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Reviewer: Sieren Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/12/09 04:39 pm Title: You Know What I Want

Thanks

Author's Response: For what? I should be thanking YOU :]

Reviewer: Nia Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/12/09 12:36 pm Title: You Know What I Want

;_; You're killing me.

I'm gonna kick Tom's ass if he doesn't sit down and have a PROPER talk with his brother =/

Author's Response: Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: PurpleSkittlez Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/12/09 11:03 am Title: You Know What I Want

This is amazing. Honestly. I cannot wait for the next chapter. Pleasepleaseplease have it up soon!

PS. I also have an angst fetish. :) The more, the better.



Author's Response: either today or tomorrow, for sure! Yesss I am not alone :D hehe thank you so much for reviewing

Reviewer: han Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/12/09 09:13 am Title: You Know What I Want

oh god...i can't believe tom...he hurt bill again...after what happened...:(...

Author's Response: But you have to think from Tom's perspective, too. He's angry and confused and he doesn't really know how to deal with everything you know? But that still doesn't justify hurting Bill lol! Thank you so much for the review :]

Reviewer: thywillbedone Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 10/12/09 04:26 am Title: You Know What I Want

Oh GOD! *clutches heart, but at the same time goes to smack Tom* DON'T KISS HIM THE NEXT TIME, YOU IDIOT! You cannot play with people's emotions like that, even if you are scared. Bill has thrown every single fear he had and FACED his by revealing his feelings and yet here you are, KISSING HIM BACK, only to backpedal because morality for you JUST kicked it? How convenient!

But wouldn't it hurt Bill how much of a coward his rock is.

Be a man dammit, and TALK to your brother properly, rather than what your fear dictates.



Author's Response: HAHA You said it, girl! Thanks for the review :]

Reviewer: Steinsgrrl Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/12/09 02:45 am Title: You Know What I Want

I have an angst fetish, too, but whoa. I know sometimes things happen in the dark that surprise us in the light. I imagine he is so cruel to Bill because he's angry with himself. Or I could be completely wrong. All I know is that by the end of this chapter, my chest hurt and I had tears welling. Which I guess means you blew me away. As always, I look forward to the next chapter. :D

Author's Response: Oooh I very much like that line!! Of course Tom's in a very confused place right now and doesn't know what to do, so anger is rational to him. He's defensive and angry with himself! Yes! Oh Gosh, I love you so much. Thank you for all of the encouraging words and support :DD

Reviewer: DaphneKaulitz Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/12/09 02:11 am Title: You Know What I Want

awwwww, let them be together... please? just look at how its killing Bill.. and Tom...

Author's Response: Hmmm maybe ;] Thank you for the review

Reviewer: final_thunder Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/08/09 09:04 am Title: Miserable Clarity

Soo good....just sooo good...I've waited for this and now it's finally HERE!

Author's Response: THANK YOU ich liebe dich :D

Reviewer: AprilBlue Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/08/09 06:05 am Title: Miserable Clarity

Oh god, i'm crying... Ah, STUPID Tom. How could you not realise you love Bill? He must live! *wishing for Bill to get better*

Author's Response: *hands you a box of tissues*!! Thank you for the review. Hopefully things will get better.

Reviewer: RikkiKaulitzKiro Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/07/09 03:13 pm Title: Miserable Clarity

Ohhhh shiznitt!!!!! Wow. This chapter is so sad but hAppy at the same time!!! Can't wait till the next one

Author's Response: Total mixture of emotions haha. Thanks for the review :)

Reviewer: Toxic Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/06/09 11:59 pm Title: Miserable Clarity

Iv been dieing for this update!! God I love this story!! This chap came out great :D I love Toms pov!! Cant want for the next one!!!!

Author's Response: Thank you very much :D

Reviewer: violet_star77 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/05/09 04:28 am Title: Miserable Clarity

oh, poor tom, he finally gets its! which is a good thing, its just sad its under such dire circumstances. keep up the great work!

Author's Response: Yes, finally! Well, those dire circumstances prompted it all. Thank you so much :)

Reviewer: mrs-kaulitz092398 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/04/09 01:51 pm Title: Miserable Clarity

OMG this is so sad.

Author's Response: :)

Reviewer: laughingatyourface Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/04/09 12:39 pm Title: Prologue

Lol yeah I kinda am XD
I often suddenly start to think about this story that hasn't been updated in a while, later that day or the next day its updated! XD And I often dream about reading parts of the story and so on XDD

Author's Response: Bahaha, you're lucky. I'm sure tons of people on this site would LOVE to have your psycic-powers :] That's weird though because with my stories I never write them in advance...I literally sit down on (usually) Friday night and go "okay, it's time to crank out another chapter" and I just go with my gut feeling and post it right after I'm done. So it's all completely unpredictable.

Reviewer: laughingatyourface Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/04/09 12:28 pm Title: Miserable Clarity

Well I did dream about the end as well, when they reached the rest of the family, so I dunno, but I do that with a lot of fics XD

Author's Response: That's pretty cool! You're like a fanfic-psycic :D

Reviewer: laughingatyourface Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/04/09 09:49 am Title: Miserable Clarity

oh God, that last part where Tom falls and then he finds Bill and stuff, I remember that from a dream, like not being there, but reading it! XD

Author's Response: That's so weird! Maybe because a part of that was in the prologue...? Or you are just supernaturally connected to this fic lol :P Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: thywillbedone Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 10/04/09 08:47 am Title: Miserable Clarity

Where one half goes, the other will follow to feel complete. Please let this be in a good way and not an end. I've never asked anyone anything in a fic before, but I cannot bear it if Bill doesn't make it back safe. :(

Author's Response: Don't worry! I can't really say anything else, just, well don't worry. I guess worry a little bit. Haha. But not too much!

Reviewer: Steinsgrrl Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/04/09 07:58 am Title: Miserable Clarity

I think you damn near broke my heart! Still, Tom got his wake up call. You know I can't wait for more.

Author's Response: You're right, at least Tom understands now. :] I hope to reverse your heart-breaking in later chapters...maybe :D Thanks soo much for reviewing!

Reviewer: aarriiaannaax5 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/04/09 02:11 am Title: Miserable Clarity

omg, awesome!

Author's Response: YOU are awesome :D

Reviewer: Minibar Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/04/09 12:40 am Title: Miserable Clarity

Thanks so much for updating, this story has me hooked. :)

Author's Response: It's my pleasure! Thank you for the review. :D

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