Date: 04/20/10 06:26 pm Title: Chapter 17
ROFL
Rachel
Author's Response: yess???
Date: 04/20/10 05:36 pm Title: Chapter 14
LOL
Bill is being immature
Date: 02/03/10 04:53 pm Title: Chapter 24
aww i love this fic awww
Date: 02/02/10 01:08 am Title: Chapter 6
seductive!Tom D:
Date: 02/02/10 01:00 am Title: Chapter 5
Aw :/
He finds the one person that loves him inside and outside and he says he can't do it anymore. That's just a fail on a stick :/
Date: 02/02/10 12:39 am Title: Chapter 3
w00t, Tom getting drunk xD
I think it would be a bit better if Bill was more vague about his feelings, and if he didn't fall for Tom so fast? But it doesn't matter, it's your story and you can take it in any direction you want.
Date: 02/02/10 12:28 am Title: Chapter 2
That was sweet, the end bit about animals loving you regardless of your appearance. Because it's true :3
I like how Bill is being towards Tom. I think you might have made a good choice by bringing it in this direction.
Date: 02/02/10 12:13 am Title: Chapter 1
There are two ways this could have gone: the way where Bill thinks that Tom is ugly as well and kind of avoids him, or the way that he tries to help Tom. Either way would have been acceptable and even though I'd like to see how it would be the other way, I enjoy it this way as well :3
I don't have a word for this story, which sucks. I know what I'm thinking, but there's a word and I can't find it >___>
I really like it, though :3
Date: 11/21/09 06:59 pm Title: Chapter 24
DUDE OMG THIS WAS FREAKING AMAZING!!!!! i LOVE THE WHOLE STORY!!!!!!! Please let me know when you write the squeal!!!!! =D
Author's Response: the sequal is already up its called two conditions
Date: 09/29/09 03:17 am Title: Chapter 24
Please contact me with a sequal! I would love to read more
Author's Response: its already up rn
Date: 09/08/09 01:16 pm Title: Chapter 24
Agh, that was great
Date: 08/21/09 12:47 am Title: Chapter 22
i read a story once were bill's fuck buddys left a remote controlled vibrater in bill's ass. tom was the teacher and he got the remote from the boyz and was trying 2 figure out was it was that he had collected, yeah he turned it on.
Author's Response: what was the story?
Date: 08/21/09 12:14 am Title: Chapter 21
nvm on the last question i know what it is now.
love the story :)
Date: 08/21/09 12:12 am Title: Chapter 20
ok plz explain 2 me wat the dildo was idk wat that is,plz plz plz
Date: 08/20/09 05:37 pm Title: Chapter 2
Aw. Bill wants to help. This is a cute story so far.
Author's Response: thanx :D
Date: 08/20/09 07:18 am Title: Chapter 9
poor rachel...im afraid of docters when i have a sore throat, their out 2 get me!!! one of the last times (i get really bad sore throats alot)i had enough of it and i fought them...lets just say 5 or 6 human restraints later i was gaging as the woman swiped my throat for what i know was longer that normal...my mom knew it was longer than needed 2, she almost said something but the woman stopped.
love the story
Date: 08/20/09 06:51 am Title: Chapter 8
that was akward, even for me...