Date: 04/30/23 08:16 pm Title: consciousawareresponsive
I have left a review on other stories of yours, but wanted to say that I enjoyed this one too!
Date: 04/20/12 12:24 am Title: consciousawareresponsive
Wow. *shakes head* Wow. This was... really fucking good. It was so effing brilliant, and amazingly well written, and just a good fic in general. It was fluffy, and angsty, and... just very well done =)
Date: 11/21/10 06:22 pm Title: consciousawareresponsive
I really liked this story. I loved your writing style in it, the experimental sentence structure, the repetition of key words, the pacing, the build-up , everything basically.
Emotional aspect of the story as expressed by your language must be the highlight though.
I adored your own turn on twincest relationship in this story, how the twins struggle with the concept of it, how they are aware of the stigma outer world might put on them if they let the others to know. It was thought through really well and felt incredibly realistic; a conversation the twins were having struck me as raw, true and full of pain and emotions. It was so intense, so super charged with their longing for each other but also with understandable fear.
I loved when you positioned Bill facing the window and Tom was standing just behind him. There is something in that posture when two people stand like that while emotionally naked in front of each other I find incredibly potent, idk. I very often find it more intense and enchanting then if they stood face to face eyes locked and all. I also liked the smut part, it made totally sense that it was so urgent and abrupt once they realized what they really wanted from each other. Frenzy and long-withhold hunger for each other was palpable here.
Great, great story. Beautiful.
Date: 03/13/10 01:08 pm Title: consciousawareresponsive
I loved it :)
Author's Response: i'm glad you did. i enjoyed writing it ^_^
Date: 06/27/09 10:17 pm Title: consciousawareresponsive
Beautiful, Heart-wrenching emotion. Your best yet.
Author's Response: awww, thank you for your praise. you really made me smile loads just now ^^
Date: 06/27/09 02:07 am Title: consciousawareresponsive
"They laid down, molding themselves into one entity as they searched each others eyes for all the answers to their unspoken questions." I loved that line a lot. This story was nuts and dear gawd the Domi Tomi was amazing. *grins anime-ishly* We're on the phone talking about it lol. And you know that I died over the Tom rawr-ness lol. I love you. Now on to Holy Fucking!! lol.
Author's Response: ahahaha. i'm glad that you loved that line, doll ^^ i'm glad that you think that this story is nuts xD and hahahah gotta love that DomiTomi ^^ and yay HF!
Date: 06/26/09 08:37 pm Title: consciousawareresponsive
Wow. That took me WAY longer to read than it should have. Because no one on AIM knows how to shut up! XD ANYWAY. WOW. My brain exploded all over the computer screen. I hope you're happy. XD
And since my brain is on the screen, I can't think of some awesme words to describe this. >.>
Author's Response: BWAHAHAHAHA. it's alright. i'll kill those stupid people on AIM! xD and hahaha brain explosions! gotta love em ^^ and why do i always get FAIL reviews from you???
Date: 06/26/09 01:54 am Title: consciousawareresponsive
Jost. JOST! :) You know my thoughts on this, fucking AMAZING.
And yes. Two am. NO EXCUSE! :P
Amazing.
Author's Response: lmfao. well i'm glad you liked this ^^ and two AM is definitely an excuse when you've been updating at 2AM for the past week >.>
Date: 06/25/09 07:40 pm Title: consciousawareresponsive
lol. now that i think about it they really do!! lol
Author's Response: lol. haha. yup yup they do ^^
Date: 06/25/09 07:20 pm Title: consciousawareresponsive
<(*O*)> (>*O*)> <(*O*<)
YAYNESS!!!
Author's Response: hahahahahah. awwwness. they look like Kirby. ^^ i love them xD
Date: 06/25/09 07:08 pm Title: consciousawareresponsive
*{{squee}}*
Now im happy!! (>*////*)>
Author's Response: awwww. well now i'm happy that you're happy ^^ <(*////*<)
Date: 06/25/09 06:56 pm Title: consciousawareresponsive
*{{GASP}}*
That was really good...I dont know what to say! It was kinda like poetry, but still a story at the same time it was AMAZING!!....WOW!!!
Author's Response: awww, thank you for reading and reviewing this and calling it really good. your review made me happy ^^
Date: 06/25/09 05:24 pm Title: consciousawareresponsive
ASDGJHJAHSDGJHjhjasdtgoiweqbv. That was gorgeous. I think I've been turned to mush. This was an amazing one-shot. Plus teh sex was like :D *lost-cause pervert* Great job honey!
Author's Response: LMFAO. i'm glad that you liked this story so much love ^^ and hahaha it turned you into mush. that's amazing xD thanks for reviewing love ^^
Date: 06/25/09 04:43 pm Title: consciousawareresponsive
I LOVED IT! GREAT JOB! ONE OF MY FAVORITES!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: lol. awww. danke for your praise and for reviewing ^^
Date: 06/25/09 03:02 pm Title: consciousawareresponsive
Wow! This is great. Defiantly added to favorites. =)
Author's Response: lol. awwww thanks for calling this great ^^ and for reviewing and adding this to your favs ^^
Date: 06/25/09 02:24 pm Title: consciousawareresponsive
Amazingly done! I had a few tears.
I love how three words can hold so much emotion.
Great job :)
Author's Response: Awwww. I'm glad that you liked it and that you thought it was amazingly done. I didn't think this would bring tears to anyone, but i'm proud that it has ^^
Date: 06/25/09 01:52 pm Title: consciousawareresponsive
I liked how you played up the two halves to a whole thing.
Author's Response: Awwww, danke ^^ I did try to get the whole twinned souls and lovers thing down as best as i could ^^ thanks you for reviewing
Date: 06/25/09 12:55 pm Title: consciousawareresponsive
This was gorgeous. So very gorgeous. I love you so much for writing this. *.*
*rereads again and again*
Author's Response: awwwwwww. i'm glad that you could think that this was gorgeous^^ and thank you for loving me so much for writing this ^^ and yay for re-reads! xD
Date: 06/25/09 12:26 pm Title: consciousawareresponsive
amazing, it was sweet but hard and rough at the same time, I like that. Great job XOXOXOXOXOXO
Author's Response: awwww. thanks for getting the concept of it being sweet but hard and rough. i'm glad that you liked it ^^ thanks for reviewing.
Date: 06/25/09 10:11 am Title: consciousawareresponsive
I like how they became aware and how they finally came together -- very beautiful and not to mention, also very hot ;)
Author's Response: awww thank you reviewing and for calling this story beautiful and hot ^^