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Reviewer: haenniTH Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/27/09 06:05 pm Title: We Need To Talk

WOOOOOT. omg. loved it. moooore! awesome ;D

Author's Response: thank you :)

Reviewer: thywillbedone Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 12/27/09 05:55 pm Title: We Need To Talk

It's better! Not fixed 100%, but much much better. It's a relief though, but I did feel bad for Bill that he has to go to extremes to get through to Tom. There was a time that not even words were needed for them to communicate, so to see them fall this far is very sad, but it's going to get better now. Finally!

Author's Response: This is very true! At least they're getting on the right path now :) Thank you for the review

Reviewer: MAD Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/14/09 01:04 am Title: Prologue

I wanna new charters :'( :'( :'( :'( so must.... :'(

Author's Response: I'm terrible at updating. I'm sorry!!!

Reviewer: final_thunder Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/05/09 03:06 pm Title: I've Always Cared

I miss this story :( come baaaaaaaack! update please!

Author's Response: Wahh I'm sooooo sorry!

Reviewer: maria93 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/15/09 03:03 pm Title: I've Always Cared

Ohh, this chapter was incredible. (: Please update soon!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I really appreciate it. I just updated. Sorry it took so long! :(

Reviewer: Emmla Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/08/09 06:11 am Title: I've Always Cared

oh...I have re-read it for like the 4th time xD its so good every time...but I need more, please update as soon as possible...Im so anxious to know how this will end!

Author's Response: Thank you, I'm honored that you like it that much!! Hopefully the rest of the story will live up to your expectations. Thanks for the review! Just updated :P

Reviewer: _geisterfahrer Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/05/09 12:43 am Title: Prologue

Holyshit. I love you/hate you for writing this lol. First off, you have great writing skills and the whole story was well-written. (:

But damn im bawling right now lol. PLEASE update. It's so sad and beautiful. Your detail was so in depth that I felt how Bill/Tom was feeling. :P I love it. (:

Author's Response: Thank you very much! I appreciate the compliment. I'm so flattered that you enjoy the story! Thanks for the review :)

Reviewer: tomoeandikr Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/04/09 12:18 am Title: I've Always Cared

ok, i can say this, you made me cry, twice, i mean its so sad both had their herat broken its so sad and the end of this chap is like a happy ending for both of them i really hope that the final chapter would be the fairy tale they deserve

Author's Response: Awwww! Thanks for the review :) I'll consider it ;P

Reviewer: Burntsienna Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/30/09 03:05 pm Title: I've Always Cared

Oh YES. This is so beautiful and is just powerful in all the right ways. I am so enthralled! Update soon please!

Author's Response: I'm very glad you think so! Thank you for the wonderful review. :]

Reviewer: mrs-kaulitz092398 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/27/09 12:21 am Title: I've Always Cared

Sorry I forgot to review! LOVE IT. best chap so far.

Author's Response: Don't every be sorry! GaHH thank you so much.

Reviewer: shanini Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/26/09 04:41 pm Title: I've Always Cared

When is the next chpter?!
I really love the story and the end is coming..= I can't take it!! *crazy my =P*

pliz post soon =]

Author's Response: I thought I would post it last weekend, but I seem to have lost my journal where I keep all of my story/chapter ideas, so I'll have to find that before I write haha :) Sorry! Thanks for the review, I'm glad you like the story!rn

Reviewer: Samantha_d_8303 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/25/09 11:57 pm Title: I've Always Cared

oh my gosh oh my gosh oh my gosh i need MORE!! that was sooo cute XD

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it :)

Reviewer: Samantha_d_8303 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/25/09 11:57 pm Title: I've Always Cared

oh my gosh oh my gosh oh my gosh i need MORE!! that was sooo cute XD

Author's Response: Thanks :] Just updated! Woo. Sorry it took so long :/

Reviewer: Hannah-Jill Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/24/09 05:45 pm Title: I've Always Cared

Ahhhh, this is so amazing. Homg, i feel like i've run a freaking marathon, my heart was beating madly the whole time, so fucking good, man. WHEW. Wow. Ahhh.

I absolutely love that you took Bill so far as to say he wants to get away, you took his love rationally, and made him self-dependent enough to want to get away, to make himself better. Him professing his want to leave Tokio Hotel hit me so hard, as hard as it hit Tom, and it was devastating. Your describing words are fucking amazing, and you paint the best picture in my mind with your words. Wow, holy crap, i cant believe this just now got featured. *___*

Author's Response: Omg, thank you SO SO SO much! I'm very glad you're enjoying this story. Your review made me smile :]

Reviewer: shimmery Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/24/09 12:20 am Title: I've Always Cared

Oh this gets me so emotional. They should never turn away from each other.

Author's Response: Me too, my friend! :) Thank you for the review.

Reviewer: throxmyworld365 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/23/09 09:57 pm Title: I've Always Cared

aaah i love it!! It's not another I love you tom ooh I love you to bill *kiss*. It's completly and utterly fantasizing i love it soo much write more!! :D

Author's Response: Thank you!!! :]]

Reviewer: violet_star77 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/23/09 09:37 pm Title: I've Always Cared

oh my goodness, yay!!! im so glad Tom finally gets it!! this story is so good, so well written, it totally deserved to be featured--congrats! i can't wait for more, though i'm sad its almost over.

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm very glad you like it!

Reviewer: Amdee Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 10/23/09 06:32 pm Title: I've Always Cared

Wow, it took me ages to find time to review, but I did it finally. And congratulations about being featured! :)

What a rollecoaster from ultimate Aww's to bunch in a face and back again. Anfst us definutely your thing and I love it here, because even if it's painful and twins' relationship is more than just conflicted, it is still somehow pure and innocent. They're motives are pure and not corrupted. Their road seems to be hard and rocky, but there is a change, because after all: they are the ones that matters. They want to be happy and that's it. I love the purity, yes.

I can se their points there, because they both have one. They have reasons to act like they do. I want to scream, that oh hell yes there is possible to love one another and it's not wrong, but really? Good points... Tom's secrets were beautiful. I loved the ending of this chapter.

Nice, angsty job. Sweet conflicts, but so much hope laying underneath their confused emotions and seemingly bropken connection.

Author's Response: Thank you SO much! You know, I was actually thinking that I might not make this story NC17 anymore. I mean, I've never ever written any sort of sexual scenes before, and I don't want to ruin the story with my inexperience, so maybe I'll just keep it 'pure' as you said haha. That was such an awesome reveiw, thank you very much! :)

Reviewer: IWillBe Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/23/09 05:29 pm Title: I've Always Cared

Awesomeness!!!!!! Can't wait for the next chapters! Please do them fast pretty please!!!! :)

Author's Response: :)

Reviewer: IWillBe Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/23/09 05:29 pm Title: I've Always Cared

Awesomeness!!!!!! Can't wait for the next chapters! Please do them fast pretty please!!!! :)

Author's Response: Yay I'm so glad you like it!! Haha I was going to try to write it today but we'll see. :)

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