Date: 07/18/09 08:13 pm Title: Meeting
yes!! keep going~ LOL~~ XDD
Author's Response: i could get used too XD
Date: 07/18/09 08:11 pm Title: Meeting
awww bill gots a lil bro sort of ish hope everything goes well with them ;]
Author's Response: haha lil bro, that's what Bill wants to believe XD
Date: 07/18/09 07:55 pm Title: Meeting
I just came across this story, and fell in love with it right away. I can't wait to see how it will progress and what is going to happen.
Author's Response: wo! im glad ur fell in love with it! *gigles*
Date: 07/18/09 07:54 pm Title: Meeting
yesss, i wanna read more! :D
Author's Response: haha i'll try to start next chappie soon! but univerity takes lots of time :S
Date: 07/18/09 07:28 pm Title: Meeting
yeah :) I could get used to this n_n Ooo, if you're still looking for a beta, I could be it, if you want... lol, idk.... *blushes* that sounded so stupid, anyway... You did forget to uppercase a few 'i's here and there, just little things, but it can get annoying after a while...but you didn’t do it before anyway, in this chapter the lovely content made up for it.... lol, Georg seems to have this nice personality, and Tom seems to sweet to, probably said that before, but oh well he does :)
“All that in one day.”
Hehehe, I love how Georg is like so accepting to the idea. He didn't really bat an eyelash in general at the whole idea, stray cat, stray boy, whatever, it's Bill lol. How much trouble can he really get into? hehehe, maybe it best not to answer that n_n
"ANSWER!”
Hehehe, I loved how you put that part about the phone in there, it seemed to develop both of the boys' personalities, Bill's kind of random lost it (if you don't mind me saying) one, and Tom's kind of calm wide eyed one. At least that is how it seems to me :)
Somehow he imagined the boy was fifteen and a girl.
lol, I giggled at that one. To me it seemed like Bill just added the 'and a girl' part on sort of an after thought. Hopefully that was what you were going for? n_n
Author's Response: oh god! thnx a lot for your review!! really! i would really love for u to beta it since well i got a beta but she got lots of stories so i kinda feel im abusing her D: could you please beta it??? *puppy eyes*
yeah, im loving geo here!! haha he is hilarious n care free! *grins* n he is a daddy here hoho, and yeah, bill is like that while tom is waay too calm n mature, in a way hoho!!
again thnx 4 the review! ^^
Date: 06/27/09 03:12 pm Title: Gratitude
Ohh, how sweet is the little guy *_* so so naive... well, I don't know about you, but I did like the chapter and the characters. :) I hope you'll post soon!
Author's Response: haha^^ Tomi isn't that naive let me tell u :P its how he was educated to act D:
im glad u lyked them both ^^ i'll try to post soon
Date: 06/24/09 06:14 pm Title: Prologue
I love the fact you used Japan as your main setting. I love Japan, so thank you!!
Very interesting chapters. Keep it up cuz I'm DYING to know what's next!
Author's Response: YAY! I luv Japan too! :D <3
of course i'll keep it up, but i got to say smthn... i wont till i post one chappie of my old fanfic, i kinda forgot bout it n im sad :´(
Date: 06/24/09 01:32 am Title: Gratitude
Oh boy Bill. Not gay, eh? Tom might turn you into one in two months. Wahahaha..XD
Is Tom a prostitute or what?@___@
Author's Response: :D interesting how u r getting me ^^
let's say Tom isn't any ordinary kiddo :P
Date: 06/24/09 12:56 am Title: Gratitude
ohhhh!!!!! Bill took Tom off the streets x3!
*claps excitedly*
Ahem.. um.. update soon xD!
Author's Response: ^^ yesh he did!
Date: 06/23/09 11:37 pm Title: Gratitude
Woah. Tomi really is different. 0.0 But I like it!
Can't wait to read more. ^-^
Author's Response: XD i told u guys! XD
Date: 06/23/09 10:51 pm Title: Gratitude
hehehehe, I have no idea where you're taking this, which is so much fun :) I have to say I am very interested in how your Tomi is going to be, because he isn't like the real Tom. A lot of time, people seem to put Bill in the place that you put Tom, and I'm looking forward to see Bill handling everything, Tom normally does :) lol, if that makes any sense at all :)
Two long legs went up so Bill was now curled on the chair.
I love how you added this line. I've always been sort of amazed with the way Bill sits, lol. He always sits in the most interesting ways, and I just always seem to see him sitting in a different position, so I love how you added that. Because it just makes Bill's character more real to me :)
I've noticed throughout that every so often a spelling mistake will be thrown in, or the wrong word will be used. whole-hole type of thing :) I'm still trying to figure out everything in here. Like why Tokyo, and I love how you add the culture changes in there :) Again, it seems to add something great :)
Author's Response: now we are two that don't know where i'm taking this XD well i got a bare idea but well, for me it's not fun but scary! >o< anyway, I'm glad to know you are liking this Tomi! he got another personality - like i said b4 - but this one also isn't lyk tom at all D: i think this change in personality is cuz he got to evolve in a different enviroment hence the new attitude. And yup, Bill can b a strong character too! why not? but still a weird n funny one - personaly i love how he takes his decisions so quicky and easy *giggles*.
LOL at the sitting position! XD yup, he tends to sit in many interesting ways! though i got to say i laugh and love how tom sits making a huge tent with his jeans XD
Also u r right. i tend to have spelling mistakes, sowwie it's not my mother language, BUT i got a cute beta, now, imagine how bad my grammar really is! XD
b4 tokio hotel i got a fanatic love for Japan^^ i know a bit of japanese and the culture so its a bit easier for me to write bout it!^^ i luv the different cultures n well thnx 4 giving me some of ur time commenting! it's a lovely review
arigatou!
Date: 06/21/09 01:11 am Title: Prologue
keep it comin!
Author's Response: yup!
Date: 06/20/09 06:40 pm Title: Prologue
:o not only you should, but really you must! Me likes, me wants more, please. :) I just got into the story, and I already feel like the plot is going to be nice. ;) So when more??
Author's Response: aww
sure i'll keep on writting this storie! don't worry!! :D soon u'll have moaaar!
Date: 06/20/09 05:38 pm Title: Prologue
oOo:D keep on writing! i wanna know what happens^^,
Author's Response: XD sure! I will! :P
Date: 06/20/09 05:21 pm Title: Prologue
KEEP ON WRITING!! I COMAND YOU!!!
Author's Response: D: yes captain!
Date: 06/20/09 05:18 pm Title: Prologue
*giggles*
You love torturing him as much as I love doing the same to Bill! Why do we hurt the boys we love?
OH AND HEY, GUESS WHAT? I was curious about the Love Calculator, after reading the fic posted about it and went to search for one online.
I entered my name and Tom's and guess how compatible are we?
99% out of 100%!!!! LMAO!!!!
Author's Response: XD that's interesting n scary!! XD
hoho,yeah we do love to torture them *giggles* poor of our loves XD
Date: 06/20/09 05:12 pm Title: Prologue
yea~ keep going!! :D
Author's Response: :D yup!
Date: 06/20/09 04:16 pm Title: Prologue
OMG, CONTINUE WRITING BEFORE I HAVE A FIT!!!
What happened to this boy?!:-(((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((
Author's Response: XD ROSIEEE!!! dont make a fit plz!! XD
tomi? to him? oh... i... forgot! *giggles*
Date: 06/20/09 03:34 pm Title: Prologue
I like this!
Please, keep writing ^^,
Author's Response: yay! *grins* i will!
Date: 06/20/09 03:25 pm Title: Prologue
Ja! Keep writing!
Author's Response: oks! thnx! =)