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Reviewer: thywillbedone Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 08/23/09 07:47 am Title: Adventures at the Town Fair – Part III

Admittedly, a chapter that had to happen sooner or later. Enough hiding shit from Bill. Less problems for everyone that way. :DDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD

Author's Response: Yep, I thought it was time. Or something. XD But yes, it will definitely be easier for everyone... eventually. XD

Reviewer: Mary-L Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/23/09 06:21 am Title: Adventures at the Town Fair – Part III

Andy is a jerk! xD It was his fault and now Bill is mad at Tom.
I hope they will make-up soon!
Great chapter, I wait for the next one!

Author's Response: Don't worry, I hate having Bill and Tom mad at each other. ;P But yes, I did make Andi quite a jerk. Oops. XD
Thanks. I'll try to update soon! :)

Reviewer: Chi Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/23/09 05:02 am Title: Adventures at the Town Fair – Part III

I loved it!! xD Aaaaw, poor Tomi xD Bill shouldn't be that harsh on him :( I hope you continue soon!!
xx Chi ^^

Author's Response: Thanks. :) Haha well Bill's just weeeee bit pissed off at him. ;P I'll try to put the next chappie up soon! :3

Reviewer: DaphneKaulitz Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/23/09 03:55 am Title: Adventures at the Town Fair – Part III

i hope Bill forgives Tom and andi gets kicked out.

Author's Response: Lol!! All will work out for Bill and Tom, but it'll take a bit longer with Andi. ;P

Reviewer: Lady Tiadalma Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/23/09 01:01 am Title: Adventures at the Town Fair – Part III

Liked it. And I also love funnel cake, so all is well in my universe.

Author's Response: Thanks. :) And omg yes, funnel cake. :9

Reviewer: Nini Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/22/09 03:24 pm Title: Adventures at the Town Fair – Part II

I loved thiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiis

Author's Response: Thanks, I'm glad to hear that. :)

Reviewer: GiraffeJumper2008 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/20/09 01:03 pm Title: Adventures at the Town Fair – Part II

Aww...Tom is so emotional it's absolutely adorable!

Author's Response: Hehe I'm glad you liked it. ;)

Reviewer: clandestinedreams Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/20/09 08:27 am Title: Adventures at the Town Fair – Part II

a quickie in the gondola would be niiice ;)

Author's Response: Ah, yes it would. ;) But Bill and Tom just kissed and nothing more. ;)

Reviewer: Chi Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/20/09 07:53 am Title: Adventures at the Town Fair – Part II

I loved it xD Poor scared Tomi xD I hope you continue soon :D
xx Chi ^^

Author's Response: Thanks. I'll try to update soon. :)

Reviewer: Mary-L Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/20/09 05:58 am Title: Adventures at the Town Fair – Part II

I liked the gondola part, that was so fun! xD
And Tom was very cute when he was scared for Bill.
Karina is going to fuck up all their dates? xD
I really enjoyed this chapter. =)

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it. :) And nah, Karina only messed with this one. XD

Reviewer: Ladite Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/20/09 01:15 am Title: Adventures at the Town Fair – Part II

You are being mean to our poor Tom! You should be ashamed ;)

I think Karina did it on purpose that she didn't talk to Tom. What else can happen at the fair when you are writing it... Can't wait! ;)

I'll be gone one week but when I come back I hope there'll be a new chapter to read ;)

xx

Author's Response: Lol!!! Actually, the only mean part was supposed to be the monkey thing. The Ferris wheel was supposed to be all sweet and fluffy with no teasing, but then Synnie gave me that idea to mess with him and I couldn't help myself. XD Nah, he's a good sport. ;) *cuddles Tom*

Haha yep, Karina knew that Tom would freak out about it, so she avoided him intentionally. ;) Hehe I think there's only going to be one more fair part, but just a bit of a hint, it's not really going to be as fun as these two chapters. ;X

I'll definitely try to have another chapter up by then! ;)

Reviewer: Yin8 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/20/09 12:33 am Title: Adventures at the Town Fair – Part II

you guys are so cruel to tom XD

Author's Response: Lol! I didn't mean to be! XD

Reviewer: twincestkindom Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/19/09 10:44 pm Title: Adventures at the Town Fair – Part II

hahahaha awwwww tom !!!! he love bill, that´s so cute!!! XD

Author's Response: Hehehe ;)

Reviewer: tokio_hotel_luver Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/19/09 10:29 pm Title: Adventures at the Town Fair – Part II

lol nice

Author's Response: Thanks :)

Reviewer: Lady Tiadalma Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/19/09 09:20 pm Title: Adventures at the Town Fair – Part II

Synnie is made of awesome, isn't she?

I felt kinda bad for Tom with the whole monkey thing. He was really worried. And I laughed, but I don't feel bad about that.

And the Ferris wheel sounded like so much fun.



Author's Response: Indeed she is. :) :)

Haha yeah, Tom really didn't want Bill to go through the hell he knows too well. I'm glad you got a laugh out of it though. XD

Reviewer: thywillbedone Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 08/19/09 09:19 pm Title: The Beginning

YAY. Boonus pts for me then! ;-)

Author's Response: Definitely! *sends more Ferris wheel twincest kisses to you* XD

Reviewer: thywillbedone Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 08/19/09 08:34 pm Title: Adventures at the Town Fair – Part II

FERRIS WHEEL ACTION WOOT!!! THAT is when we all need binoculars!

Author's Response: I seriously LOL-ed at when I read this review. XD Thanks, I honestly needed a good laugh today. XD

Reviewer: AngelKisses Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/19/09 07:54 pm Title: Adventures at the Town Fair – Part II

awwwwwwww Tom loves Bill! the Ferris wheel part was cute and funny

Author's Response: Hehe I'm glad you liked it. :)

Reviewer: rachel1stevens Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/19/09 06:59 pm Title: Adventures at the Town Fair – Part II

yayyyy i love it i saw it was up and liturally squealed.. woke up my sis and defened the boy on the other end of my phone XD

Author's Response: Lol! I'm glad you liked it. XD

Reviewer: cherrybumbum88 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/19/09 06:57 pm Title: Fluffles

Loved the part where he said Fucking Moleser.

Author's Response: Lol ;)

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