Date: 08/09/09 04:30 am Title: We're not kids anymore
I love it. Very angsty. Keep going.
Author's Response: yesyes angst is the best :P
Date: 08/09/09 04:05 am Title: We're not kids anymore
I really like this so far and I'm very much looking forward to more! :)
Author's Response: Wonderful; I'm glad! Thank you for reviewing. =]
Date: 08/08/09 06:42 pm Title: We're not kids anymore
this story is very well written, i could feel the tension between them when they where in the kitchen and the fort. i feel bad for poor bill, but hopefully things will get better! keep it up & update soon
Author's Response: Danke, that's what I was going for! ;) Have faith--good things are on the way. Your review is much appreciated =D
Date: 08/08/09 03:52 pm Title: We're not kids anymore
Somehow I missed the prologue totally when you posted it, but now I read both of the chapters and I feel like I've been hit with a baseball bat. This second chapter was one of the angstiest and saddest for a while. Even if I had my doubts first because of the environment (I'm not so sure if I want there to be buildt a whole family with relatives for twins), it really made a huge impact on me and now I'm feeling so low and sad. I just can't stand twins being drifted apart and that bond being disappeared.
The fact that they were away from Tokio Hotel and stripped down to be just Bill and Tom and that revealing a huge gap between them was extremely sad. Bill's longing for going back as they used to be was so painful to read. Good job with that.
I like your style of writing here. It seems to be so easy, not forced at all. Everything feels so natural, real here. I will definitely keep following this one.
Author's Response: I don't want you to feel low and sad, but at the same time, I'm glad that you can really feel the emotions I'm trying to convey through my characters! Don't worry, their bond hasn't completely dissappeared ;) Thank you very much for this review! I really love the feedback and I'm so happy that you'll follow this story.
Date: 08/08/09 02:45 pm Title: We're not kids anymore
Awww, bbs =/
This made me sad, especially for Bill -_-
I really like it! Hope you can post more, soon ♥
Author's Response: Me too :( poor guy... Awesome! Hopefully within the next week! :)
Date: 08/08/09 01:24 pm Title: We're not kids anymore
Yea!! Angst to kick off the story, very fun. n_n I like how this is going I think, and you have just a lovely way with words, lovely angsty way :D I love it. Conflicted emotions are always so much fun, and you're doing such a lovely job with them.
Author's Response: A fanfic isn't a fanic without some twinsy-pain haha! Thank you for the complements :] I think that the next chapter will be more from Tom's perspective instead of Bill's like in this chapter. We'll see what's going on in that mind of his! More conflicted emotions, yessss. Thank you for reviewing I really appreciate it!
Date: 06/27/09 05:39 am Title: Prologue
Please continue. This short prologue made me giggle:) and I'm curious as to where this is going:D
Author's Response: :)
Date: 06/26/09 11:02 am Title: Prologue
Continue!!!
Author's Response: :)
Date: 06/26/09 05:49 am Title: Prologue
Lovely :) Keep going.
Author's Response: :)
Date: 06/26/09 05:40 am Title: Prologue
There is a story called Breathe already. You should change the name of your story to something else to avoid confusion.
http://fiction.tokiohotelfiction.com/viewstory.php?sid=6106
Author's Response: Alright, I changed it slightly. Thank you for letting me know.
Date: 06/26/09 05:25 am Title: Prologue
I'm liking this! (: The first few paragraphs already got me interested. Please continue!
Author's Response: Awesome, I'm very glad :)