Date: 05/15/15 08:12 pm Title: Happy Father's Day, Tomi
Awwwwwwww they are so cute! :3
Date: 10/11/11 04:04 pm Title: Happy Father's Day, Tomi
Ohhh i love it*-*
Date: 02/15/11 04:17 pm Title: Happy Father's Day, Tomi
so sweet! :)
Date: 09/10/10 08:25 am Title: Happy Father's Day, Tomi
I've always thought childbirth was disgusting and yucky, not in the "ew, how could we have created that" kind of way where I'm insensitive but more in the "I'm like Tom because it's red and bloody and disgusting" kind of way. XD And I'm one of those people who gets all weird when people are sensitive and sappy so when I give birth I'll probably be making jokes, like "Wow, s/he definitely did not get his/her looks from MY side of the family." When it's all bloody and stuff. XD
Anyway, this was really adorable. Mpreg is good as long as it's written the right way and you definitely did it. :) I love her name, too. Too beautiful.
Date: 12/08/09 07:03 pm Title: Happy Father's Day, Tomi
So good- and sweet!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Date: 10/18/09 03:17 pm Title: Happy Father's Day, Tomi
oh my god, that was sooo sweet!!! sunshine, somehow that is just soo fitting for the twins.. x
Author's Response: XD I thought so too. Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 10/09/09 11:51 pm Title: Happy Father's Day, Tomi
Aww, very sweet.
Author's Response: Thanks
Date: 07/14/09 01:34 am Title: Happy Father's Day, Tomi
The whole story! There isn't a part, it's just the whole stroke generally! Thank you for writing!
Author's Response: Thank YOU for reading!
Date: 07/13/09 04:00 am Title: Happy Father's Day, Tomi
I keep reading this and it still gives me goosebumps! This is just so amazing that it's creepy! Thank you so much for writing this!
Author's Response: Aww yay! I'm glad I could have that effect on you. May I ask which parts, exactly?
Date: 06/29/09 03:42 pm Title: Happy Father's Day, Tomi
aahw that was so cute.. i LOVE how bill is all emotional and touches tom's and his hair to prove what he means.. that was just too adorable..
Author's Response: XD thank you so much. I thought that part was sweet too, but I didn't think anyone would pay much attention to it. Danke schon!
Date: 06/23/09 08:16 am Title: Happy Father's Day, Tomi
Perfect thing to read on Father's Day :D
Date: 06/23/09 08:16 am Title: Happy Father's Day, Tomi
Awww I love it!! It's the thing to read on Father's Day!!
Author's Response: XD Thank you
Date: 06/22/09 08:26 am Title: Happy Father's Day, Tomi
This seriously made me teary-eyed! This was just such a beautiful story and a great way to celebrate Father's day. Loved it!
Author's Response: Yay! Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. *hands you tissues* I didn't think I made it that emotional though . . . YAY! XD
Date: 06/22/09 07:34 am Title: Happy Father's Day, Tomi
super cute and sweet :]
Author's Response: XD thank you
Date: 06/22/09 06:46 am Title: Happy Father's Day, Tomi
I loved it so much.
"Gordon," Tom motioned the man over. He went around the side of the bed, hugging each twin in turn and smiling at the baby.
"She's beautiful."
"Thank you. Happy Father's Day," Tom said, extending his own piece of flesh and blood to the man who raised him like a son. "You're a grandfather now."
Gordon looked at him in surprise, then at Bill who nodded from the bed. "But. . ."
"Just because you and Mom split up doesn't make you any less of our dad. Sunshine is as much your granddaughter as she is mom's."-This is my favorite part, I thought it was so sweet.
Author's Response: I was inspired for that part by my step dad. Thank you so much for reviewing.
Date: 06/22/09 06:29 am Title: Happy Father's Day, Tomi
Ahh, so cute! I'm sat here with a big huge grin on my face now... :D
Date: 06/22/09 06:01 am Title: Happy Father's Day, Tomi
Oh god! This was so sweet! I totally loved this!
Author's Response: YAY! *huggles* thank you
Date: 06/22/09 12:12 am Title: Happy Father's Day, Tomi
That was so cute! ^_^ I can't believe that I used to hate MPREG! I think you just changed my mind. :)
Author's Response: This is the first one I've ever written! I tried so hard. Thank you so much for giving it a shot *wiggles* If I really did change your mind. . .wow. . .I feel so freaking proud of myself XD
Date: 06/21/09 11:52 pm Title: Happy Father's Day, Tomi
Aw! Cute :D I really like it! Seriously being favorited ^_^
Author's Response: *blush* Danke
Date: 06/21/09 11:50 pm Title: Happy Father's Day, Tomi
awww how cute!
Author's Response: *Dies* zomg. I can't believe I actually got a review from you! *life is complete*