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Reviewer: toho09 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/19/09 06:23 pm Title: Adventures at the Town Fair – Part II

lol at tom being scared hahah XD

Author's Response: Hehe ;)

Reviewer: Synnie Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/19/09 06:17 pm Title: Adventures at the Town Fair – Part II

XD I'm so glad I could help you out with that. I laughed. Good times. Good times XD

Author's Response: Again, thanks so much for the idea. :D :D

Reviewer: yorutya Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/19/09 05:47 pm Title: Adventures at the Town Fair – Part II

awww=] update soonn plz thx=]

Author's Response: I'll try. :)

Reviewer: Chi Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/16/09 04:38 pm Title: Adventures at the Town Fair – Part I

I love this!!! xD I don't know Ranma 1/2....please don't kill me for it!! O.O I love this really and really much!! :D I hope you continue soon!!
xx Chi ^^

Author's Response: Lol it's okay if you don't know Ranma 1/2! :) I'm glad to hear you like it. I'll try to update again soon! :)

Reviewer: KookieKannibal Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/16/09 01:22 am Title: Adventures at the Town Fair – Part I

my first fan fic when toms the sucker and not the suckie eeeeeep excitement much :p
so cute and sexy gave me flutter flys in my belly lol continue please :)

Author's Response: Lol! Uhm, I'm honored? ;P XD

I'm glad you liked it. I'll try to update as soon as I can. :)

Reviewer: StrawberrySky Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/15/09 02:43 pm Title: Adventures at the Town Fair – Part I

I really like this fic and the whole thing between Tom/Bill and the two G's. I read it all at once and now I'm sad there aren't any chapters left.

There's only one thing I'm really missing the past chapters and that is Bill's love and admiration for Fluffles a.k.a Andreas. Where is he?

For the rest it's a very lovely fic!

xx

Author's Response: Thank you for taking time to read it. I'm glad you're enjoying it. :) :)

Lol I know Andi seemed to have vanished suddenly, but don't worry, he'll be making another apperance very soon. ;)

Reviewer: Mary-L Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/15/09 09:54 am Title: Adventures at the Town Fair – Part I

Oh oh first "time" on a special place! xD
I liked this chapter, G's are really mad!
Schools starts up on monday for you? =O Jeez, it starts up on September the 15th for me! Well, good luck! =/

Author's Response: Lol I'm glad you enjoyed it. ;3

September? Blaaah lucky bum. :( :(

Reviewer: Yin8 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/15/09 03:10 am Title: Adventures at the Town Fair – Part I

aww sucks for you :( about the school thing i mean lol

and seriously whats up with tom spanking bill? xD

Author's Response: Haha indeed. Major suck-age. :(

LOL! Why shouldn't he? XD

Reviewer: yorutya Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/14/09 07:52 pm Title: Adventures at the Town Fair – Part I

ooh that was very good=] plz update soon thx=]

Author's Response: Thanks. Yes, I'll try to update again soon. :)

Reviewer: Lady Tiadalma Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/14/09 05:13 pm Title: Adventures at the Town Fair – Part I

Lovely. Just the way a fair should be. Other than the romantic interlude in the bathroom, of course. But it was awesome.

Author's Response: Hehe thanks. :)

Reviewer: makemesmile Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/14/09 04:55 pm Title: Adventures at the Town Fair – Part I

LMAO i loved the whole thing! its crazily funny!! ahahaha poor u for school starting soon! more when you can!

Author's Response: Hehe I'm glad to hear that. :) And yes, I'm trying to work on a bit right now. :3

Reviewer: toho09 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/14/09 04:18 pm Title: Adventures at the Town Fair – Part I

lol the g's are mean haha XD

Author's Response: Yes indeed. XD

Reviewer: tokio_hotel_luver Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/14/09 04:17 pm Title: Adventures at the Town Fair – Part I

Lmfao nice chappie

Author's Response: Thanks. :)

Reviewer: Synnie Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/14/09 01:51 pm Title: The Beginning

Go for it! I don't mind you using my ferris wheel story XD

Author's Response: Yay!! Thanks so much!! :D :D

Reviewer: BrokenMirror Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/14/09 11:43 am Title: Adventures at the Town Fair – Part I

I'm grinning like a crazy person! Damn, this is so friggin good! :D And YAY for the return of the curses, it was exactly the curse I hoped it would be *wiggles eyebrows*

This had me LMAO: "Let’s go look for some ugly people?” Wahahaha, I can imagine him saying that.

And don't worry about the length! When a story is as good as this it can never ending for all I care.

Author's Response: Lol!! I'm glad you enjoyed it. :D

Hehehe Bill totally would say something like that. XD

I have no idea how or when to end this thing, so I suppose that's a good thing. XD

Reviewer: Synnie Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/14/09 11:40 am Title: Adventures at the Town Fair – Part I

I would love to point out my favourite parts of this chapter, but ugh. So lazy. But for you, I'll do it XD

First off, the ferris wheel. My brother is JUST like Tom when it comes to rides. I made him go on the ferris wheel with me a year or two ago and
when we stopped at the top, I started rocking it XD

The necklace thing was awesome, my favourite part being the story they spun for the G's.

I really want to take fabric paint and write spank me on Bill's ass. Glow in the dark so it's not that noticable until at night XD

Anyways, can't wait for more!

Author's Response: LOL! Uhm, thanks? XD

I hadn't even thought of Bill messing with Tom on the ferris wheel. If you don't mind, I totally want to add that in now. :3

Hehehe it's what should have happened. Jk! Kinda..ish.. XD

LOLL!! Now that is something I would absolutely love to see. XD

Thanks, more soon (hopefully)! :)

Reviewer: Ladite Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/14/09 06:43 am Title: Adventures at the Town Fair – Part I

Tom did spank Bill some more... XD

Nice long chapter, just what I need in the morning when I don't want to go to the work.

Nice work G's, even though I'm not sure what to think about Karina yet. But it did get us a nice scene between our boys ;)

Oh, how much I would like to see those pics taken at the phone booth ;) And I wonder if there's going to rain XD

xx

Author's Response: Spanking is just too fun to resist. XD

I'm glad I can help you out in the morning. ;3

Lol, well Karina should be making an appearance again soon, so your thoughts on her may change for the better or worse. ;)

Omg same here. When I was writing that scene all I could think about was seeing those pictures for real. XD Hehe and nah, it's probably not going to rain. However that doesn't mean there won't be other sources of cold water at the fair. ;)

Reviewer: twincestkindom Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/14/09 03:33 am Title: Adventures at the Town Fair – Part I

thanks!!!! continue!!! I can't wait!!! XD

Author's Response: Lol yes, next part soon (hopefully). :)

Reviewer: more_than_dreams Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/14/09 02:52 am Title: Adventures at the Town Fair – Part I

AWE! SO CUTE.:).

Author's Response: Thanks. :)

Reviewer: MagicalGirl379 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 08/14/09 02:46 am Title: Adventures at the Town Fair – Part I

... OMK, rofl!!!

I love the idea of cursed jewelry, great job!

Author's Response: Lol thanks. :)

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