Date: 06/21/09 02:57 pm Title: Chapter 2
This story is cool! I really like it. It's taking a few classic story lines and spinning them together to make one great story! Keep up the good work, girls!
Author's Response: Thank you, we will be up dating soon so you wont have to wait long for more. we hope you will carry on reading :D rnRachel x
Date: 06/21/09 02:56 pm Title: Chapter 2
I WANT ANOTHER CHAPTER!!!!!
I AM LOVING THIS STORY!!!!
TOMORROW IS TOOO LONG A WAIT!!!!!!
(pouting miki-chan)
Date: 06/21/09 02:55 pm Title: Chapter 1
YAY!!! @(^_^)@
Author's Response: =] :D
Date: 06/21/09 02:55 pm Title: Chapter 2
please please update tomorrow i can't wait.
Author's Response: Dont worry i promise you this time tomrow it will be up :D
Date: 06/21/09 02:54 pm Title: Chapter 2
I love this chapter god *.*!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
For a moment, with my bad english I thought they really kissed in that moment xD, but no T.T!!
Aww *.*! I like the next chapter now! xd
I don't like Tom beautiful!, I like the ugly one xD.
Author's Response: ugly tom is still cute thats the proble :D rnand yes i am glad you like it
Date: 06/21/09 02:53 pm Title: Chapter 2
UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!!! i L0VED THiS 0NE. BUT TH0SE GiRLS ARE BiTCHES F0R BEiNG LiKE THAT T0 T0M.
Author's Response: update tomorow i promise :D we already have it written so this time tomroow it will be up i promise yo :D
Date: 06/21/09 02:50 pm Title: Chapter 1
I LOVE IT!!!
*favourites*
MORE MORE!!!!
Author's Response: There should be more somewere XD
Date: 06/21/09 09:50 am Title: Chapter 1
Oh my, what a banner :'D
This definitely has potential!
Poor Tomi, I've always felt sorry for people that got bullied for being ugly when I was still at school, it's unfair!
Gustav is such a good friend, but Tom didn't seem very bothered about Gustav getting punched in the jaw xD
Still, this sounds good to me. A few tiny mistakes but nothing to worry about, really. There's probably mistakes in my writing too, once in a while (especially in my old stories :3)
"New chapter will be up tomorrow" ... does that mean, today? ;D
Looking forward to reading more of this! I wonder if Bill's gonne make Tom a little less ugly ;p
Author's Response: yerp it shal be up today.. between now and 6 hours lol xD
Date: 06/21/09 01:53 am Title: Chapter 1
and you guys got the best and most convincing banner XD.
Author's Response: hahah thank you
Date: 06/20/09 11:17 pm Title: Chapter 1
I'm crying now, you know ;___;... poor Tommmmm TOT!
Author's Response: he wll be okay i mromise :D
Date: 06/20/09 11:05 pm Title: Chapter 1
Fucking funny Banner XDDDDDDDD, where's my handsome Tom? xD ahaha, but I REALLY LOVE THIS UGLY TOM *0*
And The Story?!!?! AMAZING!!! u rock, *.* I mean, for the first time I see a really ugly Tom xD, but as u say, still cute *.*!
Author's Response: we just cant seem to get him... ugly XD
Date: 06/20/09 10:33 pm Title: Chapter 1
i nearly cried with anguish when i saw the banner. oh poor tom.
Author's Response: =] tom will be fine i promise you D:
Date: 06/20/09 09:41 pm Title: Chapter 1
Awww. I really like this so far. I hate when people are complete douche bags to others just b/c they look different. I actually like hanging out with "odd" looking people. They're more interesting and fun. =D
The last parts made me get tears in my eyes. I enjoyed this. Cant wait to read the next part. (ps. Tomi looks adorable in your banner. Hehe.)
Author's Response: we tried making him really ugly.. but he just wouldnt go XDrnand yea your right.. my friends were comeplte oddballs.. il really miss them next year =[
Date: 06/20/09 09:34 pm Title: Chapter 1
awww, i luv the story line, hope you can update soon.
Author's Response: there will definatly be an update tomorow, i promise you :D
Date: 06/20/09 09:30 pm Title: Chapter 1
AWES0ME.
Author's Response: =]
Date: 06/20/09 09:28 pm Title: Chapter 1
0HHH, iLL CHECK THEM 0UT. U MiGHT L00K AT MiNE iF Y0U EVER GET A CHANCE
Author's Response: sure of course i will :D
Date: 06/20/09 09:26 pm Title: Chapter 1
iTS G00D G00D.
D0 Y0U HAVE ANY 0THER ST0RiES?
Author's Response: yes, i have quiet a few and so does dawn :D check them out if you like.. im working on another 3 i think.. and dawns working on a few too :D
Date: 06/20/09 09:24 pm Title: Chapter 1
0H, iTS A SEQUEL T0 THE 0THER 2
Author's Response: ohh yes i have :D
Date: 06/20/09 09:22 pm Title: Chapter 1
REALLY? HAVE YOU READ THE NEWEST 0NE?
Author's Response: i dont no il have to cheack xD