Date: 07/02/09 05:32 pm Title: Chapter 1
THAT'S WHAT SHE SAiD. L0L.
YAY!! iS THERE M0RE 0R LESS "STEAM" iN THE NEXT 0NE.
Author's Response: Uhm...next chapter...you'll have to wait and see.
Date: 07/02/09 05:30 pm Title: Chapter 13
that was hot!!!!!!!!! XDDDD me likey very much
Author's Response: Thanks =] And yes, hot it was.
Date: 07/02/09 05:30 pm Title: Chapter 1
HAHAHA L0L! THATS H0T.
Author's Response: And more to come
Date: 07/02/09 05:27 pm Title: Chapter 13
AHHH!!!! THEY G0T iT 0N!!!! L0L
REALLY REALLY H0T.
Author's Response: Yeah, well, imagine while we were writing... Steam, I swear there was steam clouding my room.
Date: 07/02/09 05:25 pm Title: Chapter 13
plzplzpzplzplzl UPDATE SOOON thx soso much=]=]
Author's Response: More tomorrow, as always.
Date: 07/02/09 09:42 am Title: Chapter 12
*Groans* Why stop there? :(
First it's all cute, and then I'm like; woah were going somewhere good, and then a cliffhanger?
I'm gonna sit here waiting for the next chapter!
Author's Response: awwwwww you sit there for a while then ;P XD
Date: 07/02/09 04:58 am Title: Chapter 12
That ending! Omg! Update soon!
Author's Response: we will update soon i promise :D
Date: 07/02/09 03:40 am Title: Chapter 12
¬¬ *furious glare* I'm getting all hot and ready over here and then *POOF* cliffy ¬¬ I loved it though!! I hope you continue soon!!
xx Chi ^^
Author's Response: hehe sorry all my fault ( rachel) and dont worry ther will be more tonight :D
Date: 07/02/09 02:30 am Title: Chapter 9
Aww that was super freaking cute! I'm totally two chapters behind but I can't read them tonight so more comments from me tomorrow... as for now, I'm going to go right to sleep with the beautiful images of that chapter ending in my head *smirk* guten nacht
Author's Response: haha dont worry you will catch up soon :P rnand yes slep welll :D
Date: 07/01/09 11:52 pm Title: Chapter 12
I WANT MORE PLEASE!!!! ^^
Author's Response: sure there will be more soon :D
Date: 07/01/09 09:51 pm Title: Chapter 12
Ahhh!!! Right as it was getting good too!!! Your evil (In a VERY good way) -pouting- write more soon !!
Author's Response: of course we will, Dawn will put it up today :D
Date: 07/01/09 09:34 pm Title: Chapter 12
OMG hurry up and get the next chapter! I love this story! I want more!
Author's Response: Will do, more tomorrow. Thnx for reviewing =]
Date: 07/01/09 09:32 pm Title: Chapter 12
H0LY SHiT S0N 0F A BiTCH.
THAT'S S0 HOTTTTTT
Author's Response: =] wait till you see next, then
Date: 07/01/09 09:23 pm Title: Chapter 12
i always want more *sigh* lol evil bitch of a mother Bill's got and Tom is too cute XD
Author's Response: yea she is evil, and tom is cute
Date: 07/01/09 08:22 pm Title: Chapter 12
hahhahahahah, of course i want more. you shouldnt even ask that question XD.
Author's Response: it was a stupid question
Date: 07/01/09 08:15 pm Title: Chapter 1
As long as SOMEONE updates, I suppose. . .
Author's Response: haha i guess ;p
Date: 07/01/09 08:02 pm Title: Chapter 12
Omg, O-M-G, fucking amazing chapter xD.
Sex, sex, sex *.*!
Author's Response: hahah thank you
Date: 07/01/09 07:58 pm Title: Chapter 12
That was a terrible ending! More. Not tomorrow. NOW
Author's Response: am...amm...well it is tomorow for me xd rni wont be here tomorow =[ i got my prom so dawn will have to update
Date: 07/01/09 07:41 pm Title: Chapter 12
...ooooh man what an ending. Lol. Poor Bill, having a major douche bag for a mother. Alas, he has Tom. Guess what? I still love this. Lol.
Hmm, are still gonna get some pics of Toms changing looks? Even though I'm sure all of us can picture that sexiness that is Tom Kaulitz. =D
Author's Response: hm i no i cant ever seem to give em happy lives xdrnrnrnand yea should be