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Reviewer: Savannah Suicide Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/08/10 07:55 am Title: Epilogue: Curses

Aw :3

I love everyone here. Bill, Tom, the two dads, Georg and Gustav, Andi, even Tiffany and Ryan...and Karina. But I don't love Nathalie or Sean Kingston. There's someone else I'm forgetting xD I think, anyway. But this was so nice, honey B :)



Author's Response: Aww thank you so much, my awesome cocoa scented GaGa. :) (But aww, you really didn't like my idiotic Bushido? XD) And do you know how happy you made me mentioning Tiffany and Ryan since they were based on friends I have irl? Well, Tiffany is, Ryan was just a made up character.. XD But YAY! Made me happy. :')

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Date: 04/08/10 07:50 am Title: Be Polite and Knock Before Opening a Closed Door

Aw, they are together and everything is like it should be. Of course that has to happen with all great stories. It's just sad that it's ending even though I started reading when it said Complete: Yes so I really shouldn't be complaining ;3

Author's Response: XD Glad you enjoyed it. :3

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Date: 04/08/10 07:46 am Title: Three Little Words

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Author's Response: :D?

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Date: 04/08/10 07:40 am Title: A Single Kiss

Oh oh oh ;_____;

I'm too sad to write a proper review. They should have kept Nathalie so that she can tell them how to turn Tom back, because otherwise they're going to be pretty fucked for a while unless Tom suddenly remembers :/



Author's Response: >.> Nathalie wouldn't have known how to fix it. And even if she did, she wouldn't have told so easily. ;P

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Date: 04/08/10 07:34 am Title: Mine

Oh, oh, oh, I'm dying here. The poor babies ;____; Tom needs to remember, and soon, because his poor Bill is so hurt that he doesn't remember...oh... ;____;

...and that pic of Sean Kingston was supposed to be centered >____>



Author's Response: ;3

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Date: 04/08/10 07:27 am Title: Of Melons, Reunions, and Pasta

OH NOEZ.

I AM IN COMPLETE SHOCK.

So here is Bushido:

 

 

GO BUSHIDO.



Author's Response: ...If you say so!! XD Although now I have that beautiful girl song stuck in my head. Thanks. ;P

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Date: 04/08/10 07:15 am Title: A Short Separation… But Not Really

SEAN KINGSTON STRIKES AGAIN XD

Author's Response: You're like obsessed with that dude or something! XD

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Date: 04/08/10 07:07 am Title: Illusions

ANDI, GO DIE, KTHX.

Author's Response: SO MEAN!! XD

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Date: 04/08/10 07:01 am Title: Adventures at the Town Fair – Part III

I LOL'd at the 'carry me' bit because I'm pretty sure I saw a show with that. I forget what it was, but the girl saying it was all dramatic and stuff and...well, it was funny xD I don't know. It just was. You'd have to hear how I can hear it in my head before it's as funny as I think it is. And then it got me thinking of the time me and my sister went to music camp but we couldn't find the damn thing, so we went around for like two hours trying to find it and ended up walking about four miles in total. And I was all, "I don't even care if it's a rapist that pulls up beside us, I'd totally watch as he went 'Get in the car' and then I'd spread out my arms and say 'Carry me'." xD As long as he had air conditioning, man. That was some tough Florida summer.

But ugh, Andi. I'm starting to not like him again. He's being a total bastard. And poor Tom (AGAIN), he didn't mean to hurt Bill. But Andi threatened him, that's why he didn't tell... :/



Author's Response: HAHA woooow! XD

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Date: 04/08/10 06:46 am Title: Adventures at the Town Fair – Part II

Well, like I already texted you (and of course you would just reply with ;D, you cheap bastard), poor Tomi ;___; The poor thing was so sure that Bill was turned into a chimpanzee. I was sure, too, and I was gonna fucking kill that girl because she doesn't have the right to mess with Bill like that :/

...*cough* I'm, uh...scared of rides, too...*cough*

I'm a lot like Tom in this, in that I tend to make perverted jokes and am scared to death of rides xD Finally, someone I can identify with 8D



Author's Response: HAHA hey! Replying with smilies is totally a genuine kind of answer. XD The fact that I overuse them and can't seem to ever stop has nothing to do with that... >.>

Say it with pride, because I'm totally scared of certain rides too. XD

Hey! I do those things too! Can I join the club? XD

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Date: 04/08/10 06:38 am Title: Adventures at the Town Fair – Part I

I KEEP FORGETTING STUFF. Last chapter I meant to mention that Gustav saying he even put cute little marshmallows in it sounds exactly like something that he would say, and the bit with Georg looking out the window and seeing his own ass was fucking hilarious xD

Tom's such a damn pervert, but he's so adorable doing it. I wish I could be good at making him like that but with my stories he's always too much of a sweetheart xD Which I guess is a good thing, but I'd like to be able to write a normal Tom, too xD

Oh, and I just texted you about the jacking off bit and I'm standing by my ground that that was kind of...amazing, and at the same time so...like...weird...but also kinda hot...if you get what I mean xD Like, giving him a spell that makes him not able to get himself off...geez xD Poor Tom, having to do that. But then again, I'm sure he enjoyed it ;3



Author's Response: LOL the ass thing was entirely my sister's fault. Blame her. XD

Hehe perverted Tom was so fun to write, but I love sweetheart Tom so much! :3

I just realized how sucky it would have been for Bill if Tom wasn't around or something. But uhm, thanks for liking that odd scene? XD

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Date: 04/08/10 06:08 am Title: Because Tom's Day Couldn't Get Any Better

Oh, and last chapter I forgot about the whole pinky thing...that was so cute x3

I seriously thought Bushido raped him...or, uh...her...though. I kind of wish he did because it would be so much more sweet when Tom came running to Bill x3 But that's just me, who's a super big fan of the whole H/C and Fluff pairing :) Anyway, poor Tomi ;____; And Bushido's a damn creep, he needs to go...away. Or something.



Author's Response: XD! I can never write rape. ;P I can barely stand to read it, so writing it is out of the question. ;P But uhm, Bushido here is too much of an idiot to actually do something like that. I think, anyway. o__o

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Date: 04/08/10 06:00 am Title: Just His Luck

Haha, I can totally imagine Tom in the schoolgirl outfit. That's too funny. But then again, he did deserve it what with Bill being forced to look at his boobs which he kind of doesn't even like on Tom anyway...at least, he likes his guy side more xD But yeah, too adorable ;3

Author's Response: Tom in a schoolgirl outfit = another image we all need to see one day. XD Haha and it's not really that Bill doesn't like Tom's boobs, it's just that he sort of... respects him? o__o Since like, they hadn't gotten that far in their relationship yet. I think that was what I was going for when I was writing this. XD And he likes Tom's guy side more only because Tom likes his guy side more, and it's that whole lover connection thing, or something. XD;

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Date: 04/08/10 05:52 am Title: Ailurophobia

Is it weird that I seriously thought Bill was going to say [when he had Tom over his back or whatever], "Damn woman!" because I can totally see him saying that like some Southern guy or something. "DAMN WOMAN." I'm like cracking up because of it xD

But aw, I'm glad Bill is so protective of Tom, it's really sweet :3



Author's Response: LOL! I have an odd mental image of Bill saying that now, thanks. XD

Hehe ;) He looooooooves him. ;3

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Date: 04/08/10 05:45 am Title: Karina’s Shop of Horrors

Well, DAMN, honey B. That makes a lot more sense xD Poor Tom. I keep saying that, but honestly. The kid gets turned into a girl with water, is beat around by his soulmate and lover whenever he wears a ring that his ex-girlfriend cursed, and on top of that he has the whole thing with the necklace. It never stops, does it? Although to be honest the spells intrigue me and I'd like to see Tom fall under more of them but only because I'm a sick bastard xD

I'm glad that Bill's not really angry like that, though, because it would break my heart if he was ;___;



Author's Response: Nope, it never stops. It's so fun to mess around with Tom. XD And don't worry, we're all a bit of a sick bastard. I mean, twincest? Who the hell likes such a thing? XD

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Date: 04/08/10 05:36 am Title: Change of Heart?

Damn, I thought it was because he bought an engagement ring for Tom or something and didn't want Tom to see the ring, but I guess not with the way he's acting and saying he has no memory of these flashes o___o I guess I fail for not reading or watching the manga or anime because I have no clue what's going on and my heart hurts for poor Bill and Tom ;____;

I'm really fucking glad this is finished because I don't think I would be able to handle it if it wasn't xD



Author's Response: WATCH IT. 8D Damn, I'm totally going to start bugging you about it from now on. x) Although in the anime it was a lot crackier rather than all dramatic like here.. XD

LOL! Waiting between chapters does suck.. XD

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Date: 04/08/10 05:31 am Title: Inseparable

Okay, let me just say that the strawberry shortcake orgasm thing was probably the funniest thing I've read in a while, and I was cracking up because I can so see myself doing that with my future boyfriends/husband/whatever. Because I'm an immature tard like that, and yeah xD

Second...I love the fluffy bit in the end, where Bill's all "You're mine" and Tom's all being Bill's property, and...and...oh my god, it's so cute <3333



Author's Response: LOL! I had fun writing that part. XD But DO IT. It's fun. XD

Fluff fluff fluff...~ XD

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Date: 04/08/10 05:22 am Title: What Do You Want?!

:DDDDDDDDDDDDDD

Author's Response: :D :D !

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Date: 04/08/10 05:18 am Title: Engagement Part II

Oh my god ;_____;

*so sad now*

Tom, you're a fucking idiot. He wants you, he really does, and that's why he's acting like he doesn't care, because he doesn't want you to see how much he really hurts! And...ugh. Gustav...I mean, I get that it's not really his fault because he asked Bill a bunch of times if it was okay, but he still should have seen that Bill wasn't ready to let go of him and that he was just trying to convince himself he didn't care...

>_____>



Author's Response: (Okay! Take 3 on trying to respond to these! XD)

For Bill it was also a bit more of not wanting to admit he actually does like Tom. ;P

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Date: 04/08/10 05:14 am Title: A Similar yet Different Situation

EWWWW, JOST.

But dude, this is so sweet. Bill and Tom and the almost kissing and the...and he...and the...

*SQUEE*



Author's Response: :D :D

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