Date: 06/14/10 08:41 am Title: Chapter 4: Flashbacks and Flesh Wounds
pls continue with this, it's nice ^^
Date: 06/11/10 01:52 am Title: Chapter 4: Flashbacks and Flesh Wounds
goodness :D please contiue this is amazing! :D
Date: 05/08/10 07:02 pm Title: Chapter 1: Kind Prince Turned Captive
please update update its lovely
Date: 05/05/10 11:06 pm Title: Chapter 4: Flashbacks and Flesh Wounds
It's very good so far.
I like it.
Especially the proper punctuation.
Keep writing.
Date: 04/13/10 07:44 am Title: Chapter 4: Flashbacks and Flesh Wounds
love this ^^!
Date: 03/03/10 10:26 am Title: Chapter 4: Flashbacks and Flesh Wounds
UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!!!
Date: 02/27/10 11:35 pm Title: Chapter 4: Flashbacks and Flesh Wounds
i give it a fifty no an infinty because its soooooooooo owsome u so need to write more and very soon....
Date: 01/30/10 02:40 pm Title: Chapter 4: Flashbacks and Flesh Wounds
I want to read more *pouts* I know Tom is good at heart
Date: 12/18/09 09:13 am Title: Chapter 4: Flashbacks and Flesh Wounds
Continue! pweety pwease?? ;))
I will continue reading and review each time
Date: 12/13/09 02:49 pm Title: Chapter 4: Flashbacks and Flesh Wounds
Ooo what happens next? This is quite intriguing. Bill was ill as a child? And Tom is so bitter! I want to kick Georg for hurting Bill! Love it!
Date: 11/15/09 08:41 am Title: Chapter 4: Flashbacks and Flesh Wounds
I love stories innvolving princes and fairies and stuff like that :D
And you are really good at writing stories =D
Date: 10/20/09 02:43 am Title: Chapter 4: Flashbacks and Flesh Wounds
aww tom is starting to like him
Author's Response: Not quite. :) Thanks for reading.
Date: 10/19/09 10:39 pm Title: Chapter 4: Flashbacks and Flesh Wounds
Aww, Poor Bill. I can't imagine doing something so horrible to something or someone so beautiful. I realize prince Tom is sick, but how can he let his brothers treat Bill so badly if he is to help. Agh it just makes me so sad, but maybe someone is going to help now. It seems that there is someone having mercy on him in the end of this. It would be nice if it were Prince Tom coming to his senses.
Author's Response: I can only say that you'll be pleased with the next chapter. :) Thanks for reading.
Date: 10/19/09 09:46 pm Title: Chapter 4: Flashbacks and Flesh Wounds
i like it! keep it comin!
Author's Response: We intend to. :) Thanks for reading!
Date: 10/19/09 09:40 pm Title: Chapter 4: Flashbacks and Flesh Wounds
I just started this fic today, and I must say I'm hooked. More soon, please? :3
Author's Response: Thanks for reading! We'll have more up next week!
Date: 10/19/09 08:57 pm Title: Chapter 4: Flashbacks and Flesh Wounds
Awww, Tomi! They're bonding! or will be bonding...yeah...Anyway, love it! Please update soon!
Author's Response: Mmhmm, thanks for reading! :)
Date: 10/19/09 08:47 pm Title: Chapter 4: Flashbacks and Flesh Wounds
Is that Tom helping Bill? I hope so! This story is really good! I like the concept! Update soon!
Author's Response: You'll just have to see. :) Thanks for reading!
Date: 10/10/09 08:52 pm Title: Chapter 3: On Bitterness and Burns
Very interesting. Please continue this!
Date: 10/08/09 12:20 pm Title: Chapter 3: On Bitterness and Burns
Despite the fact that we're talking to each other on Y!M, I'm still reviewing here xD
Soooo. I was sad when I learned this only had three chapters, it was getting really good ;-; Promise you'll update sometime soon, bitte? :]
I liked how you made him cry black diamonds. That was adorable, especially when he offered them to Tom. Tom makes me laugh with what a total bitch he's being to poor Bill xD Hopefully though they'll see each other as equals and then comes the smutty romancey stuff xDD
Only problem that I found is that metal is extremely hazardous to faeries. It doesn't just cause rashes, and it doesn't need to be magicked. Metal and iron cause burns and blisters and stuff on them. It's pretty bad D; I read this book once and someone used a metal rod or something and dragged it across the faerie's neck and the skin bubbled and melted and it was bad. But since it's fiction and you can make it your own way that doesn't much matter.
So. Yeah. :]
Author's Response: Yeah, metal's really hazardous to most faeries, but we decided to make our own version of them. :) Thanks for reading.
Date: 09/30/09 06:41 pm Title: Chapter 3: On Bitterness and Burns
Ok, I'm going to track this story, because it sounds so good. I really want more.
Author's Response: Thank you! Check back on Monday!
