Date: 09/26/09 10:59 am Title: I Love You
This story really plays with my heart strings! Have to say it is one of my top 5 favs on this site!! I think this chapter came out great!!
Author's Response: *delighted squeal*! *hugs*! I'm so very happy you like it. :D Thank youuuu!
Date: 09/26/09 09:43 am Title: I Love You
This chapter was amazing. Bill's pain is so palpable I can hardly stand it. Please update soon.
Author's Response: You and me both haha. Thank you so much; I'm really happy you liked it!! :]
Date: 09/26/09 07:33 am Title: I Love You
The chapter was awesome.
Author's Response: So glad you think so! :D
Date: 09/26/09 07:04 am Title: I Love You
it was so not rushed, it waqs perfect, i love the drama and angst, i love it all!
Author's Response: Thank you very much. It's really a relief to hear you say that! I'm sooooo happy you like it :]
Date: 09/26/09 05:58 am Title: I Love You
Oh, no, you didn't...oh, well, I guess you did. I had a feeling the story was building up to this moment, and it was so...emotional. I could feel it. You have to keep it coming before I go nuts.
Author's Response: Lol, I did. :P This is the climactic event of the story, you're right. Gahh, don't go nuts!! *hurriedly scribbles the next chapter* Thank you for reviewing!
Date: 09/26/09 04:36 am Title: I Love You
This chapter hit me so hard that my chest actually ached for Bill. I do understand how Tom might have a problem with it, but, damn, I just ached for Bill.
I don't think this was done too quickly at all. I think your pace has been really good, including this chapter. Anyway, very well done :)
Author's Response: I'm so horrible, I keep hurting Bill, and it hurts me too! I feel ya--major chest aching. I'm so happy you think so, really! This was basically the climactic events and I was very nervous for everyone's reactions. THANK YOUUUU! =)
Date: 09/26/09 03:15 am Title: I Love You
oh my goodness! I think this was wonderful!! i am dying for the next part though. i am so ready for Tom's thoughts and point of view. please update soon!!
Author's Response: Yess so happy you liked it. Yeah, next chapter will be interesting ;]
Date: 09/26/09 02:33 am Title: I Love You
This was a fantastic chapter! I'm crying right now. I really feel that you were able to capture the emotions of Bill! Can't wait for the next chapter :D
Author's Response: *hands you a hanky*! Thank you so much!
Date: 09/23/09 04:42 am Title: I Want To Be Happy
I love this!!! Plz update asap!!
Author's Response: Glad you like it! :] I'm hoping that maybe I will have time to write the next chapter this weekend...but I have alot going on, so I'm not sure. It's kind of unpredictable.
Date: 09/23/09 02:51 am Title: I Want To Be Happy
Well I love where it's going anyway! You've gotta love a possessive Tom! I think it's a very good story, really put together well. :)
Author's Response: Thank you very much! It really means a lot to me that you think so (:
Date: 09/22/09 08:17 pm Title: I Want To Be Happy
Oh, you guys.... *sighs sadly*
Author's Response: *joins your sigh* :)
Date: 09/21/09 01:08 am Title: I Want To Be Happy
Oh, Bill. *tsks* You never let your mind wander while you're driving! -_- (Though I'M one to talk, ha) I'm glad neither of them were hurt :D
I had a feeling that there was something on Tom's mind, after what happened in the hot tub. Hopefully they'll get to talk about it, soon. Bill is breaking my heart ;_;
♥ Great chapter.
Author's Response: I know! At least, that's what they teach you in driver's ed...There's ALOT on Tom's mind. We'll definitely be delving into that soon :] Thanks so much for the review!
Date: 09/20/09 10:27 pm Title: I Want To Be Happy
Aw, I'm loving this chapter
Author's Response: I'm happy!
Date: 09/20/09 06:45 pm Title: I Want To Be Happy
Oh yes, I know what you mean! Stories have their own minds and we are just tools for stories to becime alive :).
Anyways, one great chapter again. For a while I was hoping that things would get beter for them, but then again. misunderstandings and most of all: growing apart. It's really hard to deal with for me, honestly. I just hope they'll find each other again.
It would be interesting to see inside Tom's mind. Is he suffering as much as Bill is as they finally have oopprtunity to see each other bare, without the shield of fame. I remember ealier that this wasn't supposed to be this angsty, but don't worry, at least I love it that way :)
Author's Response: Well said! Well, things have to get worse before they can get better. :] There's a lot of ups and downs in this story, but I think we all know where it will end up...! I'm sorry that it upsets you, but there's definitely a light at the end of the tunnel. It may be hard to imagine with all this angst, but it's there! It totally WAS NOT supposed to be angsty, but the story has a mind of its own and I guess the angst makes it more realistic. Thank you SO MUCH for the review! You have very insightful feedback :]
Date: 09/20/09 12:27 pm Title: I Want To Be Happy
*dies* I love this story, really. I feel so terrible for Bill though! He's just realizing his feelings and it's scaring him and changing him and then Tom has to be bipolar all the time...I really want to know what's going on with that boy!!!!
I think you need to lock Bill and Tom in a room together and force them to talk things out because there's obviously soo much that they're hiding from each other and it breaks my heart!
They seriously SUCK at communication haha. Good Lord... I have a feeling, though, that they won't be able to REALLY talk until the shit hits the fan... because we all know that the shit WILL hit the fan because of the prologue.
Yayyy good chapterrr :]
Author's Response: Very perceptive! Thanks :)
Date: 09/20/09 09:39 am Title: I Want To Be Happy
well, I should be doing English... But I'll count this as English, I'm reading great writing, I say it counts XD But wow, I knew Tom was pissed, but I didn't expect that at all. It's like, he doesn't want to be normal, have life slow down, once he's got a whiff of the sweet life. It's kind of scary to think about, plus Bill is going into some kind of mental thing (at least it seems like this at the moment) and Tom just brushes it all aside...he was sweet in the morning, did he forget that? *sigh*
Bill nearly vomited at the sight of the massive amounts of grey hair on the rolls of his body; he resembled a fat gorilla.
I did not need that horrible image in my head. Just gah, I think I vomited a little in my mouth. I don't know if rolling fat or rolling grey hair is worse...but lol, I love Uncle's character. Hahaha, I want him back. Rodents mating...haha, he is a sick fucker. But he still seems like lots of fun. Sick fuckers can be a lot of fun to write...lol, you probably only have him as this one part character, but I love him n_n
He might never be enough to make Tom happy, but Tom would always be enough for Bill.
That line made me f-ing sad. Just, idk...to me, at this line, it makes me think of a puppy. Because puppy make people happy, but sometimes they get annoying and get left behind. So the puppy gets sad, and depressed, but they're always waiting for their master to come back, and will always wag their tail when they see their master again, no matter what they’ve done... That's kind of horribly depressing, but that's how I see Bill's and Tom's relationship right now... Hahaha, ignore me, I think too much. Analyzing literature does that to someone. You do an amazing job hun, keep it up XD but Tom *growls* he is being a little too mean to Bill. He’s just jerking him along on a chain. Bah…hahaha! I love it XD
Author's Response: Thank you!!! Yes, Tom has some issues too that will be sorted out eventually of course. and LOLLLL I love Uncle Wolfgang. He's just a totally one dimentional character and I use him for some sort of comic relief in all the angst and everything. He's so much fun to write!!!! Him and his squirrel fetish..lol. So creepy, but fun. Wow, you're so right!! That was really a great analogy. Bill does seem like a puppy, doesn't he? But I guess that's only because this story has been very one-sided so far. Because we really don't know what Tom's feeling at the moment, so it just makes Bill look really sad and depressing. It's good that you think too much! I can always count on you to blow me away with your analyzing skills :DD Seriously, thanks so much for the review. I LOVE your reviews, they're always so insightful and amazing. *hugs*
Date: 09/20/09 06:42 am Title: I Want To Be Happy
LOL Poor Bill. He's so out of it, he's lucky the accident wasn't worse. And they never talk when they should. Characters have a way of getting away from you, it's true. Good chapter. :D
Author's Response: SO lucky! This is why Tom never lets him drive :P And yes, they definitely never talk when they should. Sooner or later all the unspoken words built between them will escalate to the point of disaster. Thank you oh-so much for reviewing :D
Author's Response: SO lucky! This is why Tom never lets him drive :P And yes, they definitely never talk when they should. Sooner or later all the unspoken words built between them will escalate to the point of disaster. Thank you oh-so much for reviewing :D
Date: 09/20/09 04:56 am Title: I Want To Be Happy
"No Love ever existed without Loss"
Omagad...T^T Beautiful words but just..T^T
Yes, I know what you mean..XD I myself write a lot of stories - I know the beginning and the end, but then as I continue on writing, it's starting to shift and "take off on its own" like you said and I'm having a hard time controlling it to the vision I've had for it to end already. Haha..XD
I can feel the hurt in Bill... But since he loves Tom very much... sigh..>__< Oh well..
Author's Response: It's true! The words just flow out of some harbored inspiration and they flow and flow and you can't stop them. It's frustrating at times! But as long as the end result is alright...you know! Mhm, Bill's extremely hurt. But whose to say Tom isn't, too? *dramatic music*
Date: 09/20/09 01:05 am Title: I Want To Be Happy
This was good. I wonder why Tom was so ready to get out of the house. Was it something to do with that nasty uncle of theirs? I always feel so bad for Bill and my heart actually hurts for him.
Author's Response: Tom just has a lot of stuff going on with him that neither Bill nor the reader are aware of quite yet. ;] And Uncle Wolfgang is just a silly character haha, not an actual threat. Yes, poor Bill...Thank you very much for the review :]
Date: 09/20/09 12:50 am Title: I Want To Be Happy
A long chapter =] awesome. ummm sooo yeah, i think you captured the emotions of the characters really well, and it feels like bill has finally kind of recognized what his feelings are for tom! thats a good thing. but tom....well fuck, i dont have a clue whats going on in his head but hopefully we'll find out, eh? excitedd
Author's Response: Yes! Thanks so much