Date: 11/27/09 06:24 am Title: Chapter 1
Ow Ow..i just love that story.It's so sweet and innocent,somewhat reminds of The notebook,one of my fave movies.;d but a Notebook with a lot of slash sex is haha ..far better ;d
I was wondering what will happen after that (i guess everyone does ;d).It would be pretty cool if you send us forward with an year or something,to the next summmer,where Bill is already a not-so-innocent freak and is somewhat like a man whore haha ;d and Tom finds out it's his own fault,he's been the one who failed Bill and made him that way.And he should face the consequences.. and i really hope they will be bloody enough..oops ,sooryy...this is your story and you do soo fine ,so i wont interrupt here.You know best what to do,it's just that i and my taste for the drama ;d..
Author's Response: I loved The notebook too but I can't say I remember much of it today, it's been too long since I saw it. Thanks for your input but I already have the story pretty much outlined and I can honestly say nothing of that is going to happen :) Hope you'll like it anyway.
Date: 11/26/09 11:06 pm Title: Chapter 14
The bittersweet feeling of the sex at the end was so perfectly communicated. Great job.
Author's Response: Thank you!
Date: 11/26/09 10:35 pm Title: Chapter 11
Was Adam based off of Adam Lambert?
Author's Response: lol. No, he wasn't but you're not the first to ask :)
Date: 11/26/09 05:59 pm Title: Chapter 4
Goddddd I wanna be Bill!
Wow your writing is awesome, I wish I could do the same in English... my spanish writing is pretty good though.
AWESOME
Author's Response: Thank you. I know what you mean. English isn't my first language either :)
Date: 11/26/09 12:12 pm Title: Chapter 8
Oh god, what an amazing story :D I haven't read something this cute in a looong time. Great job =D
Author's Response: Thank you so much. I'm happy you like it :)
Date: 11/25/09 06:25 pm Title: Chapter 14
I just finished reading every chapter you've published so far, and I have to say you write a fantastic story. You've managed to capture every emotion imagineable, be it lust, happiness, angst, sadness, or embarrassment. You have it all. Everything so far fits with the traditional summer fling, but simply with you behind the story as author, it has a different feel to it. I look forward to continuing to read the rest, and will check back every promised day for updates.
Author's Response: Thank you so much. You shower me with so many sweet words you make me blush. I'm happy you like the story. :)
Date: 11/25/09 10:22 am Title: Chapter 1
I know Bill like to be tied up, but there a step between being tied at bedpost and that.
Author's Response: I bet that part was all Tom's idea. ;)
Date: 11/24/09 10:22 pm Title: Chapter 2
omg ur amazing. love it
Author's Response: Thank you so much. Glad you like it. :)
Date: 11/24/09 09:39 pm Title: Chapter 14
It's so sad, but it's a summer love story.
Date: 11/24/09 09:24 pm Title: Chapter 13
I think I won't like what's to come.
Date: 11/24/09 09:05 pm Title: Chapter 12
WHAT?!! Fucking tied with a belt against a tree!! Where is shy Bill??lol I love Bill's grandma.
Author's Response: lol. I think you missed chapter 8. Tom discovers Bill's kink in that one and I believe hanging around Tom an entire summer is doing Bill some good ;)
Date: 11/24/09 08:50 pm Title: Chapter 11
It's amazing how innoncent Bill is.
Date: 11/24/09 07:02 pm Title: Chapter 9
Aww...this chapter is so sweet and i love Tom's candid talk. That guy really speak his mind.
Date: 11/24/09 06:08 pm Title: Chapter 14
WRITE MOOOOOOOOOORE! :)
Date: 11/24/09 05:39 pm Title: Chapter 8
That a good way to think, Bill. Leb die Sekunde. Sorry, it was easy.
Date: 11/24/09 04:11 pm Title: Chapter 14
UPDATE! PLEASE!
i really love it. can't waite!
:)
Date: 11/24/09 03:40 pm Title: Chapter 7
OMG, the ice cream scene!!!Naughty, naughty Tom.
Date: 11/24/09 02:58 pm Title: Chapter 5
I wish I could have seen Nicole's face.XD Woohoo!! Bill goes wild.
Date: 11/24/09 02:33 pm Title: Chapter 4
Tom is so wonderful, i really love his character.
Date: 11/24/09 02:06 pm Title: Chapter 3
It's good to have a flirtatious Tom. I think "shyness" isn't a word of his vocabulary.