Inhale... exhale... inhale... exhale... That actually kinda made me tear up. What they would do for each other.

i'm in love with this fic. absolutely in love. there's noooo way i could tell you why, but it was just amazing.

Wow. This was like, super intense. And amazing.

I applaud you for coming up with such a unique idea and doing such a spectacular job writing it. I also was confused at first, but it made sense in the end. Great job pulling this off. Amazing idea, though sad to think about, and your way of writing just made this story absolutely fantastic ^^ Keep up the awesome work!

-StarStruck

Wow Oo This is... Amazing!
I've never read a fic like this one before and I'm never going to because nothing can be as good as this one! What the brothers do for each other, how far they are willing to go to make each other happy in this one... It really leaves you speachless. It's obvious how much they love each other and I loved the way you decribed their bond and what they had gone through to do this. -But it's also kinda sad 'cause Bill can't sing anymore though I first realised how sad it actually is after I finished it the second time and thought about it. While reading I just loved the affection they showed for each other and how they tried to make everything work. It made me smile, really, and I couldn't help but think that maybe they would actually do this in reality too. Just to make each other happy ^u^
I suspected them switching very early and I just HAD to keep reading to know if I was right or not (which I was, yay xD) This story truly is a masterpiece, only because you write it so well and clearly have been spending at lot of time on it. Much love to you :D
Oh, and right now I'm going to post this review and then hit the favorite button, 'cause it really deserves it! (: It's the very first (and probably the only) oneshot I'm adding

Author's Response: :O Thank you sooo much! You dont know how much it means to me to get such a review for this fic, (of which, i slaved over, you dont even know! T^T), it just, its amazing, thank you so much. I was terrified back when Bill canceled the concerts because of his voice, and this was a fear i had for a while. I couldnt write the fic until i knew he was better, because i was too afraid of jinxing it. It was terrifying to think of too. I would be devastated. (and so would Bill ._.) Thank you again so so much for your kind words! And thank you for favouriting *sends love back to you*

heh, cool idea =) i like it.

Wow. That's the only word I have for this awesome story. I didn't get it almost until the very end, but when I did, it was really a shock. And then I read it once more and that's when I could fully enjoy it. Because I understood the concert better, knowing who was who. And I could appreciate every detail that was meant to show us what was happening.

This is really wonderful. I have no idea how you could have written it... I too, am an aspiring writer, and I can only wish that I'll write like this one day. It's just a oneshot, but it left me feeling like I read more than just that.

Great job. You are a real wowthoress, from wow and authoress. :-)

Author's Response: Thank you so much, like it says on my profile, this piece is so very important to me, so it means so very much to hear this from readers! Also, I'm really glad you understood it, and i didnt completely fail D:! Lol. Thanks again, hon :)

oh... that was kind of depressing, but, like, happy at the same time n_n idk, mixed feelings are pouring into me. Happy, sad, joyful type of feelings, not if this was good or bad, because this was lovely :) It was a very cool way to look at everything, and I loved how I wasn't able to understand it till the end, with the star, and how I couldn't even piece everything together until a few seconds later. It was great n_n the last line was my favorite line. Great job :) loved reading this

Wow........this turned out beautifully! It was confusing at first, but when you go back over it, it works. It sounds really really nice! You kept the mood right throughout the whole thing, and you can really feel the emotion in the whole thing.

Fantastic job!

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Wow. TOTALLY BLOWN AWAY. I admit, I had to read it twice to totally understand it, but it's awesome. I could totally see this actually having happened if Bill had completely lost his voice. Sad and touching at the same time. You did a wonderful job. ~Inari