Date: 07/03/09 11:49 pm Title: Chapter 14
Hmmm...I liked it, especially the last chapter...I love that Tom was bottom!
Author's Response: thank you. Not Many like tom bottom so we was taking a risk
Date: 07/03/09 11:19 pm Title: Chapter 14
.....I'm so confused. O_O
Author's Response: about?
Date: 07/03/09 11:07 pm Title: Chapter 14
I don't know that I'd go so far as to say brat. I feel bad for him. It can't be easy to be in his place. It was a wonderful twist.
Author's Response: yes I felt bad for him too but it will soon be better
Date: 07/03/09 08:40 pm Title: Chapter 14
eh, now we're getting some plot conflicts and character development. keep it up!!!
Author's Response: doubt it will be like that for long as I don't like sad stories I tend to jump weeks
Date: 07/03/09 08:25 pm Title: Chapter 14
brat lol
Author's Response: hehe yes
Date: 07/03/09 05:15 pm Title: Chapter 14
AHHHH Bill you stupid diva xD!!!!!
I hate Bill in this chapter >.
Author's Response: aw im sorry.... my fault
Date: 07/03/09 04:40 pm Title: Chapter 1
0HHHH C00Li0
Author's Response: yes
Date: 07/03/09 04:40 pm Title: Chapter 14
I think he is heart broken that Tom doesn't remember him. As Bill being a brat yes & no because he knew what it felt like getting picked on..I just hope Tom comes to his senses and goes back to Bill..
Author's Response: =D the next chapter will be alot better :D
Date: 07/03/09 04:25 pm Title: Chapter 14
plz update sooon thx=]
Author's Response: Will do :DD
Date: 07/03/09 04:25 pm Title: Chapter 1
0H WELL
S0 D0ES DAWN JUST LiKE L0G 0N T0 Y0UR ACC0UNT AND ANSWER?
Author's Response: if im not here yes, but she only goes on after she asks me ^-^
Date: 07/03/09 04:14 pm Title: Chapter 1
0HHH N0 W0NDER MY 0THER FRiEND RACHEL C0ULDN'T RESP0ND T0 0UR REViEWS.
THAT'S REALLY STUPiD TH0UGH
Author's Response: am yea
Date: 07/03/09 04:11 pm Title: Chapter 1
OHHHH, H0W C0ME 0NLY Y0U CAN?
Author's Response: co authors cant respond.
Date: 07/03/09 03:59 pm Title: Chapter 1
BUT 0THER THAN THAT i TH0UGHT iT WAS REALLY G00D. ALS0 AM i TALKiNG T0 DAWN 0R RACHEL, JUST CURi0USiTY
Author's Response: Rachel, i am the only one who can answer these, dawn only did it yesterday becuase i was at prom
Date: 07/03/09 03:57 pm Title: Chapter 14
>>>"Bill? What happened?" Gordon asked, lowering his newspaper. He had seen Tom run away, and he was sure it had something to do with his son's mood.
i believe it was Jörg and not Gordon)
Author's Response: woops il correct it nowrn
Date: 07/03/09 03:56 pm Title: Chapter 1
AND MAYBE BiLL SH0ULD PUT HiMSELF iN T0M'S SH0ES AND THEN TRY AND G0 TALK T0 HiM
Author's Response: haha yes
Date: 07/03/09 03:54 pm Title: Chapter 14
MM...i W0ULDN'T SAY BRAT, MAYBE JUST REALLY L0ST iN HiS TH0UGHTS AND KiNDA SCARED THAT T0M WiLL NEVER F0RGiVE HiM.
Author's Response: yes :D
Date: 07/03/09 03:09 pm Title: Chapter 14
Diva is a better word :P Poor Diva though :( He didn't mean to hurt Tom at all!! Tomi is just a hormonal teenagers who pitties himself too much xD I loved it!! I hope you continue soon :D
xx Chi ^^
Author's Response: of course it will be up tomorow :D
Date: 07/03/09 02:58 pm Title: Chapter 14
Erm....ok, I agree with Jorg, Bill needs to handle this like an adult...but at the sametime I can get where Bill is coming from, something tells me the story is going to get really intense for a while.
Author's Response: nah not really, i dont like writing sad things so it wont be intense for long XD sad things make me cry
Date: 07/03/09 02:52 pm Title: Chapter 14
ok wow i really don't what to say ahh i'm so sad :(
Author's Response: aww
Date: 07/03/09 02:12 am Title: Chapter 13
I loved it!! And let the others boil in the room ¬¬ I do hope she enjoys/ed it xD And I also hope you continue soon!! :P
xx Chi ^^
Author's Response: i did enjoy it :D
Author's Response: i did enjoy it :D