Date: 07/31/09 09:05 am Title: Chapter 7
OMG NOOO CLIFHANGER GRRRRR update soon awww i love this keep up the good work as always x :P
Author's Response: lol. Sorry about the cliffhanger. I honestly don't do it on purpose. More next Friday :)
Date: 07/31/09 09:02 am Title: Chapter 7
Lovely date! Even if Bill had no idea what movie he picked. LOL I'm glad he admitted to Tom that he hadn't been with anyone else. And it's nice to see them somewhere out, though Tom still has a one track mind. I'm curious how emotional this is for Tom or if it isn't. And how that's going to affect Bill, because Bill's just already sunk for Tom.
I'm so glad to see this update before I went to work. Just sweet, darling! *loves*
Author's Response: Yes, poor Bill. lol. Not his type of movie I suspect. Tom does have a one track mind but at least he's honest about it and it doesn't seem like Bill minds it too terrible either. There's no qustion that Bill has a serious crush on Tom and I suspect that Tom is more than a little smitten with Bill too. I finally have some time to myself so I can read the last chapter of Janni. I saw it up this morning but there was no chance for me to concentrate with a loud two year old running around. *loves you back*
Date: 07/31/09 09:02 am Title: Chapter 7
Ahhhh, this was such a great chapter =]
Tom is a sweetheart, I swear. I'd blush non-stop if I were Bill, too xD
There were two paragraphs that were the same, but...you probably know that by now, haha. I haven't looked at the other reviews, so sorry! ♥
Maaahhhh, I have to wait a whooooole week for more of this awesomeness. *sigh*
Author's Response: Thank you! I think I'd blush too :) Yep, I've fixed the chapter now. Don't know what happened there :)
Date: 07/31/09 08:26 am Title: Chapter 7
OF COURSE it's not over yet. LOL..XD The thing with Andi confused me a little at first though. Ahahahaha..XD
Glad you updated!^^ Yeeeeeeeee... *throws confetti*
Author's Response: Thanks for the confetti. *grins*
Date: 07/31/09 06:45 am Title: Chapter 7
Tom is definitely the cutest ^^ just the way that he studied the carrots with such interest, talked to Bill's grandma, bought him an ice cream ,p he's such a great guy in this
and I am so so so glad Andreas accepted Bill, he deserves to have good friends
I'm so sorry that Bill's so insecure though, about the whole being gay thing. I wonder if he'll ever tell his grandma
there was so much sweet sexiness in this that you don't even know ^^ and a cliffhanger, huh? ,p
in the beginning I think you were switching the sentences around a bit, because you've written this sentence: "The old woman looked up from her laundry basket just as Bill strolled down the stone path to her house. Her grandson seemed so much happier lately and she understood how much he had missed having a friend around when he came to visit her. She hadn’t met this Tom he always talked about but she was thankful he was there to keep Bill company none the less." twice, right in the beginning of the chapter.
loved it darling, can't wait for what comes next! but take your time, okay? I hope you're doing good, much love
Author's Response: I like Tom too. He's always fun to write because you'll never know what he's up to. :) Andreas sure would be a lousy friend if he'd mind that Bill is gay. *nods* Bill's insecurity is a hard part to get over. Even if he accepts it doesn't mean everyone else will and school can become hell for him. People are just stupid that way. Thank you for telling me about my slip when posting. I honestly have no idea how that happened. My laptop crashed so I'm burrowing this one and I don't really like it. Next chapter is already written and will be up if my beta has time to read through it first. :) As always your reviews mean so much to me. Love you so!
Date: 07/31/09 06:30 am Title: Chapter 7
Hehe so I just read this all in one sitting and I love the hell out of it so far! Seriously, it's cute as fuck, you have no idea! I'm just sad that it's all going to end at the end of the summer... or is it? Hopefully, i'll read more soon! Love
Author's Response: Thank you. I'm glad you like it. We'll see what happens at the end of the summer :)
Date: 07/31/09 06:12 am Title: Chapter 7
Can't wait what more will happen at their date ;)
xx
Author's Response: It's coming... :)
Date: 07/31/09 05:59 am Title: Chapter 1
I love this story, but I just wanted to point something out:~The old woman looked up from her laundry basket just as Bill strolled down the stone path to her house. Her grandson seemed so much happier lately and she understood how much he had missed having a friend around when he came to visit her. She hadn’t met this Tom he always talked about but she was thankful he was there to keep Bill company none the less.~
“I thought you were still in bed,” she said as he walked up to her, bent down and gave her a spontaneous hug. “Now, what was that for,” she chuckled and looked up at him. Her grandson had grown so much over the last year that he now stood a head taller than her.
“Nothing,” Bill smiled. He was so happy he felt he could burst any minute. He looked around. “Do you want me to mow the lawn today?”
She raised her eyebrows and looked surprised.
“Since when do you volunteer to do something I know you hate more than anything?”
~The old woman looked up from her laundry basket just as Bill strolled down the stone path to her house. Her grandson seemed so much happier lately and she understood how much he had missed having a friend around when he came to visit her. She hadn’t met this Tom he always talked about but she was thankful he was there to keep Bill company none the less.~..."
You repeated a paragraph twice, and it didn't really make sense to me(:
Author's Response: Thank you for telling me. I had some trouble posting today and somehow part of it got posted twice. I can certainly see how that was confusing. I fixed it now :)
Date: 07/31/09 04:37 am Title: Chapter 7
Loved it. I swear I absolutely adore Tom in this story. They are getting so close to each other that it makes me so nervous of how they will be when summer vacation ends.
Author's Response: Thank you. Yes, it's the sad truth about summer. It always ends. :)
Date: 07/31/09 04:36 am Title: Chapter 7
Ooh, Tom is just such a...teaser. No wonder Bill is blushing all the time xD
Author's Response: :)
Date: 07/31/09 04:34 am Title: Chapter 7
I just found this and I couldn't stop reading it, even though it's 4:30 in morning. Update soon?
Author's Response: I hate when that happens. Sometimes I get so caught up in a story and just can't stop until I've read all the chapters. I'm really glad you liked it though and I'll try to update next Friday as usual. :)
Date: 07/31/09 04:26 am Title: Chapter 7
I'm so happy to see them on a date! What I loved about it was that the whole things was so casual, yet charged with sex. And I really can't wait to see what Tom has planned next!
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked the date. It's not over yet though :)
Date: 07/31/09 04:22 am Title: Chapter 7
aaaaaaa u left me in tension
i love Tom's attitude
he's so cool and confident
next friday seems soooo far *cries*
Author's Response: Aww, but it will come soon enough *pats head*
Date: 07/31/09 03:44 am Title: Chapter 7
DANG. DANG... I have to wait a week for more. *burst out in sobbing, heartwrenching tears that pull my body back and forth*
Author's Response: Aww. So sorry sweetie. *pats head and rubs back hoping it feels better soon*
Date: 07/31/09 03:32 am Title: Chapter 7
OoO! things r getting a little hot
Author's Response: :)
Date: 07/31/09 03:20 am Title: Chapter 1
First of all: how are you?
I think the nine months will be soon over, so I give you my best wishes from now =)
The chapter is very good, I love the idea of a date, because it's so romantic...
The ice cream part was soooooo hot, and now I can't wait for more smut ;)
Thank you for the update :P
Author's Response: Thank you for asking. I'm okay considering :) I'm really glad you liked the chapter. Something weird happened when I posted so part of it went missing. I hope you got to read the right one or it might have been a little confusing :)
Date: 07/31/09 03:15 am Title: Chapter 7
oh my god are they finally gonna do it... hahaha poor bill his innocence is going to get lost to tom hahaha
Author's Response: We'll see :)
Date: 07/30/09 09:21 am Title: Chapter 6
this was definitely a hot chapter ,p more focused on smut than the last one, but still just as beautiful
The way you wrote Bill when he was coming was gorgeous, and Tom's reactions to him are just adorable
wonder what it was Tom thanked him for... will you tell us in the next chapter?
girl, I am still amazed you've managed to update once a week considering your current condition ^^ how are the three of you doing? I've thought about you so much while I've been away, hoping that you were okay. Much love for you all
Author's Response: Thank you so much for caring sweetie. I had my ultrasound today and both twins are close to 3 kg each! No wonder I'm big as a house. :) There's gonna be quite a lot of smut in this one I'm afraid but I'll try to keep it romantic as well. I don't think I'll be able to updating once a week for much longer but I'll do my best.
I think Tom just thanked him for last night and maybe the morning after. I didn't expect people to read so much into it but I got that question more than once. Nice to have you back, love. Hope you had a wonderful time over there.
Date: 07/30/09 09:16 am Title: Chapter 5
“Okay. I didn’t see that coming.”
love on Georg, he's just awesome ^^
this chapter was very sweet and...casual, in a way. It was just so relaxed. And still, in between the sweet kiss and the conversation and the beer, there was that stinging feeling inside Bill every time he thought of summer being over. I liked that, that it wasn't completely angst, but more of a careful approach to the subject. And Tom is so cool, saving Bill from the difficult questions ^^
I liked how you made Nichole not just the average girl that comes to break of the twins kind of character. She was flirting, but it was realistic kind of flirting, not overdone like those girls are often written. And then how she actually got embarrassed and felt stupid, but instead of making a scene you made her handle it in better ways. I really liked that.
Tom taking pictures of Bill: hot. Bill being naughty in pictures Tom takes of him: even hotter.
love
Date: 07/28/09 02:56 am Title: Chapter 6
This story is becoming one of my favorites :) Looking forward to the next chapter...
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you like the story :)