Date: 10/31/24 08:41 pm Title: Chapter 1
I am a Chinese fan who came a bit late. Discovering this website is the happiest thing for me in recent years. I used to use bookmarking as commenting. I must say that I have read and bookmarked this story. Reading this story is undoubtedly a pleasure! Today I plan to leave a comment. Thank you for your story. You are an amazing writer.
Date: 12/28/14 07:22 pm Title: Chapter 1
Really hot!! I choked on my gum at one point. :P
Date: 08/09/12 02:48 am Title: Chapter 1
this was a good story!
Date: 11/16/09 10:31 am Title: Chapter 1
This is amazing I LOVE it! I love loads of your stories! You Rule.
Date: 06/21/09 08:47 pm Title: Chapter 1
That...was....hot....!!!
Date: 06/21/09 08:47 pm Title: Chapter 1
That...was....hot....!!!
Date: 06/20/09 04:43 pm Title: Chapter 1
Whoa. Explosive.
Date: 06/20/09 03:50 pm Title: Chapter 1
I LOVED EVERY WORD!!!!!!!!!!!! GREAT JOB!
Date: 06/20/09 02:33 pm Title: Chapter 1
sexy and amazing, I absolutly loved it. XOXOXOXOXOXOXO
Date: 06/20/09 07:16 am Title: Chapter 1
O.O *goes to have a cold shower* omg you two have to start writing together some more. It was HOT.
Apart from that, there were some spelling and concordance mistakes, here and there, not enough to kill the mood, but meh, Rachel, you know how I am about those. But anyway, really really hot. I, as the twins, can't wait for round two.
And about the G's hearing them...I wouldn't be worried, they were probably getting off to the twins' moans...together. If you don't believe me, ask Gustav in the morning about the little claw marks he's got in his arms.
Great job, you both get cookies.
Date: 06/20/09 02:11 am Title: Chapter 1
oh my. i do love crossdressing bill. that was just HAWT! i think i died and went to heaven. Damn. I'm gonna go read this again.