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Reviewer: Silvia Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/26/09 05:10 pm Title: Searching

Aww, I'm glad Bill finally made up his mind to help Tom! I hope he won't scare off the boy or say the wrong thing, that Tom opens up to him a bit and they get a bit closer... I didn't really understand the first part though, explain? :)

Author's Response: the first part is just about gustav trying to find someone, in this case, his lil bro who is lost... guess who is he XD

Reviewer: engelnataly Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/26/09 04:28 pm Title: Searching

It's really misterious,actually it reminds me of some yaoi anime cartoon..isn't it?

Author's Response: D: idk bout any yaoi anime that got this XD i just kinda reminds me of a yaoi one of a kiss i dont remember the name well but nope, no yaoi XD tell me the name i might read it! :D

Reviewer: DiscoDancing Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/26/09 04:16 pm Title: Searching

Haha, the plot thickens. ;)

Author's Response: hohoho!! it doees

Reviewer: GiraffeJumper2008 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/26/09 03:13 pm Title: Searching

Aw...I liked it. I so didn't see Gustav being Tom's brother...that one blind-sighted me. So Bill's gonna ask? Can't wait for the next one!

Author's Response: lol! they are just half bros so that could help XD n weeell bill... he might! XD

Reviewer: DiscoDancing Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/14/09 08:08 pm Title: Forgetting

So Tom is a prostitute, sort of? Or... I don't know a better word. I don't really know what I mean.

I cannot wait to see where this goes. =)

Author's Response: lol! sex servant?? haha!

Reviewer: thogje Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 08/14/09 10:51 am Title: Forgetting

I have a little feeling that Tom is or was some kind of a prostitute ? O.o

Author's Response: D: oh gott! how could u think that?! pfft.

Reviewer: Raiya Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/09/09 11:29 am Title: Forgetting

Not gonna lie.. when Tom talked to Tanaka liked that... I got goosebumps x]

x]!!!

Author's Response: haha! XD well i tried to make it that way ^` im happy ppl got the sensation bill n takana got too rofl!!

Reviewer: GiraffeJumper2008 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/09/09 12:45 am Title: Forgetting

This is pretty good, then again, most of your stuff is. Update soon?

Author's Response: lol! thnx a lot! i try ^^'

Reviewer: WhiteWolfHotel Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/08/09 10:56 pm Title: Forgetting

oh yeah u got to update!!!!!!! but holy shit 9years apart!?!?!? wow its a geat story thought update

Author's Response: haha i will! ^^ n well, yeah, nine looooong years, still it's k XP

Reviewer: yorutya Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/08/09 06:05 pm Title: Forgetting

plz update sooonnn thx=] u is awesome gurl=]

Author's Response: haha thnx ash!! ^^ i will!

Reviewer: xmoomin Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/08/09 05:06 am Title: Forgetting

This chapter made me really sad. :( I hope Tom will open up and trust Bill soon. Update again! :)

Author's Response: aww dont b saad! *pouts* things are gonna change in both lives! ^^

Reviewer: punk_princess_044 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/08/09 12:32 am Title: Forgetting

wow... wats with tom is he the type of person to sell his body for money

Author's Response: now some ppl is gettin me!! YAY! :D

Reviewer: Silvia Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/20/09 05:33 am Title: Meeting

Awww. :) I wish we could read more action between Bill and Tom! :) I mean see what they do and leave out all the other characters for a bit. ;) I can't beta this for you, but I can tell you not to use german words in a plain english writing, for it looks out of place. I like how sweet Tom is, I hope they'll get to know each other better and that you post soon!

Author's Response: haha, yeah, i'll wait more for them to interact, first bill got to know tomi better :D i already got a beta don't worry! n well the german i guess i wont D: n tomi sweet tomi that's how he is in a very twisted way, u'll get me later on! :D

Reviewer: Raiya Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/19/09 04:55 pm Title: Meeting

ohhhh i so could get used to that x]

Author's Response: hohoho, nice to know XD

Reviewer: emraud Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/19/09 07:41 am Title: Meeting

hahahaha.. Bill's well.. not gay enough yet. Hahaha.. This reminds me of Kimi wa Petto. wait. Is this based on Kimi wa Petto?? Hahahha.. LMAO.. Weird..XD A lot of differences. Hahahaha..XD

Author's Response: haha sure, bill's not gay enough XD I LOVE kimi wa petto! n jun matsumoto moar hoho! we could say its a bit based but nein since the storie is completely different TRUST ME haha!!

Reviewer: Lyn Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/19/09 05:37 am Title: Meeting

Oh, this is so adorable!! I love Tom like this!!! Keep it up!!

Author's Response: haha yeah i luv tom in lots of forms ;P

Reviewer: ichliebedreads Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/19/09 03:41 am Title: Meeting

awwww... I like older and manlier Bill.. but I love him crazy..

 

more?



Author's Response: me too! XD crazy bill is awesome :D

Reviewer: icequeenqt170 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/18/09 10:57 pm Title: Meeting

I wouldn't mind being toms flat buddy lol

Author's Response: i guess no one XD

Reviewer: Annalas Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/18/09 09:46 pm Title: Meeting

Awww...I love this story! Update soon pllleeeaasssseeee?

Author's Response: YAY! i'll try!!

Reviewer: 2Kewl4U Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/18/09 08:20 pm Title: Meeting

I wouldv'e been got used to it...
A couple of errors in the chappie but still really good!

Author's Response: teehee... ^^' yeah, i know but... sorry i just wrote it n posted it XD

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