Date: 05/21/26 11:25 am Title: Chapter 13
The smut in this chapter is so deliciously detailed and hot so one can’t complain BUT it feels like a missed opportunity to not have written out the complete exctasy and joined connection/ pleasure moment when Bill wanted Tom to enter him again to not write that out, how he would scream in over sensitive but blissful arousal and shake as they both wanted the same thing and he felt Tom enter him in one long glide as he hears Tom grunts hoarsely and grip his hips with brutal strength and they find their second climax together, just something short like that would’ve made it all perfect instead of just jumping forward to the moment after when they lay exhausted.. cause for it to before that be so detailed it felt weird to jump over the ending of the sexual interaction..
Date: 05/21/26 11:25 am Title: Chapter 18
Oh you have twin boys as kids? Aww how adorable, are they identical twins? Since you like toll I’m sure you’re accepting of identical twincest..? I don’t like or accept regular incest for many reasons but identical twc is another thing entirely and it’s even studied by science and there actually are a lot of identical twins with that magical connection and love who are together in private and are very much in love in secret, there’s forums with anonymous comments from such identical twins couples and their stories.. I think it’s super beautiful and romantic, like they’re literally made for each other and are ONE.. like our boys Tom and Bill and their connection and love is so magical and beautiful to see and they have been a couple since May 2007 and still are in (not so) secret and its just SO romantic and beautiful.. I wish I had an identical twin and a connection and love like theirs. Anyway to my question, it might be a bit more complicated to be related to such a couple like for example being the mother and wanting your boys to be safe in a dangerous world like the biggest reason to maybe be a bit opposed to it but if your boys were to love each other like Tom and Bill loves each other; would you support it?
Date: 05/20/26 12:19 pm Title: Chapter 18
Oh you have twin boys as kids? Aww how adorable, are they identical twins? Since you like toll I’m sure you’re accepting of identical twincest..? I don’t like or accept regular incest for many reasons but identical twc is another thing entirely and it’s even studied by science and there actually are a lot of identical twins with that magical connection and love who are together in private and are very much in love in secret, there’s forums with anonymous comments from such identical twins couples and their stories.. I think it’s super beautiful and romantic, like they’re literally made for each other and are ONE.. like our boys Tom and Bill and their connection and love is so magical and beautiful to see and they have been a couple since May 2007 and still are in (not so) secret and its just SO romantic and beautiful.. I wish I had an identical twin and a connection and love like theirs. Anyway to my question, it might be a bit more complicated to be related to such a couple like for example being the mother and wanting your boys to be safe in a dangerous world like the biggest reason to maybe be a bit opposed to it but if your boys were to love each other like Tom and Bill loves each other; would you support it?
Date: 05/20/26 11:19 am Title: Chapter 13
The smut in this chapter is so deliciously detailed and hot so one can’t complain BUT it feels like a missed opportunity to not have written out the complete exctasy and joined connection/ pleasure moment when Bill wanted Tom to enter him again to not write that out, how he would scream in over sensitive but blissful arousal and shake as they both wanted the same thing and he felt Tom enter him in one long glide as he hears Tom grunts hoarsely and grip his hips with brutal strength and they find their second climax together, just something short like that would’ve made it all perfect instead of just jumping forward to the moment after when they lay exhausted.. cause for it to before that be so detailed it felt weird to jump over the ending of the sexual interaction..
Date: 09/29/24 11:59 pm Title: Chapter 1
I am a Chinese fan who came a bit late. Discovering this website is the happiest thing for me in recent years. I used to use bookmarking as commenting. I must say that I have read and bookmarked this story. Reading this story is undoubtedly a pleasure! Today I plan to leave a comment. Thank you for your story. You are an amazing writer.
Date: 03/18/24 08:48 am Title: Chapter 1
Okey great you wrapped it up very nicely ;)
Date: 03/18/24 03:15 am Title: Chapter 22
Lol getting over Tom?? With the incredible passionate dreamy love you described and the young age they would do anything to stay together even moving closer to each other / doing anything for study or work there and not break up and most def not being able to keep away from one another when they meet.. I really really hope they soon live close to each other and get to be and stay together for real
Date: 10/15/23 01:26 pm Title: Epilogue
How am I just now reading this?! I loved everything about this book. The length was perfect, the small dramas were perfect, the love story was perfect, the ending was PERCECTTTT. Seriously I could go on for days. Your writing is incredible, I didn’t feel like I was reading, everything fell together so perfectly!
Date: 04/02/23 11:29 pm Title: Chapter 1
I have left a review on other stories of yours, but wanted to say that I enjoyed this one too!
Date: 09/12/19 02:27 pm Title: Epilogue
already caught up with the story, therefore I will wait for updates.
Thank you!!!
Date: 09/11/19 02:27 pm Title: Chapter 22
This is so sad.... I am crying....
Date: 04/24/19 12:13 pm Title: Chapter 1
Thank you for the nice Story.I like your writing style and I coukld imagine a sequel. I would like to read about the future of the two...
Date: 06/16/18 07:10 pm Title: Epilogue
i love this story!
i wish you would do a sequel to this!
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm happy you like it :)
Date: 04/18/17 05:53 pm Title: Epilogue
Perfect story - made me cry, laugh and burst my heart from happiness! One of the sweetest things I've ever read
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm happy you like it :)
Date: 09/28/13 04:23 pm Title: Chapter 1
I have NEVER been this emotional while reading. Or watched a movie, Or in like life in general. I swear, this story captivated my very soul. Can't remember the last time i CRIED this much. I seriously cried myself to sleep the night I read the part where Tom leaves...
The story lines is perfect in every way. I couldn't be happier with it.
I will forever remember this story, and forever cherish it. Thank you.
Date: 09/25/13 07:45 pm Title: Epilogue
Like, seriously. I NEVER stop reading this story. I read it over and over and over again. :) Because it's just THAT awesome. :)
... And of course it's so wonderful, sexy and ROMANTIC! Thank you for this story! It always "lifts" me up when I'm feeling down.
Author's Response: A very belated Thank You!
Date: 09/15/13 03:01 pm Title: Epilogue
Okay so I've red this story like million times and I still love it! I just have to comment (again), 'cause I think you are amazing for writing one of my absolute favorite stories!
Date: 09/12/13 10:26 pm Title: Chapter 1
This is one of the best stories I have ever read in my entire life. I loved every single moment of it. and no it's not too much sex lol
Date: 05/14/13 11:31 am Title: Chapter 1
I'm so sorry for spamming your reviews with my qquestion, but are you planing to write anything new for THF? This place is lacking of good slash stories recently, and your were on of the bests! (for example this one, I really loved it!)
Author's Response: First, thank you for the compliment. You're so sweet. :-) Secondly, yes I'm working on another story ^^ I'm currently on ch 4 so it will take a while to finish. I'm really flattered you asked :-)