Date: 10/19/09 02:44 am Title: I've Always Cared
lol i love the last line tom said :)
Author's Response: haha Thanks!!
Date: 10/19/09 02:20 am Title: You Know What I Want
T_T Stop making my cry goddamnit!!!
:)
Author's Response: *hands a ginormous box of tissues* :)
Date: 10/19/09 02:12 am Title: I've Always Cared
Amazing... Yay Yay Yay! Im so happy that Tom told Bill his feelings too! Ughh I cant wait for the next chapter!!!
Author's Response: :)
Date: 10/19/09 01:39 am Title: I've Always Cared
HOLY CRAP!
YESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS!!!!!!!!!!
the ending..just...ugh! it killed me. in a very good way...which included much giggling and smiling. :) loveyou
Author's Response: yayy!
Date: 10/19/09 01:28 am Title: I Love You
omg. i cant even begin to describe how this had me feeling.. i found myself holding my breath a few times. (until my head hurt!) and there were tears.. quite a few tears... ughh....
Author's Response: I'm glad that you're so emotionally in tune with this :) It makes me happy
Date: 10/19/09 12:04 am Title: I've Always Cared
What a wonderful treat before bedtime. You are an excellent dramatic writer and I love it.
Author's Response: Thank you very much :)
Date: 10/18/09 11:52 pm Title: I've Always Cared
Awwwwww ;_;
Bill was being a bit unfair, talking of quitting the band and moving away from Tom. His poor brother had no clue what to do :( But I'm glad that Tom let Bill know how much he meant to him, and how he really DID love him =] This was a bit sad at first, but ended up being really sweet! :D
2-3 chapters? *sniffles*
Author's Response: I know, so sad! And yes, sweet, too :]] The journey is slowly coming to an end. :(
Date: 10/18/09 11:23 pm Title: I've Always Cared
I just love the all the angst, it's so good. :) Thanks so much for updating!
Author's Response: Glad you like it! Thank YOU for reviewing :P
Date: 10/18/09 11:20 pm Title: I've Always Cared
Omg look how many reads you got now hun. I'm soooo happy they featured this. I loeveth you and you're story. Mhm mhm
Author's Response: I'm totally blown away!! I can't believe I got featured! THANK YOU SOSOSOO MUCH (:
Date: 10/18/09 11:17 pm Title: I've Always Cared
im crying of happiness! omg.. okay yay!!!!!!!! update soon, love!
Author's Response: :D yay happy tears! I'll try for an update this weekend :) Even though I won't have time to write until Sunday....
Date: 10/18/09 10:57 pm Title: I've Always Cared
I believe we know what side of the fence tTom is on now! :D
Author's Response: Or do we? Just kidding, just kidding! Or am I? :PPP
Date: 10/18/09 10:50 pm Title: I've Always Cared
I loved this chapter!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: I'm happy you did :DD
Date: 10/18/09 10:45 pm Title: I've Always Cared
This is a wonderful chapter, and I love the ending of it. Finally, Tom knows. I just really love it. If I was more conscious I would be more descriptive, but I'm not, so I can't.
Author's Response: I appreciate the review all the same :) I'm so glad you enjoyed it!
Date: 10/18/09 10:43 pm Title: I've Always Cared
Told you it should be featured ;)
Author's Response: Thanks so much for the support :D
Date: 10/18/09 10:34 pm Title: I've Always Cared
lol, like being featured could top a review XD lol, there were so many little key sentences in here, I want to put down and point out to you, but I think you know them all XD the notes, re-showing them to Bill, while at the same time showing us the letters, it was dramatic, and I loved it. Especially the way they were all written. They were written as a younger person would think, and pretty much all said they loved Bill, but at the same time, they showed how Tom was dancing around the topic/truth, even when he was that young :)
That line, golden. Second to last line, said by Tom, effing golden XD Anyway, beginning of the chapter, I just, idk, it was golden :) Even before Bill said to Tom that what he was doing was just making it worse, I could feel that, just in the way Bill responded, and the whole build up of the story. I loved that n_n But the whole threatening (going) to leave TH and get own apartment, just, wow that was kind of scary, because I didn't think Tom would do anything except protest. SO glad he did more than that XD hehe, you deserved the feature :) lovely chapter here, and I like how you brought New Years in, idk if it was just because of fireworks so you could have that scene with this line (that I LOVE)
It was as if the fireworks blazing in the sky had collided with his skin
But I think it was a nice way to kind of remind us what kind of time frame is left before their break is over, and everyone has to part. So yeah n_n lol, lovely job, darlin’ :)
Author's Response: Especially YOUR review! YES, exactly, that was the point of the notes. So glad you caught onto that! I know, right? It was time Tom took some action before everything fell apart even more :) Oh yeah, my time fram is kind of off because I basically skipped right over Christmas (shhh! lol) but I thought that New Year's would be a good time to set up time context and, of course, the fireworks :D THANK YOU SO MUCH! I thoroughly enjoy all of your reviews.
Date: 10/18/09 10:31 pm Title: I've Always Cared
I would love to review but my hands are shaking and all my words have flown out of my head.
Congratulations on the feature. You deserve it so much, and I really hope many more people read this. It's so damn good.
Author's Response: Oh Gosh, thank you so much!! :) So glad you like it!!!!!
Date: 10/18/09 10:25 pm Title: I've Always Cared
I have decided to make your day. :D
Your dramatic mood has made this one of the best chapters so far! Keep it up!
Author's Response: Oooh thank you very much! *My day is officially made*! :) Thank you so much
Date: 10/18/09 10:15 pm Title: I've Always Cared
No no no more chapters then that lol I love the story lol. It is really good
Author's Response: Lol every story must come to an end sometime :) Yay I'm glad you like it
Date: 10/18/09 10:12 pm Title: I've Always Cared
*grins widely and shakes*
i feel another round of giggles coming on....
OOMMYYYGODDD YESSS!!! HE--TOM--HE KISSED--AND YES--THE SECRETS--*chokes*
i LOVE THIS CHAPTER!!!!! Omg, i don't think i've ever liked any angsty story this much before!! Gawd, this is like a treasure chest!!! *rubs tummy* YAYYY!!!!
argh, the tears are so awesome, and when Tom was screaming at him, just--just--*long sigh* it is wonderful... :D
Author's Response: :DDDD I love you! Bahaha. Thank you very much for reviewing. I'M SO HAPPY YOU LIKE IT!
Date: 10/18/09 10:05 pm Title: I've Always Cared
>:O!
IF THERE'S ONLY 2-3 CHAPTERS LEFT, I'M GOING TO BEAT YOU WITH A STICK.
THERE BETTER BE ANOTHER 5,000 CHAPTERS! >:O
Author's Response: Oh shit! *whimpers and hides under a rock* Um...they will be very long and all-inclusive chapters??