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Reviewer: Chi Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/12/09 03:09 pm Title: Chapter 22

xD They both think they hurt one other xD There goes your horny sex afternoon xD Mega-lol xD I loved it!!!! I hope you continue soon!!
xx Chi ^^

Reviewer: ichliebedreads Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/12/09 11:55 am Title: Chapter 22

ugh.. I'm having painful memories of a good story which would never come to life because of situations like this..

Great sex then something unexpected then one of them goes crying and me and my coauthor will argue on who started the fight and just ruin the whole chapter..

good chapter though..

 



Author's Response: aww you should plan it out before you start that way if one of you say NO THIS IS IT.. you can look back on what you planned out at the begining :D me and dawn arnt liek that at all we just rp XD and thanx

Reviewer: clandestinedreams Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/12/09 11:24 am Title: Chapter 22

aaawww.. Bill crying during sex D:

Author's Response: i know isnt he sooo ... cute?

Reviewer: deedee2413 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/12/09 10:43 am Title: Chapter 22

Please tell me there's some Georg/Gustav comming up, I mean, where did they go? (A)

Author's Response: we may start a new story on georg and gus :D

Reviewer: Synnie Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/12/09 02:25 am Title: Chapter 22

Aww *cuddles Bill* Poor thing!

Author's Response: i know poor billa rnps you gave us our 500th comment weeee :D

Reviewer: loves harry Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/11/09 11:41 pm Title: Chapter 22

I love the Gs i have a thing with them XD yay! thanks for giving me some Gs love

Author's Response: hahah no problem i think you will be happy abotu my next project :P

Reviewer: putanyrandomnamehere Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/11/09 11:14 pm Title: Chapter 22

awe, tom is so sweet. always worrying about bill. Are gustav and georg going to?
bill and tom are so connected! I love the story good luck writing the next chapter!

Author's Response: its been written for a while now =]

Reviewer: hilary1014 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/11/09 09:19 pm Title: Chapter 22

DAMN THAT WAS FUCKING H0T

Reviewer: x_XbrokenX_x Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/11/09 08:52 pm Title: Chapter 22

....wow... ha thats all i have to say. Really good, i love this story more and more with each chapter

Author's Response: and its ending in like 2 chapters

Reviewer: tokio_hotel_luver Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/11/09 08:07 pm Title: Chapter 22

sweet. hot and sexy

Author's Response: thanx more soon :P

Reviewer: THROX Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/11/09 07:42 pm Title: Chapter 22

That was to funny...I wonder what will happen next..

Author's Response: i know i know :D X

Reviewer: ells445 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/11/09 06:54 pm Title: Chapter 22

yum i love foreplay haha lol aww i going to miss dawn hope she has a nice tme away hehe keep it up as always xx

Author's Response: haha yes :D we will miss her

Reviewer: Emzo Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 07/11/09 06:53 pm Title: Chapter 22

I think you should carry on tbh ;D
xxxxx

Author's Response: haha i will, sadly dawns not here so i get to finish this story solo =[ only this chapter, and two more left =[

Reviewer: theyaylady Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/11/09 06:44 pm Title: Chapter 22

OOOOMG THE G'S ARE PRECIOUS O_O

Author's Response: they are D:

Reviewer: leahq Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 07/11/09 06:25 pm Title: Chapter 22

I think you should stop ending chapter half way through sex scenes... it's cruel :P hehe it was great though, I'm so glad the G's finally got with the lovin!! Can't wait for more, keep it up

Author's Response: haha im sorry

Reviewer: GiraffeJumper2008 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/11/09 03:05 pm Title: Chapter 21

Aww...so good

Author's Response: ^-^ Dankeee

Reviewer: loves harry Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/11/09 02:36 pm Title: Chapter 21

*w* So sweeeeeeeeeeeet!!! hahaha it really is sweet

Author's Response: awww thank you

Reviewer: ichliebedreads Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/11/09 11:40 am Title: Chapter 21

-giggles- yeah kinky little thing..

I'm curious about their past! spill it..



Author's Response: hahah yesrnand we weill see if not il write it :P

Reviewer: Zina Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/11/09 11:25 am Title: Chapter 21

Beautiful!!! Please continue it!!!!

Author's Response: will do :D

Reviewer: Zina Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/11/09 11:04 am Title: Chapter 19

Who is that dement, imbecile woman who leaves Georg?????????? She needs to be in a mental home!!!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: I (Dawn) can't understand it, either, and Synnie and I had a really heated argument over who got Georg.

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