Date: 07/16/09 01:55 am Title: Give It to Me Hard
“As I said, mate in distress.”
OMG I seriously LOVE this Tom! I really do! *hugs you* and you for writing him like this!
I really wonder how you're gonna make them to meet and what will happen when that occurs!
Aww!! You mentioned me! *fangirl scream* And just so you know I didn't actually ran out of coffee and the delicious cookies you gave me! Though it almost happen...only two cookies survived!
This fic put a smile in my face and I swear that I was reading this in the school and my teacher glared at me when I started to laugh hard in the middle of the class and everyone was seeing as if another head had grown on me! XD
Now...*runs to prepare tons of tons of coffee cups and cookies*
*sits on chair and watches intently at the screen*
*laptops starts to fear for its safety*
*frowns*
*head drop*
XD
OMG I'm insane! XD
Author's Response: LOL! I'm glad that you like it! :) Thanks for this looooooong review! You made me smile too! :D *hugs poison_girl616*rnrngood thing you didn't run out of coffee! wait, now i have to give you another box of cookies for the next wait! Oh, don't forget the charger of your laptop! :PrnrnPS. I think you are gonna loooove the way imma make them meet!
Date: 07/15/09 03:01 pm Title: Give It to Me Hard
update soonn plzplzpzl thx=]=]
Author's Response: I'll try my best :)
Date: 07/13/09 10:50 am Title: The Crumpled Note
There!
Story tracked, calendar marked....now...*sits in front of the laptop to wait with a coffee in hand*
I will be here until you update...have that in mind, ok? *sips coffee* *watches screen intently*
Author's Response: Right. *goes out to buy some cookies for poison* I must tell you that I already got 500 words for the next chapter. LOL.rnrn*returns with a box of chocolate chip cookies at hand* If I don't get lazy, I'll probably update on Thursday :]rnrn*hands poison the cookie* until then, enjoy your coffee and the cookies :]
Date: 07/13/09 06:48 am Title: Mass Hysteria
This was funny! I like it!
Author's Response: Thank you :)
Date: 07/13/09 05:31 am Title: Mass Hysteria
this a really well written story cant wait to see what happens next
Author's Response: thank you :)
Date: 07/13/09 01:54 am Title: Mass Hysteria
More!! I need More!!! *begs*
Will you give memore soon? *puppy eyes*
*head drop* Ok...that sounded quite bad but you get want I want! XD
Author's Response: HAHA! yea i got it! lolrnrnI'll probably update on friday. :) i've already started the 4th chap. Mark your calendar if you want! LOL
Date: 07/13/09 01:49 am Title: I Like it Rough
Seriously, I’ve never received or kissed a guy before. Well, if you consider me kissing Bill’s pictures then….yes!
I laugh at this and at the same time I-I...*runs to the shower*
*comes back*
That was pretty fucking amazing ad I'l truly, and definitely willing to read MORE!! *goes to read the next chapter*
Author's Response: haha! thank you! LOL, when I thought about that line, I laughed too! LOL
Date: 06/22/09 07:07 pm Title: The Crumpled Note
lol, okay, I was laughing through your characterization of Tom, he seems just like kind of a random gang guy, and I think I love that about him. Hopefully that is how you want him to be pictured, if not...um...*hides behind um...something* lol, hopefully you make sure to keep the same characterization of Tom throughout the whole thing :)
I noticed a few grammar things, nothing much, like Bi (I think) is supposed to be lower case, and dialogue should be punctuated as
"Yadayadayada," he said.
instead of...
"Yadayadayada." He said.
lol, if that makes any sense at all :) Tom seems like fun to write here!!! :)
An awesome shirt that I’m wearing right now will tell you that to save time, let’s assume I’m always right. ALWAYS.
lol, that made me laugh, because idk, it seemed so great a thing to put in there, and just seems to add humor to everything :) waiting to see where you take this Tom, and what he is going to do with that spell thingy he memorized, because he's jsut that bad ass! ;)
Author's Response: OMG!! YAY!! u got that right, Tom was supposed to be like that :] *runs to Tears for a hug*rnrnthanks for correcting the mistakes! *edits*rnrnand super thanks for an awesome review! :] you made me smile, really :P