Date: 07/26/09 08:31 pm Title: Chapter 10: First Days Back and A Peek Through The Looking Glass Pt.2
I want Tom to find out that Bill is a boy so bad!!!
I think it's cute Tom find out he was gay at such a young age, I don't why but it's cute.
Anyway, loved the chap
xx
Author's Response: hahaha. he will. eventually. when they're in lurve xD
and i thought it was cute too don't worry ^_^
and i'm glad you loved the chap ^_^
Date: 07/26/09 08:26 pm Title: Chapter 10: First Days Back and A Peek Through The Looking Glass Pt.2
Oooo! Pretty dress! This story is reminding me more and more of Ouran (but that's a great thing!). I keep imagining Tom as Tamaki... XD
I really liked this chapter (though I was hoping the entire time for Tom to somehow walk in on Bill) XD Oh well, a little soon for that, perhaps. Not comes the obligatory 'please update soon' :)
I'm addicted to the Backyardigans & I'm blaming Taken. And you. Mostly you, with a little bit of Taken (since you wrote it and all). Not that that's a bad thing, but I got some strange stares from my family. Apparently a 19-year-old female isn't supposed to enjoy that kind of show when there are no kids around :/
Anyway, have a nice day :)
Author's Response: awww, i'm glad you like the dress (i always have fun picking them out lol) and yea, it's kinda wedged between Ouran and Coffee Prince, but I like that, because both of those are amazing shows lol.
and i'm glad you liked the chapter xD and yea, it's too early for him to be walking in on him. hell find out eventually. when they're in lurve xD
and hahahahahahaha it's not my or Taken's fault >.> ok, maybe just a little bit xD and yea, it is weird, i get those same looks hun xD
Date: 07/26/09 07:23 pm Title: Chapter 10: First Days Back and A Peek Through The Looking Glass Pt.2
Bill's making progess with Tom. I cant wait to find out Tom's reaction when he finds out Bill is not a girl! I hope that they can be still friends! Update soon!
=)
Author's Response: yeppers, he deifnitely is, and i'm super happy about it ^_^ and hahaha I can't wait for his reaction either, although by then they'll hopefully become more than friends lol.
Date: 07/26/09 06:19 pm Title: Chapter 10: First Days Back and A Peek Through The Looking Glass Pt.2
Ok, now I just want Tom to find out Bill's a guy and freak out and realize he's totally attracted to him. But I did like this side of Tom that came out in this chapter, it was... nice?
Author's Response: hahaha. sadly enough, that won't happen for a while. I'm building it slowly, because Tom doesn't like-like Bill. he just likes him as a friend, and as someone that he has fun making fun of xD And Yea, Tom's nice side came out. Iunno if it's gonna stay out though xD
Date: 07/26/09 06:07 pm Title: Chapter 9: First Days Back and A Peek Through The Looking Glass Pt.1
Oh for gods sake Tom's driving me a little nuts, Bill's totally justified in hitting him, I would too.
Author's Response: hahaha. Yea, Tom's insane, but it's more because he loves Bill's reactions to his insanity. xD and Bill is ALWAYS justified in hitting Tom xD
Date: 07/26/09 06:01 pm Title: Chapter 8: Dinner Dates and Flying Cakes and Other Stuff.
I think I'm in love w/ this story. Your sense of humor is off the wall. I prticularly am loving Vivi. She's amazing!
Author's Response: awww. i'm glad that you think that you love this ^_^ and haha i'm glad you think that way of my sense of humor ^_^ and lol. i'm happy you like Vivi too! xD
Date: 07/26/09 05:48 pm Title: Chapter 7: Third Days and Huge Fights.
Wow, I have to admit, I loved Bill in this, that was amazing, how he bitched out Tom.
Author's Response: lol. hahaha. awww. i'm glad that you love Bill in this ^^ and yea, I loved him bitching out Tom xD
Date: 07/26/09 05:46 pm Title: Chapter 1: Interview.
I like the sound of that!!! ^^
Author's Response: haha. yay then ^_^
Date: 07/26/09 05:17 pm Title: Chapter 10: First Days Back and A Peek Through The Looking Glass Pt.2
You know, Tom is starting to grow on me too, lol. Cause omg, is he flaming gay to the point of being just too damn annoying, but awww, he designed something for Bill specifically and that would just tickle me pink. I WOULD give him a chance after that, lol.
Author's Response: Awww *grins* I'm ga;d he's starting to grow on you love. And yea, he can be annoying, but I think it's a Trumper family trait xD And yea, I thought that aspect of it was cute and he's giving him a chance....and bigger chance than either of them realize.
Date: 07/26/09 05:09 pm Title: Chapter 10: First Days Back and A Peek Through The Looking Glass Pt.2
This is starting to really move somewhere and it's exciting. Dang, if Bill is Yom's inspiration for dress-making, then I can only imagine what type of kinky thoughts would be running through his head the minute he finds out Bill's a guy. I will greatly look forward to whenever he does find out, though.
Author's Response: hahaha. i'm gld you see the movement, because i sooo didn't while writing this and i got sooo upset with myself because i felt liket hey were tooooo awkward. lol. and hahaha. When Tom finds out, it'll be hell on earth, but then he'll get over it and be all yum imma make you a kinky dress xD
Date: 07/26/09 04:34 pm Title: Chapter 10: First Days Back and A Peek Through The Looking Glass Pt.2
Aww Tutu was cute designing a dress for Billa.. erm when will Bill find the time to wear it?
Author's Response: lol. asl me on msn and maybe i'll tell you xD hahaha and awww. i thought it might be ^^
Date: 07/26/09 04:00 pm Title: Chapter 10: First Days Back and A Peek Through The Looking Glass Pt.2
lol, that was a cute/fun chapter :) The dress seems very pretty, and I think I can see why Tom got the idea from Bill. You know, for the first time I think about this, it's weird reading something where Tom is a fashion dude, and Bill isn't as much. And I think it is a nice change n_n
“He decided to go with the second option, even though he couldn’t exactly understand >i>why he felt so honored.
That one sentence just got me a little confused. There were quotes to start it, so I thought someone was saying it, but it didn't sound like dialogue... So yeah, maybe take out the quotes that start it? Cute chapter though n_n did I say that? It was still funny and everything, but there was this cute undertone.
Tutu! Hey! Never insult us ballerina folks! lol, jk, but it always is what fathers say, which is why there aren't enough hot boys for partnering to go around... *sigh* well, they don't actually wear the tutus... just tights... manly tights! That was a cute part stuck in there. And the best thing is I can imagine Renee calling Tom tutu. Lol :D
Plus, who else would I need in the nuts when you’re gone?”
knee, need? lol, just something I notices, nothing big, got what you meant n_n I loved that big brother, little sister thing though n_n so cute. Just trying to imagine how Tom will be when he figures out Billa is Bill... not sure if it's going to be funny, or not so pretty... lol, such a fun story n_n
Author's Response: lol. aww. thank you. first thing's first: THANK YOU for pointing out my mistakes. I don't trust betas (plus I tend to post as soon as the chapter is complete) and I tend to miss things when I'm reading over my chapters and proofing them, so THANK YOU because most people don't bother to show me and be as nice about it as you are ^_^
also, I'm glad that you thought the chapter was cute/fun. I thought it was blah, but that's because I'm still a bit depressed lol. and I'm glad you like the way I have Tom's character. I like breaking my characters out of the mold.
and again , yay for cute. i think that it's a bit too early to fluff, but that's why the cute is there xD
and yea, I like ballerinas and tutus, but apparently Tom's father doesn't. Lol.
and yea, when Tom finds out it's going to be literal hell on earth.
Date: 07/26/09 03:24 pm Title: Chapter 10: First Days Back and A Peek Through The Looking Glass Pt.2
Action! they were alone, but aagghhh i think that i need action XD I love both of them you know specially when they are TOGETHER :P
Author's Response: lol. haha yea, they'll get action eventually. they just have to get closer and whatnot lol. and I'm glad that you love both of them ^^
Date: 07/26/09 03:20 pm Title: Chapter 10: First Days Back and A Peek Through The Looking Glass Pt.2
I really like how Tom's and Bill's relationship has shifted a bit. It's a very natural progression and has me curious as to what will happen next. Can't wait!
Author's Response: awww. i'm glad you noticed the shift. I tried to make it as subtle and natural as possible mostly because i don't think that they're the type of people that would rush into something like that ^^
Date: 07/26/09 03:06 pm Title: Chapter 10: First Days Back and A Peek Through The Looking Glass Pt.2
plzpzlpzl update sooon thx=]=]
Author's Response: of course ^^
Date: 07/20/09 10:08 pm Title: Chapter 1: Interview.
LOL Bill in a skirt
Author's Response: hahaha. i'm glad that you could LOL @ that xD
Date: 07/20/09 02:40 pm Title: Chapter 9: First Days Back and A Peek Through The Looking Glass Pt.1
yay SPARKLY ness!!! whoopness in all extremeties :] (it was the crappiest vampire movie ever tho lol :]) update soon!!!
Author's Response: hahahaha. Sparkly ness is always fun xD and yea, it was a crappy movie -.- and i shall. kinda xD like hopefully tomorrow after i'm done updating everything else i'm behind on (ah. the wonders of a bus babysitting schedule -.-)
Date: 07/20/09 06:34 am Title: Chapter 9: First Days Back and A Peek Through The Looking Glass Pt.1
lo frickin l..... I LOVE THIS STORY!
Author's Response: HAHAH. YAY I'm glad that you love this story ^^
Date: 07/19/09 11:12 pm Title: Chapter 9: First Days Back and A Peek Through The Looking Glass Pt.1
I cannot get over this overtly gay Tom. I just about DIE every chapter. Gold...pure gold this is.
Author's Response: hahaha. i'm glad that you can't get over him ^^ xD he'll tone down. eventually. hopefully xD and ahahhahaa i'm glad that this story has such an effect on you. thanks for the praise and such ^^
Date: 07/19/09 08:55 pm Title: Chapter 9: First Days Back and A Peek Through The Looking Glass Pt.1
Wow, those 2 are going to kill each other one day if they keep at it the way they do. I'm sure you would write that in a very amusing way, just like the rest of the story.
Update soon, cuz this is just that good.
Author's Response: hahaha. maybe they will, maybe they won't xD it's up to them to be honest xD and i'm glad rthat i can keep you entertained ^_^