Date: 07/24/09 01:20 pm Title: Chapter 6
It did, It did! I love this story more than you can imagine. I swear everytime I see it's updated I stop breathing!
Author's Response: Aww that is so sweet. Thanks for telling me. :)
Date: 07/24/09 12:58 pm Title: Chapter 6
i love this story! it's not like many others where they just jump in the sack together
:)!
Author's Response: Thank you. No, the first time should be special. :)
Date: 07/24/09 12:31 pm Title: Chapter 6
(: that was adorable and amazing. i loved it
Author's Response: Thank you. I'm glad you did. :)
Date: 07/24/09 11:20 am Title: Chapter 6
:) Toms so sweet to Bill I love it!
Cant wait for more
Author's Response: Thank you. :)
Date: 07/24/09 09:55 am Title: Chapter 6
It surely did make up for it. A lot. Thanks ;D
Author's Response: Thank you for reading it. :)
Date: 07/24/09 09:43 am Title: Chapter 6
*sputters* buh-flugh-nuh-sdkjgj *keels over* *hops back up, does major squee dance and sits down to finish review* oh god that was so hot! that was the best... no wait... second best shower scene I've read... ever... the first being the shower scene in Alabaster by FruityCaynneToast... but nevermind that...
anyhoo, this is just *drools* amazing...
those little horndogs... *perverted grin* i love it!
Author's Response: lol. Thank you so much. :)
Date: 07/24/09 09:26 am Title: Chapter 6
Ooooh that was sexy xxx
Date: 07/24/09 09:17 am Title: Chapter 6
Oh, gosh. *melts*
I know it sucks for Bill, knowing that after the summer is over, he and Tom will part ways =/ They both seem rather smitten with each other, already. I think it's so sweet.
Gah, I can't even think straight. So, I'm sorry for this horrible review. But, I absolutely adored this chapter. It was sweet, erotic, romantic, and even a bit funny =] (Tom in an apron? NICE)
♥
Author's Response: Yes I think they are both very smitten with each other :) So glad you liked the chapter. Thank you!
Date: 07/24/09 07:32 am Title: Chapter 6
*blushes* that was hot. just....hot. I totally heart it woman.
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you did. :)
Date: 07/24/09 07:25 am Title: Chapter 6
wow is all i can say. i love this story! please dont finnish it anytime soon lol
Author's Response: Thank you. No, this one seems to be my longest yet. I'm writing on chapter 9 right now and I'm nowhere near the end. :)
Date: 07/24/09 05:30 am Title: Chapter 6
Really enjoyed this chapter.
I love the way Tom treats Bill in this story, he is so nice and tender with him. You could tell he feels things are different with Bill since he didn't want to take advantage of him while he was intoxicated.
I do worry about when their summer vacation is over, I mean Bill is already feeling down every time he thinks about it.
I am also curious to know what Tom's thank you was all about.
Author's Response: Yes, I think Tom is very smitten too :) I'm glad you like the story. Thank you!
Date: 07/24/09 05:18 am Title: Chapter 6
I'm not sure I have any coherent words for you right now. You absolutely seared my brain and this: Tom bent down, placing his palms on either side of Bill’s torso and licking up some of the fluids from his stained body. KILLS me every time. GUH.
I adore Tom in this. He's so confident and sweet to Bill. And Bill is so damn cute. I worry now what's going to happen when summer vacation is over. But I won't think too much about it yet. Right now, I'm going to re-read this chapter, and try to remember how to breathe through it this time.
Author's Response: Are you still up, crazy girl. Don't you need sleep like the rest of us? lol. I'm glad you liked the chapter and you're such a fast reader I don't think it matter if you didn't breathe for the time it took you to read this :) If it was me on the other hand...lol. I'd be dead now.
Date: 07/24/09 04:32 am Title: Chapter 6
*cough*
i totally love this story
yay,the way u've made Tom....i totally understand Bill when he's shy around him and his knees are weak
i hope that u'll update soon
Author's Response: Thank you! I will update next Friday if possible. :)
Date: 07/24/09 03:24 am Title: Chapter 6
This chapter nearly melted me! It was the perfect combination of erotic and romantic...and the picture of Tom in an apron made me really giddy!
Author's Response: Thank you. Yes, I can imagine he'd look very adorable in one :)
Date: 07/24/09 03:20 am Title: Chapter 6
ILOVEIT. :D
Author's Response: Thank you! :)
Date: 07/23/09 02:10 pm Title: Chapter 1
awwwwww that was so cute!!! i love it!!
please continue!!! thanks!! XD
Author's Response: Thank you! I will definitely continue writing, don't think I'm able to stop :)
Date: 07/19/09 07:30 pm Title: Chapter 5
Oooh bit of a cliffhanger. I like it. :)
thanks for updating.
xx
Author's Response: Yes, I'm sorry for leaving you hanging like that. More soon though :)
Date: 07/19/09 02:25 pm Title: Chapter 5
OHMYGODILOVETHIS.
Author's Response: Thank you for telling me :)
Date: 07/19/09 01:58 pm Title: Chapter 5
thanks!!!! i love it!! continue!!!
Author's Response: I will! Thank you :)
Date: 07/19/09 12:13 pm Title: Chapter 5
im dieing here! next chapter,,,. please!
Author's Response: Soon soon :)