Date: 10/06/09 01:44 pm Title: He deserved it
Here is me again.Well, chapter 7 was heartbreaking as I told you on msn.Tom is such a lovely guy here and he had comforted her since the beginning and now she gets back to Bill.I really don't like the guy in this story..he's so..mean and heartless.I hope he will love her and protect her..she is so naive, though for accepting him back.I am so fond of this story.Sadly, its almost finished.
Author's Response: Haha, yay, I love your reviews :D <3 and yeah, Bill is a heartless piece of shit in this story, and that's the point. Well, not only, but SOMETIMES he is, and yes, it was really mean done to Tom, but you know, what can a girl do when she's in love with somebody? :D I'm really glad you like it!
Date: 10/04/09 03:54 pm Title: Leave me alone
I just finished reading Used and now this.I might confess that its incredibly awesome and heart breaking.It's quite confusing as well, and she is so damn weak.I've never thought girls can be so weak.The twins changed places in this fanfiction but I clearly see Bill the bad one.And now I am so curious to find out what's wrong with him.I bet it's that girl, again.And btw, you made him look like a mentally disturbed man.He's bipolar.He can't confess that he is really cheating on her and he can't get over the fact that she is hanging around with his twin.Everything is so interesting and you caught my attention.:tracking the story:
Author's Response: awww, thank you so much, sweetie! I'm really glad that you like it, and that I caught the attention with it :D
Date: 07/26/09 12:54 pm Title: Leave me alone
She made their lives a mess.....
Author's Response: Maybe she did, yes ;)
Date: 07/26/09 12:48 pm Title: I know how you feel
Omg! that was soo sweet! ;D
Date: 07/24/09 09:54 am Title: Leave me alone
I really hadn't seen this coming when you started the story. Love that I can't predict the outcome, though (:
But... Idk... Bill seems so sweet and vulnerable now and he never ever seemed that way before. Maybe it's the thought of losing Tom? Dunno...
But! Great! ^_^
Author's Response: Thanks :D I love doing unpredictable things. :p And who knows? The thing is, that we actually don't know what the fuck Bill is thinking and why he is acting like he does. It's seen from her POV :p
Date: 07/24/09 08:47 am Title: Leave me alone
Hmmm mayb he misses tom in another way...
Date: 07/13/09 09:02 am Title: I know how you feel
Arg don't know if i should be mad or dissapointed or whatever. Oo
Somehow i fell like Bill should go shoot himself or something like that, but then he's all sweet and cute and i feel bad about it Oo And then Tom's realle nice - and then he's not that nice and... arg, confusing xD
But i stil like this story very much! (:
Author's Response: Yes, they're really confusing, which is making her confused too xDrnthanks ^_^
Date: 07/10/09 08:09 pm Title: I know how you feel
One last kiss. A make up sex scene is comin'
Date: 07/10/09 08:04 pm Title: I know how you feel
Wonder what's gonna happen now then
Date: 07/05/09 02:11 pm Title: It’s okay, princess
Bill is SO MEAN! (in the story)
Date: 07/05/09 02:05 pm Title: I was jealous
LOVE IT!! DON"T DELETE THIS!
Author's Response: I won't :p glade you like it ^_^
Date: 07/03/09 07:25 pm Title: He deserved it
UPDATE
OR I WILL
I WILL *_*
i will die D:!
Date: 07/03/09 06:27 am Title: Stop it
No Bill finally found out.
I wanna know what's next
Author's Response: hehe, yes, he found out :D
Date: 07/03/09 04:27 am Title: Stop it
good job, girl! both you and your heroine! keep it going, i love when bill is pissed, he gets what he deserves!
Author's Response: Thanks :D!
Date: 07/02/09 11:19 pm Title: He deserved it
oh, snap! she's screwed... right?!
i don't know why, even though Bill's the bad guy, i still want him to 'win' in the end... haha. pessimist much?
Author's Response: I lol'd a little at this comment, haha xD We'll wait and see what happens ;)
Date: 06/30/09 10:47 pm Title: It’s okay, princess
:0!
Yes she should *_*
do it, do it!! (singing)
mehehe!
Date: 06/30/09 07:38 pm Title: It’s okay, princess
Aww Tom's acting so sweet and caring and then he just says "I want to fuck you". Way to go, spoiling the romantic moment xD Haha
Well I feel the fight was a bit rushed maybe? But other than that I really enjoyed the chapter! I like that it isn't obvious what is going to happen :D *thumbs up*
Author's Response: hahahahah, yeah, I love that moment!rn- and yes, I didn't wanted to dig deep into the fight, actually. All that I wanted to matter was that he was actually going to Gabrielle's house right after, so you kinda get the picture. and thanks ^_^