Date: 10/03/09 10:44 pm Title: Miserable Clarity
poor Bill and Tom
Cant wait for a new chapter
Author's Response: Poor twins, indeed. Glad you liked it :)
Date: 10/03/09 10:06 pm Title: Miserable Clarity
Okay, reviewing two chapters at once...
You know, you are amazingly talented on writing emotional conflicts, describe them in a beautiful way. The most I love in this fic are those moments when nothing really happens, but they are so full of devastating emotions, pain, hope, despare and love that it's hard to breathe. Both chapters had those moments once again. My heart ached so much as it was squeezed by unvisible hand. Damn, this hurts.
Maybe, just maybe there was a bit too fast movements on forest-part, but it didn't bother me at all, because I craved to read this painful emotional mess. I can't take the idea of losing very well and it damn well came clear here. I know (hope?) you'll give us an happy ending, but for now it has been very painful to read. The real pain doesn't need big moves or drama, but little moments of separation.
Tom seeing all the things they've gone through was very touching.
Npw I really need some serious fluff to feel better :D
Author's Response: Thank you for your feedback!
Date: 10/03/09 09:35 pm Title: Miserable Clarity
oh wow!~.~ okay yes, Tom realizes Bill's confesssion goes both ways, not just one sided... okay now just get them naked and wrap them up, hypothermia can be reversed that way
Author's Response: HAHA yes, getting naked solves everything :P thanks for the review!
Date: 10/03/09 09:23 pm Title: Miserable Clarity
wow...i'm crying...yep...this fic brings many emotions...and gives much to think about...it's really god...update soon...
oh and as i was reading i had zoom into me in my head...wich is a beautiful song but it makes me sad...
Author's Response: *hands tissues!* Thanks so much. I'm really glad you like it. Oooh, zoom into me fits really well!
Date: 10/03/09 09:16 pm Title: Miserable Clarity
Added to my lj! ^^
TOM, YOU ARE NOT DYING AND NEITHER IS BILL, YOU HEAR ME?! You just...you can't, not NOW, not when everything is finally so clear.
Author's Response: YAY! :]
Date: 09/28/09 08:02 pm Title: I Love You
How can you possibly feel insecure about this? It was amazing! You could really feel what Bill was feeling, that's how good it was! Please please please keep going!
Author's Response: I'm just a very insecure person lol...I'm SOOO glad you liked it, though!!! New chapter posted right now =) Thank you for the awesome review.
Date: 09/28/09 06:54 pm Title: I Love You
Oh my lord. *clutches heart*
What is Tom DOING? I just don't get it! Can't he see that all Bill wants is to know that Tom doesn't hate him?
I think all I think of what's happening can be summed up in all these quotes.
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"I'm talking about a connection. A look. Something that says that we're on the same side here." - The Story of Us
"You love who we were. You can't possibly love who we've become." - The Story of Us
"Sometimes you look at me like you wish I wasn't there, like you wish I'd just disappear." - Crazy/Beautiful
"One of these days you'll be so sorry, sorry that you let it slip away. One of these days I just won't care if you're sorry anyway."
"Have you ever had a moment when you're with the one person in the world you want to be with and the wind is blowing through your hair and the song that just describes your entire soul happens to come on and then the person you happen to want to be with happens to love the same song and suddenly you realize you're listening to it together and no matter how crazy your life has gotten there's this one moment, this perfect moment where you could just say that no matter what happens nothing can take this moment away from me.....and then something does." - Roswell
"There are certain things in life that are worth living for. What we have is one of them. Please don't take this away from me." - Passions
"By the time you realize what you're losing, I'll be lost." - Down to You
"I hope and I pray that there's something left to say."
"We were perfect when we started; I've been wondering where we've gone."
"So I'm slipping out of your head while you stay put in mine."
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Everything just makes me sad, but I do hope they talk and that Bill doesn't lose himself inside his mind. Tom has effectively cut him lose (or so it seems) and he's going to need all the love he can get to get through it.
However, I did love this chapter, as all the previous chapters before it.
Truly wonderful heartbreaking story! <33333
Author's Response: I just posted a new chapter from Tom's POV, so hopefully that is helpful to your confusion :) But WOWW, those quotes are awesome!!!!! They truly capture the essence of this story. Just...thank you for that! And thank you for the review! So, so, so much! I've probably already told you this, but I love your reviews. :D
Date: 09/27/09 11:45 pm Title: I Love You
ARGGGGGGGG!!!!!!!!! no!!! Why did you have to end it THERE?!?!?! bah!!!!
I love it though XD lol, just saying. I thought it was an awesome chapter. It didn't seem too drawn out, maybe a little rushed, not quite sure where, but I think I would've liked some more something when they were writing the song. hahaha!!! OMG!!! I LOVE it! like, the whole chapter, despite that you cut it off where you cut it off!!! *wails* it's horrible. But it means you'll update quicker right?!?
Okay, interesting random fact, I've found that ever since they've released Automatic/Automatisch, people have been writing the word into their story (or I'm just picking up on it now) and when it's in there, I laugh hysterically, and when it's not I giggle hysterically. So, despite how horribly sad this chapter was, and how much I love it because I LOVE angst, I'm giggling. *giggle* automatic...
okay, so um...thoughts...do I have any? no, I think my brain turned to mush reading that last part and just staring at the screen like "omg...it did not just end there..."
Even Uncle Wolfgang’s eyes lost the fiery, and disturbing, passion that once occupied his black orbs.
for some reason that made me so much sadder, it really got me in the mood. Probably because I love Uncle Wolfgang, lol...I mean, he's just that crazy relative everyone has, and he's...sad... :(
After devastating moments of silence, Tom placed his hands on Bill’s shoulders and pushed him back.
that line, just wow...it was just like this calm, surreal moment to me, with the snow spinning outside, and Tom's face looks like this cold iceberg type of thing to me (it sounds funny, but it's actually quite scary looking) and just, idk... lovely darlin’, you did a lovely job n_n there was something else I was going to say, but I can't remember it...
Author's Response: I'm so mean, aren't I?! *evil laughter* hehe jk. Oh yeah, when writing the song part I kind of felt like it didn't need to be described in detail, just the overall gist of it, because that was most important, but then again I was also being super lazy lol. Yes, I updated! It's quite an accomplishment, I think it's like 3 or 4 weeks of weekly updating. Oh, um....I'm pretty sure I didn't use the word 'automatic.' Atleast, I didn't find it when I read through it. Yesssss Uncle Wolfgang is such an amazing creeper!! :D I was hoping that the lack of creeperness might set the mood lol. Thank you so much for all your amazing reviews!!! I loooove them. rn
Date: 09/27/09 03:40 pm Title: I Love You
I LOVE IT.
FAVORITE CHAPTER.
Seriously, this is the shit!
Author's Response: GAH I'm so glad you like it! :]
Date: 09/27/09 02:13 pm Title: I Love You
Wow. I just read all of this, and wow, it's absolutely lovely :) I love the idea of this, and it's just so well written! Your imagery and descriptive words are so nice, your writing style has amazing flow, and I can feel the emotion in this. I feel so bad for poor Bill *_* But wow, as I said, this is lovely. And I love that last paragraph, it's just so sad, but so lovely. Amazing job on this, I'll be waiting for more ^^
Author's Response: I really appreciate your compliments!!!! Thank you so much for the review :D
Date: 09/27/09 01:11 am Title: Prologue
This story deserves a feature my friend (:
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I really appreciate the support =)
Date: 09/27/09 12:29 am Title: I Love You
i think it was good but i really hope that Tom feels the same way back for Bill and thats why he was pushing him away,maybe Tom chases after Bill and takes him back and takes care of him,and the secret he wrote was similar to Bills?
Author's Response: hmmmm, maybe! *seals lips* :P Thanks for the review! I like the optimism!
Date: 09/26/09 11:16 pm Title: I Love You
OHMAHGOD! This story does have loads of angst >.< I simply cannot wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: I know, right?! It wasn't supposed to *sigh* but I just couldn't help itt! So glad you liked it :) I'll try to get the next chapter up within the upcoming week or so.
Date: 09/26/09 08:18 pm Title: I Love You
That was beautiful. So purely breathtaking.
I think it was perfect. Not too rushed. Everything just fit together.
Author's Response: A am a big pile of gooey giddiness right now. I'm so incredibly happy you enjoyed it! :)
Date: 09/26/09 05:53 pm Title: I Love You
No, no! It was amazing! You did a wonderful job! I feel so sorry for Bill. :( But you did an awesome job. I could see Bill running in my mind. ^^ Dramatic!
Author's Response: I'm so glad you think so! Really, I was very nervous about this chapter...lots of drama and all. Thank you so much! :]]]
Date: 09/26/09 04:04 pm Title: I Love You
OMG!
I hope for the next chapter soon
Author's Response: *works furiously* :]
Date: 09/26/09 02:34 pm Title: I Love You
Shit has HIT the fannn. seriously....!!!! soooo intense. I'm wondering: is the last part Bill's attempt at suicide or something.?
Author's Response: Hmm I wouldn't classify it as suicide, but definitely along those lines.
Date: 09/26/09 02:31 pm Title: I Love You
Biiiiiiiiiiiill :'( I feel so bad for him. Almost in tears here.
Author's Response: Poor boo. No tears!!!! Things will get better :) Obviously hehe
Date: 09/26/09 01:21 pm Title: I Love You
awwwwwwww poor bill!! anyways, that was really intense i was like an inch away from my monitor screen when i read it. update soon!!
Author's Response: :D !!! Thank you for the review.
Author's Response: :D !!! Thank you for the review.
Date: 09/26/09 12:14 pm Title: I Love You
I freaking love you.
Author's Response: I freaking love YOU. :]