hack//Legend of the Twilight?

Author's Response: LOL really? My sister is to blame for me actually talking like that in real life. XD I'm glad you got a kick outta it though. :D

Never insult Gustav cooks/makes/whatever. ;)

I've heard of .Hack, but I've never actually watched it despite people telling me to. Does something simliar to the Bushido thing happen there?

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