Date: 08/05/10 08:18 pm Title: Longing
THIS IS AMAZING!
omg, can't wait for next the chapter.
Author's Response: DX wait a bit since im kinda stuck with it DX lol thnx 4 reviewing! :D
Date: 07/16/10 01:07 am Title: Longing
Ah shit...
Author's Response: uhuu :/
Date: 07/09/10 07:13 pm Title: Longing
ah!!! thanks for the update, please update again soon!!
Author's Response: this time I'm sure I will since I'm almost done with the chappie! lol
Date: 07/09/10 05:07 am Title: Longing
HOLY SHIT FUCK OMG TOMMMMMMMMMMMMM. OMG. I'M GOING TO CRY. THIS IS HORRIBLE. TELL ME HE'S GONNA BE ALRIGHT. HE HAS TO BE.
Author's Response: hohoho... who knows? ..jk, next chappie u'll know! :P
Date: 05/13/10 01:40 pm Title: Fearing
Rain poodles? Puddles, hunnybunch lol
NOOOO! Give Tom back to Bill!
Author's Response: hahaha!!! okay cabbie, what's the good one then?! haha
Date: 05/13/10 11:54 am Title: Fearing
my soul will be gone too if you don't update soon. i'm enraptured by your story line and charaters.
Author's Response: :D thnx! haha right now im kinda only working 4 this one so yeah... but, i cant promise it will b soon! thnx again ^^
Date: 05/13/10 11:30 am Title: Trusting
Grim, you're doing the same thing when you repeat 'the raven man' as when you repeat 'the occidental boy'. Here's something that works for me when i write (no, i don't have anything posted on THF yet!) - Before you post your story, make a list of what you'll have to describe very often. e.g eyes, lips, hair, bill, tom, etc. see how many different ways you can describe those things, then alternate the descriptions in your story.
Author's Response: I would love to read some of ur stuff! :D aaahhhh! the repeating thing... i will work on that! i promisee *cries* n ur idea is good! i'll do that since i know a few, having more words will be better... thank you!
Date: 05/13/10 10:45 am Title: Forgetting
Hey Grim, just some friendly advice. If you keep saying "the occidental boy" everytime you mention Tom it becomes redundant. It's like the writers who will always say chocolate orbs over and over when they speak of Tom's eyes. It becomes too much. A reference like that is good if it's used only once or twice in a whole story.
Author's Response: I guess i stopped writing "the occidental boy" in the other chappies... and yup, i try not to repeat the same word over and over again, teehee, i guess i need to work more on that! thnx!
Date: 05/13/10 10:39 am Title: Meeting
Shut it Georg,” Bill spat, “Anyway, after that, I went home and somehow ended up meeting a hurt kid and took him to my apartment. He was kinda unconscious, he was filled with blood and that so I wanted to heal him, he is a bit weird but oh, he is pretty.”
Grim, maybe you should say that he was COVERED in blood, since, technically everyone is filled with blood.
Author's Response: lol, u right about that! i just changed it ^^thnx 4 ur advice!
Date: 04/25/10 10:34 am Title: Feeling
Wow, great story!
I hope you upload soon (:
Author's Response: *grins* gee, thnx! I'll try!
Date: 04/24/10 10:54 pm Title: Feeling
Thanks for the update, i'm really looking forward to next chapter=D
Author's Response: yup! im working on it rite now!
Date: 04/24/10 06:38 am Title: Feeling
Yay an update!
Wow I wonder how Jorg knows what he does?
And Bill and Tom are getting closer :D
What's going to happen when the two months is over though???
Author's Response: if they are able to reach the two months! LOL ^^
Date: 04/24/10 12:45 am Title: Feeling
thanks for the update!
Author's Response: u__u sorry for the long wait
Date: 04/03/10 04:31 pm Title: Sleeping
Omg I wonder what the meeting will be like! Can't wait until you update it!!!
Author's Response: i just added the new chappie!
Date: 03/08/10 03:00 pm Title: Sleeping
I'm so glad you updated!
Poor Tomi sleepwalking into Bill's bed hehe
Author's Response: haha im glad i updated too XD LOL
Und yeah, tomi sleepwalking wasn't that bad yanno? hohoho
Date: 03/07/10 04:20 pm Title: Sleeping
Can't wait to read how that meeting is going to go. Jorg seemed quite nice before, hope that's still the case and poor Bill, he wasn't as immune as he would've liked to Tom's charms. Don't think Tom is that immune to him, either, even if we don't really know what's going on in his head. Fabulous read!
Author's Response: hoho, things will get more excited from now on! i can promise u that! n yeah, no one is immune to Tomi! ^^ And well... tomi... he is a mystery for all of us! XD Thnx for your comment! i'll try to end the next chapter asap!
Date: 03/07/10 03:39 pm Title: Trusting
Hee, I love the way Tom has crept into Bill's heart. It's obvious it's changed Bill quite a bit since they met. :) I just love how this story is developing, very interesting. :)
Author's Response: thank you! XD Bill is kinda harsh but yeah, the dreadhead is working his way unknowingly! XD
Date: 03/07/10 03:12 pm Title: Forgetting
Whoa, what an interesting story, so very different from anything I've read before. I'm really enjoying learning all these tidbits of Tom and Bill as the story moves along. I'm really intrigued over Tom and his past as well. *off to read more*
Author's Response: teehee! thnx! i really have fun writing it cuz its a bit sarcastic and idk, i just have fun with it! little by little i will let ppl know more about Tom's past and how they both are getting along! n trust me Bill IS intrigued too DX Thanks for R&R! <3
Date: 12/10/09 08:50 pm Title: Finding
worth the wait and ready for more!!!
Author's Response: LOL! yup! this is my fav storie of all my babies XD
Date: 10/28/09 12:16 am Title: Trusting
Awwwww...
Author's Response: :D