Date: 04/13/10 01:38 am Title: Breathe For Me
Your story is mind blowing, and it's like I can feel the pain and sorrow. The fact that you mentioned this type of situation has happened to you with your grandma is truly phenomenal. This story has heart because you write true feelings. Simply beautiful...
Date: 04/12/10 06:39 am Title: Breathe For Me
loved this! the smut scene is the only part that didnt fit, but maybe you can get someone to help you if you wanna put it in you last chappie. i loved this a lot~
Date: 04/11/10 11:14 pm Title: Breathe For Me
dont worry about the sex scene, i think in this story is relative, i really love how you describe Bill... so insecure about Tom love, i mean everybody describe Bill like is sure about Tom loves, i really like this story
Date: 04/11/10 11:10 pm Title: Breathe For Me
Wow... I found that conversation very devastating. Im sorry that had to happen to you :(
I thought that it wouldn't have worked if the sex had been explicit. I liked how the sex wasn't lustful and horny it was more love and passion. It was really well done, seriously.
I never want this fic to be over, but I seriously CANNOT wait to see how it DOES end lol.
Update soon to let me keep my sanity lol.
Date: 04/11/10 10:34 pm Title: Breathe For Me
Okay missy! You're in for it! You think you can just waltz in here and ramdomly update?!
Well I'm happy you did!:)) hehe
I'm so happy the wait is over, and sorry to hear about your grandma:( That must have been hard.
And I have a new song for youu!!
Bill and Tom sittin' in a tree.... F-U-C-K-I-N-G....
Okay, maybe a little uncalled forr.... XD
But I've got to say... FINALLY! *relief* I mean Im glad Tom gave into his senses!
So thank you for updating, I loved it and... really?! *squeaks* only one more chapter?!
*dies* Update soon please!:))
Date: 04/11/10 10:19 pm Title: Breathe For Me
I honestly loved this. You did an amazing job... that would be creepy though.. the grandma thing. I'm sorry.
Author's Response: I'm so happy you do! Thank you very much. Yeah, it was a bit creepy. It really hit me hard and made me think a lot about life though, and I used it in this story too, so it worked out nicely! Thanks for the review!
Date: 04/11/10 09:29 pm Title: Breathe For Me
This was so deep.
I genreally HATE when the mood is so bittersweet, and the characters have sex, but this was like..so perfect. It just FIT.
The need for eachother..and just aboslute love for eachother, was just so beautiful. You do an amazing job with this, really :)
I love this story. So much.
I hope you can update soon ^_^
Author's Response: I'm glad that the bittersweet mood didn't ruin it for you :D Thank you very much for the review. I appreciate it!
Date: 04/11/10 09:26 pm Title: Breathe For Me
Yay ! I'm so happy about this update ! I will have to re-read this fic when it's finished cause I don't remember the beginning that well... anyway, I love this chap, so worth the wait ! I really didn't mind the fact that the scene wasn't explicit cause your writing is so beautiful that it was more original reading about it that way. It's not every author who can do it but I think you succeed in making the scene powerful and sweet without giving explicit details! I can't wait for the last chapter !
Author's Response: Thank you sooooo much! That really means a lot to me that you think that the sex scene worked...gosh, I was so insecure about it haha! You're reviews are always wonderful, thank you very much :]
Date: 04/11/10 09:05 pm Title: Breathe For Me
"an unfathomable connection of body and soul was born straight from the womb of forbidden love"
you have an amazing way with words.
keep up the good work!
Author's Response: Aw, thank you! :)
Date: 04/11/10 08:53 pm Title: Breathe For Me
Scene with gramma made my throat clench, cause I knew it would affect Bill more somehow, but oh! Their moment together was just so perfect that it just leaves me with a sigh of relief that FINALLY they are where they needed to be and will connect again the way it was meant to.
I just...love this story and I'm so glad that Bill finally found his Tomi again and that Tom found his Bill.
Author's Response: The grandma scene was totally spur of the moment when I sat down to write a few hours ago actually! This chapter had different plans at first, but I'm glad you liked how it turned out :) Thank you for the review!
Date: 03/13/10 02:21 pm Title: We Need To Talk
Gah! I loved it! Geez, there were some moments where I just wanted to literally knock some sense into Tom. But they're together now and I'm happy. Wonderful job, update soonnnnn. :)
Author's Response: I know what you mean! But that's life. There are plenty of people I wish I could knock some sense into :P Thank you very much for the review :D
Date: 03/08/10 09:46 pm Title: Miserable Clarity
oh geez... the last sentence made me cry!! well, the whole chapter in general did, but now i'm crying a river!! this is such a good story :)
Author's Response: Aw thank you :) So sweet. I'm gald you like it.
Date: 02/28/10 06:19 am Title: We Need To Talk
good so good. i love it
Author's Response: I'm glad :]
Date: 02/27/10 01:52 pm Title: I Love You
Don't be insecure, this is amazing. Like I said before, I'm a fan of events that can be realistic (not like the ones where Bill confesses his love and Tom immediately responds back with a passionate kiss) and this...I can see this happening--so good job! XD
Author's Response: Great! Thanks :)
Date: 02/27/10 01:23 pm Title: What Difference Does That Make
I love it just the way it is. I adore angst. Because that's real life.
Author's Response: I love angst too :)
Date: 01/29/10 08:14 pm Title: We Need To Talk
OMG write more! I love it! It has kept me up for hours because I could not stop reading it! Continue! :)
Author's Response: I'm sooo glad you liked it! Hopefully I'll be able to update soon, but I'm juggling a ton of stories right now. Thank you for the review! :D
Date: 01/07/10 09:05 am Title: We Need To Talk
Even though several times you switched to present tense (and you might wanna adjust that), OMG that was so cute and awesome!
I especially loved the longer paragraph near the end. *Beautiful* writing there.
Author's Response: I apologize, that is one of my weaknesses as a writer. Some of my stories are set in present, and others in past tense, and I tend to forget which ones are which and switch them up a bit. Thank you so so much! I'm glad you enjoy it :) And thank you for the review
Date: 01/06/10 06:26 pm Title: We Need To Talk
awehh!!
it was so.. soo .. BEAUTIFUL!!
im in tears!!
oh man!!
i lovee itt!
Author's Response: I'm so happy you liked it!!!
Date: 01/02/10 10:06 pm Title: We Need To Talk
Boring? Pfft, I love your style of writing, and I don't think I could ever get bored with it.
“I love you. I’m in love with you.” Tom spoke the words straight into the crescent of Bill’s small ear as if to make sure that he heard it loud and clear.
Me? I melted right there with a big smile on my face, and a few giggles. I'm so sad to see this coming to an end. It's such a beautiful story. You know, so many people use the part where Bill brings up the girls, but everyone uses it in their own way so beautifully, I love that argument between the boys every time. XD You do such a beautiful job in writing. n_n
Author's Response: Aw thank you! That's very sweet of you to say. And oh yes, I implemented the classic "Bill/girl" argument haha. Thank you so much for the review!!!!
Date: 12/31/09 05:28 pm Title: We Need To Talk
i thought this chapter was great. no worries. i cant wait for the rest of this!!
Author's Response: I'm so glad! :)