Date: 08/23/09 08:11 am Title: Chapter 15: Sleepovers and Waking Up In Paradise Pt.1
Lmao.
this was the best part ever!
And they kissed x3 Awwww.
What the fuck are they doing on Ibiza?
hahaa.
How is bill gonna swim? In a fake bra?
haha.
Update soon! pleace!
love it.
Author's Response: YAY I'm glad that you liked it ^_^ and yea, they kissed. it was totally the hardest thing i've ever had to write xD
and i have NO CLUE why they're in Ibiza xD nah, i do, but trust love, this was ALLLL Tom's fault xD I was like...why Ibiza, and he was all because I said so xD he's just awesome like that xD
and idk if he's gonna swim JUST YET, we'll see what happens xD
and i should be updating sometime this week, if i have time ^^
Date: 08/23/09 07:31 am Title: Chapter 15: Sleepovers and Waking Up In Paradise Pt.1
BWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!
Author's Response: i lol SO FUCKING HARD every time i see this review xD
Date: 08/23/09 07:27 am Title: Chapter 15: Sleepovers and Waking Up In Paradise Pt.1
Waaaaaaaaaaahhhhh thankyou for updating!! I've been waiting for this..@____@
Hahaha... Tom should know sooooon that Bill's a boy. Can't wait for more action lmao..XD
Author's Response: hahaha i'm sorry the wait was so long, but i'm glad that you liked it ^_^
and hahah Tom's gonna find out HOPEFULLY in the next 10 chapters xD I've got SOOO much planned I'm trying to condense it xD
but i'm glad that you like it ^_^
Date: 08/23/09 05:42 am Title: Chapter 15: Sleepovers and Waking Up In Paradise Pt.1
"his boss that was gay and thought he was a boy."( shouldn't it say "who thought he was a girl"
you were prolly in a hurry to get this posted and you missed this line when checking it just thought I would point it out so you could fix it :)
oO and here
" “So, um...I hope you don't mind me asking, but what happened to Sm?” Tom asked hesitantly."
you didn't finish spelling Sam
"Tom took anotehr sip and grinned"
and you accidently typeod "another" anyways the chapter was really good I like how tom and bill are finally having non friendship type feeling with eachother
and im just really bored right Now so I thought i'd point out some errors to help make this chapter even more awesome :) btw what is there to do in
Ibiza?
Author's Response: THANK YOU xD
I totes updated at 4am, and i usually read thought at LEAST once, but it wasn't happened this morning xd but I fixed the errors you pointed out, so THANKS ^_^
and errrrr Ibiza is know for it's night life and tourist attractions, so they're gonna have fun doing that, BUT as for WHY Tom brought them there, it's a secret xD
Date: 08/23/09 05:08 am Title: Chapter 15: Sleepovers and Waking Up In Paradise Pt.1
OMG I can't wait to see what will go down in Ibiza. Would Bill have to wear a swimsuit? That would be funny, trying to cover up his package.
I'm so glad that they kissed, yeah they were tipsy but Tom didn't get disgusted.
Author's Response: hahahaha. I DON'T know what's gonna happen in Ibiza xD i think a piercing or two is in order xD maybe xD but yea, Bill in a swimsuit BWAHAHAHAHA this should be good xD and I'm glad you liked the kiss. I was kinda worried ^_^
Date: 08/23/09 05:06 am Title: Chapter 15: Sleepovers and Waking Up In Paradise Pt.1
I like reading this story, but you should probably stop hurting Tom. You're gonna give him permanent ball damage.
And really, Bill should know that it fucking hurts since he's a guy. I don't think he'd intentionally cause another guy that kind of pain just because of a joke.
Author's Response: i'm glad that you like it, and *shakes head* Bill's probably not going to stop until they're more comfortable or when Tom stops being as annoying.
and i honestly doubt that he'll have any permanent damage as long as the kneeing/hitting isn't too pressurized. how do i know? a have a friend whose punishments are getting hit in the balls by me, and he's now up to kid number two xD
Date: 08/23/09 04:14 am Title: Chapter 15: Sleepovers and Waking Up In Paradise Pt.1
give me more!!! I love this fics it's so funny
Author's Response: hhahaha. i shall, i shall ^^ i'm glad you love it and find it funny xD
Date: 08/23/09 04:06 am Title: Chapter 15: Sleepovers and Waking Up In Paradise Pt.1
lol It's fun to read the parts I've already read and STILL laugh at them XD
But anyway...poor Bill, with Tom not wanting him to be a boy XD Things would be SOOO much easier XD
Author's Response: hahah well I'm glad those parts are THAT funny then xD
and yea, Tom's stupid xD like really stupid. he should've said YES and then Bill could've admitted to being a boy, but NOOOOOOOOO Tom has to be stupid and ruin my life by taking them to Ibiza xD
Date: 08/15/09 01:15 am Title: Chapter 14: Cancelled Playdates and Nighttime Surprises.Pt.2
Awwww.. Tom is so adorable man.
Author's Response: hahaha danke danke ^^
Date: 08/15/09 12:58 am Title: Chapter 14: Cancelled Playdates and Nighttime Surprises.Pt.2
Oh boy oh boy. Great chapter...poor Bill and Tom are bad at Go Fish...how can you be bad at go fish?? o_O And Tom's house is flooded...and you called out my fic...oh thank you so much. Feels so honored. *dances around the place*
Author's Response: ahahah i'm glad you liked the chapter xD and i'm not entirely sure how you'd be bad at Go Fish, but my friends never win when i'm playing xD and yea, Tom's house is flooded xD don't know how that happened as of yet xD and it's np hun i love your fic ^^
Date: 08/14/09 09:32 pm Title: Chapter 11: Morning Fights and Play Dates Pt.1
O.O
I.
Want.
That.
Dress.
NOW!
I don't care if it looks good or not! It is GORGEOUS!!! O.O
And the shoes are cute too!
Poor poor Billa...
Author's Response: hahahahaha. i'm so happy other people think the dresses are cute ^_^ and hahaha yea...poor Billa...he'll be fine...kinda xD
Date: 08/14/09 09:12 pm Title: Chapter 9: First Days Back and A Peek Through The Looking Glass Pt.1
Dude, I'm sorry, my first thought is: "Not even gay vampires sparkle." And that is my opinion of the Twilight books (all of which i have read). But for a gay boy in pain it works! Lolz!
Author's Response: hahahahahaha oh don't worry, i have a MASSIVE hatred for Twilight, my friend Dante wanted that in the story, I generally give in and let people have something (like the twilight thing, or Bill pole dancing) since it usually spices up the story xD
Date: 08/14/09 07:19 pm Title: Chapter 14: Cancelled Playdates and Nighttime Surprises.Pt.2
plz update soon i absolutely luvz thiz..whens tom gonna find out?
Author's Response: ^_^ i shall! and like...in a couple chapters. I'm still building u their like for each other.
Date: 08/14/09 06:26 pm Title: Chapter 14: Cancelled Playdates and Nighttime Surprises.Pt.2
First chapter Tom doesn't get kneed. Wow. That's why he's still grinning. Lucky break this time because they were in the hospital. That's all! :P
Author's Response: hahahah it's gonna happen next chaptered, don't worry xD i was saving Bill's strength for the actual sleepover xD and hahaha your review made me laugh ^^
Date: 08/14/09 04:30 pm Title: Chapter 14: Cancelled Playdates and Nighttime Surprises.Pt.2
Aw, no dress? Oh well, I'll just wait for the next chapter. Being that Tom is staying with Bill, I know he's going to have to do some wardrobe rearrangments. That will be great.
How do these things happen to Bill? Did he do something evil in a past life? Surely he's being punished for something. Maybe it's for something he'll do in a future life.
And I still can't help but love Tom. He's such a dork, and sounds like such a blast to hang out with!
Author's Response: nah, no dress this time, but there should be a shitload of outfits in the future ^^ and haha yea, the living arrangements definitely play into it ^^
and er.....he looked uber pretty one day and I said YOU'RE GONNA BE IN A DRESS AND GET ANNOYED BY GAY TOM! yea...i'm a goddess and my powers are absolute in Tinsel town xD
and it's cool that you still love Tom ^^ I love him...sometimes...kinda xD
Date: 08/14/09 04:04 pm Title: Chapter 14: Cancelled Playdates and Nighttime Surprises.Pt.2
Keep updating. ^_^
Author's Response: of course ^_^
Date: 08/14/09 04:01 pm Title: Chapter 14: Cancelled Playdates and Nighttime Surprises.Pt.2
darn Bill sleep with him!
Author's Response: hahah not yet! xD
Date: 08/14/09 02:19 pm Title: Chapter 14: Cancelled Playdates and Nighttime Surprises.Pt.2
I LOVE hyper Tom. Seriously, he makes my day. :D I'm so glad to see an update! I can't wait for more. :)
Author's Response: i do too!! sometimes. other times i'm like Bill and i wanna punch him in the nuts xD
Date: 08/14/09 01:04 pm Title: Chapter 14: Cancelled Playdates and Nighttime Surprises.Pt.2
this. is. HILARIOUS!!!!!!!! I love it and I can't wait to see what happens! Update soon please!
Author's Response: hahaha i'm glad you find it to be hilarious ^^ and i shall, i shall ^^
Date: 08/14/09 12:51 pm Title: Chapter 14: Cancelled Playdates and Nighttime Surprises.Pt.2
lol, that is a big twist n_n lol :D fun, apartment flooded and he's living with his employee and mom...well this is going to be interesting :) fun too I bet. There were a few Bills and Toms that weren't uppercased, but, 5am and that's one of the only things I saw? wow n_n hahaha, last line was just too great too :)
Author's Response: hahaha yea, i randomly thought of it and was like YOU HAVE TO HAPPEN! xD and yea, it should be interesting xD and thank you for pointing it out once more. I meant to correct that, but by the time I finished the chapter I was ready to keel over xD and i'm glad you liked the last line ^^