Date: 07/15/09 05:55 pm Title: Chapter 8: Dinner Dates and Flying Cakes and Other Stuff.
Death by cake! That's great. Isn't there a real dessert called Death By Chocolate? I think it's some sort of cake. It's fitting, really, if you think about it...
Loving this story. Update soon, OK?
Author's Response: hahahaha. yea. i love that part xD and i didn't know that there was a dessert caleld that, but i'd totes wanna try it xD and i'm glad you're loving this, and i'll update soon ^_^
Date: 07/15/09 03:51 pm Title: Chapter 8: Dinner Dates and Flying Cakes and Other Stuff.
aww plplplzplzplzplz update sooonn..thx sososo much=]=]
Author's Response: okie dokie i shall love ^_^
Date: 07/15/09 12:43 pm Title: Chapter 8: Dinner Dates and Flying Cakes and Other Stuff.
I loved the food fight between Bill and Tom! Especially the whole "death-by-cake" thing...I was rolling! Awesome chaper!
Author's Response: hahahha. i love the food fight too dahlin ^_^ and yea xD that scene had me falling off my computer chair xD
Date: 07/15/09 12:36 pm Title: Chapter 8: Dinner Dates and Flying Cakes and Other Stuff.
LOL!! ah.. the family dinner was so cute~ XDD hahaha but i am glad Bill and Tom could make up. At least they are on better terms now :333 yay~ I wonder if Tom has figured out that Bill is a boy yet. ._.;; He can't be that dense...can he?? 0_0;; LOL
Author's Response: hahahaha. danke fur calling it cute. it took FOREVER for me to finish it xD and i'm glad they could make up too ^_^ operation get them together is definitely on the way xD and Bill's dense xD only one..well two people (other than Bu) know that he's a guy, so maybe EVERYONE is dense xD
Date: 07/15/09 11:39 am Title: Chapter 8: Dinner Dates and Flying Cakes and Other Stuff.
awesome chapter!! :D i like Tom's grandma! :)) sooo cool! haha!
Author's Response: awww. danke fur calling this chapter awesome ^_^ and i like Tom's grandma too!
Date: 07/15/09 09:50 am Title: Chapter 8: Dinner Dates and Flying Cakes and Other Stuff.
Woohooo!!!! I so love their family!!! It's just like my circle of friends just not Gay people but bordering!!
This is soo darn awesome!! I think I like this better than coffee prince and... I admit.. I understand Bu's character already.
this is darn wicked!! Totes!!
Author's Response: hahahah. i'm glad that you love their family ^_^ and haha for amanzing circle of friends ^_^
i'm glad that you think this is awesome and *le gasp* ebtter than coffee prince? *blushes* woahness. xD and I'm SOOOO glad that SOMEONE understand's Bu's character xD
Date: 07/15/09 09:32 am Title: Chapter 8: Dinner Dates and Flying Cakes and Other Stuff.
OMG I LOVE THOSE SHOES!! Ahahahaha..XDXD
I love the shoes. Renee must really be a fan of anime because.. Why the lolita dress?? Ahahaha..XD And did I say I love those shoes?? I LOVE THE SHOES!!XD LMAO!!XD
Anyways... I like Renee. Even if she's spoiled and a bit bitchy too. Like 'em tough girls. Hahaha..XD And again, this is one of the very few fics that I enjoy Bushido - because he's not groping on Bill..-__- HeeeeXDXD
Ooooohh.. I feel the Tom x Bill starting to develop. Hahaha..XD Well, just a little...XD
Thank you so much for the update. And I love those shoes. ROFL!!XD
Author's Response: hahaha. i'm glad you like them! i'm SO buying them xD
and I'm more of a fan of anime than Renee is xD I TOTES love Lolita dresses, especially on Bill xD and hahahah you and those shoes xD
and yea, Renee's cool. i like that she takes no shit, but she's still nice in her own way xD and yea, Bushido's cool. i wanted to make him not so...annoying? xD
and yea, it's developing..at a snail's pace -.- xD
and hahahah i'm sure the shoes love you too by now xD
Date: 07/15/09 08:25 am Title: Chapter 8: Dinner Dates and Flying Cakes and Other Stuff.
Oooo, hehehe, I did like this chapter n_n lol, it was lots of fun. I have to say I think I'm in love with Renee. Lol, and perhaps Vivi too. They're both so much fun! :)
“We all bet her it’d be the kitchen knives rather than the cake.”
Hahahaha!!!! Seee!? Lots of funnn!! anyway...
“Er, Bu, sweetie. Shut it. You’re dating someone that looks like he’s twelve.”
Yes, Vivi :) lol, they family is lots of fun, and despite everything, it seems like Tom is the only normalish one. Or at least the most normal :)
“What should I wear to work tomorrow?”
Awww :) this I think was the big awww moment, at least to me. Just so happy Bill is going back to work. I can just see Tom saying whatever he says, and then turning around with this great huge smile on his face. Like scary huge :) Hmmm... since Georg and Gustav work as guys (I'm assuming as guys) at the cafe, does that mean Bill can? Hmmm, so how I hope not. I mean, shouldn't Tom worry about he's going straight (because he is going to fall for Bill/Billa won't he?)
Must I mention the dress? Ooo, I love it :) Very nice :)
Or at the very least was a character from one of those weird anime shows his brother always watched.
Is this also perhaps you? lol. I saw a few more spelling errors than normal, and there were just enough for me to sort of be looking at them, rather than reading the story as much, so look out for that next time? lol, but not complaining really since you got the chapter posted so soon :)
Author's Response: i'm glad you liked the chapter love ^_^ and hahaha I'm glad you like Renee. I generally try to make OFC's that are likeable lol.
and yea...the kitchen knives vs. cake....cake will ALWAYS win.
and Vivi is amazing and mhm.
Bu's a molester xD and Tom is FAR from normalish xD
and yea...i liked that point....i'm glad that Bill's coming back to work for Tom. and the thing with Georg and Gustav are that they get paid like half of the salary that the girl's get paid.
and thanks for pointing out my mistakes. i had written this chapter after like three hours of sleep, and could be bothered sit and review it carefully since i was practically fainting in my seat from exhaustion. but i'll definitely go over it again when i have time. ^_^
Date: 07/15/09 07:47 am Title: Chapter 8: Dinner Dates and Flying Cakes and Other Stuff.
eeeeeeee YAY G's !!
Author's Response: haha yea. the g's are finally introduced, but don't worry, they'll be main characters soon ^_^
Date: 07/15/09 06:57 am Title: Chapter 8: Dinner Dates and Flying Cakes and Other Stuff.
I KNOW!!
It was so odd to be chattering into silence at random during the five hours today.
DEATH BY CAKE! Epic, truely epic.. but the cake is a lie you know >.>
Author's Response: hahaha. blame the baby and my adhd for the silence xD
and hahah *finally got the cake thing because you explained it to me* i'm still using that somewhere xD
Date: 07/15/09 06:05 am Title: Chapter 8: Dinner Dates and Flying Cakes and Other Stuff.
LOVE your fics! Its so funny! I love the dress that Renee stuffed Bill in! IT's so cute!!!
Give me more soon please
Author's Response: lol. yay i'm so glad that you love my fics ^_^ and that you think it's funny. and i'm happy that you liked the dress ^_^ i always love picking out dresses for Bill xD
Date: 07/15/09 05:35 am Title: Chapter 8: Dinner Dates and Flying Cakes and Other Stuff.
Oh my another update, I may be falling irrevocably in love with your story =)
Author's Response: hahah. yea another update xD they're usually only a day apart, but yesterday was hell xD and *le gasp* I am SO happy that you're falling for my story ^_^
Date: 07/15/09 05:24 am Title: Chapter 8: Dinner Dates and Flying Cakes and Other Stuff.
'break him out of his shelly'- that line made me laugh sooo hard ^^
I love this fic. But really- hurry up with the Tom/Bill.
It would be soo hot if Renee really started liking Bill. Rivals in love.
Author's Response: hahaha *shell. i'm WAY too used to writing my own name apparently xD and i'm glad that you love this fic, love, but you can't rush them, they'll fall in love in their own time. and hahah Renee has NO interest in Bill. Like at all xD
Date: 07/15/09 03:57 am Title: Chapter 8: Dinner Dates and Flying Cakes and Other Stuff.
*smiles* That was the best dinner ever and then the end made me happy. So Tom can sorta be nice lol. I'm excited to read the next chapter boo. I love you!!
Author's Response: hahah. danke, danke. that's how dinner is when my fam's together, and i', Tom always getting picked up, but I have magical awesomeness like Bill and always manage to change the subject xD
and i'm glad you liked the end (my favorite part was Bill trying to kill him with cake xD) and yea, Tom can be nice....although he has to be PUSHED xD
Date: 07/15/09 03:47 am Title: Chapter 7: Third Days and Huge Fights.
I actually laughed when he hit Tom. I was like "Haha hoshit!" *grins*
Author's Response: hahaha. yea. xD but Tom so deserved it xD
Date: 07/15/09 03:39 am Title: Chapter 6: Second Days Pt.2 and Surprises.
*grins* This chapter was great. Favorite part was you calling Tom, Andi's love-bitch haha. And this dress is my favorite so far. *reads on*
Author's Response: hahaha. i'm glad that you loved the chapter, Tom being Andi' love-bitch and the dress xD
Date: 07/15/09 03:25 am Title: Chapter 8: Dinner Dates and Flying Cakes and Other Stuff.
WEEE!!! I get the giggles whenever you updated XD
Author's Response: hahaha. yay my updates make you giggle! *dances*
Date: 07/15/09 03:24 am Title: Chapter 5: Breakfast Talk and Second Day Pt.1
*grins* So. I actually like this Bushido. *le gasp* lol. I really liked this chapter and I smiled when I found out that Bushido and Tom are cousins. *snorts* It's great that Andi is gayer than Tom lmfao. *reads on*
Author's Response: hahaha. i told you! he's a good guy in here. xD i didn't wnna portray him as this big ole oaf xD and haha yea. the cousin bit. didn't know how to work that in until later on xD and yea.. Andi is Bill in real life xD
Date: 07/15/09 03:12 am Title: Chapter 4: First Days Pt. 3 and Goodnights.
I died at this: “Sure thing, doll. I’d like to order your number and have a side of you on your back to go.” lol. And that song was sooo cheesy, but great. And Tom's gayness kills me. The last line was *shakes head* He says he's not flamboyant, but that makes me wonder lmao. *reads on*
Author's Response: hahahahah. yea. i had fun with this chapter xD everyone was insane, everything was the weird/scary/wacky kind of crazy and Tom still kept his gayness xD
Date: 07/15/09 02:59 am Title: Chapter 8: Dinner Dates and Flying Cakes and Other Stuff.
I can't wait for the parts where Bill and Tom start to like each other ^^ Especially to know Bill's feelings at the moment.
And to know Tom's reaction when he finds out that Bill is a boy xD Because Bill really has balls ;)
Very nice chapter. Just have to love their grandma!
xx
Author's Response: *grins* I can't wait for that part either, although i'm pretty happy with the fact that this chapter brought Bill back to the cafe, which means that Bill doesn't completely hate Tom and that there will be more opportunities for them to come to like each other.
and woosh. Tom's reaction will be....bad *shakes head* i can't wait xD
I'm glad that you liked the chapter and yea, I love their grandma ^_^