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Reviewer: NiniNECKBITER Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/14/10 08:41 am Title: Chapter 4: Flashbacks and Flesh Wounds

pls continue with this, it's nice ^^

Reviewer: adimar Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/11/10 01:52 am Title: Chapter 4: Flashbacks and Flesh Wounds

goodness :D please contiue this is amazing! :D

Reviewer: AngelSusu Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/08/10 07:02 pm Title: Chapter 1: Kind Prince Turned Captive

please update update its lovely

Reviewer: CoconutGlitter Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/05/10 11:06 pm Title: Chapter 4: Flashbacks and Flesh Wounds

It's very good so far.
I like it.
Especially the proper punctuation.
Keep writing.

Reviewer: NiniNECKBITER Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/13/10 07:44 am Title: Chapter 4: Flashbacks and Flesh Wounds

love this ^^!

Reviewer: OrangeCheezIt Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/03/10 10:26 am Title: Chapter 4: Flashbacks and Flesh Wounds

UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!!!

Reviewer: emogurl1306 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/27/10 11:35 pm Title: Chapter 4: Flashbacks and Flesh Wounds

i give it a fifty no an infinty because its soooooooooo owsome u so need to write more and very soon....

Reviewer: Heidi94 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/30/10 02:40 pm Title: Chapter 4: Flashbacks and Flesh Wounds

I want to read more *pouts* I know Tom is good at heart

Reviewer: Heidi94 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/18/09 09:13 am Title: Chapter 4: Flashbacks and Flesh Wounds

Continue! pweety pwease?? ;))
I will continue reading and review each time

Reviewer: pyrofrizzchick Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/13/09 02:49 pm Title: Chapter 4: Flashbacks and Flesh Wounds

Ooo what happens next? This is quite intriguing. Bill was ill as a child? And Tom is so bitter! I want to kick Georg for hurting Bill! Love it!

Reviewer: BeautiFurImmer Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/15/09 08:41 am Title: Chapter 4: Flashbacks and Flesh Wounds

I love stories innvolving princes and fairies and stuff like that :D
And you are really good at writing stories =D

Reviewer: emochmcl Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/20/09 02:43 am Title: Chapter 4: Flashbacks and Flesh Wounds

aww tom is starting to like him

Author's Response: Not quite. :) Thanks for reading.

Reviewer: asahi Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/19/09 10:39 pm Title: Chapter 4: Flashbacks and Flesh Wounds

Aww, Poor Bill. I can't imagine doing something so horrible to something or someone so beautiful. I realize prince Tom is sick, but how can he let his brothers treat Bill so badly if he is to help. Agh it just makes me so sad, but maybe someone is going to help now. It seems that there is someone having mercy on him in the end of this. It would be nice if it were Prince Tom coming to his senses.

Author's Response: I can only say that you'll be pleased with the next chapter. :) Thanks for reading.

Reviewer: icequeenqt170 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/19/09 09:46 pm Title: Chapter 4: Flashbacks and Flesh Wounds

i like it! keep it comin!

Author's Response: We intend to. :) Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: xmoomin Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/19/09 09:40 pm Title: Chapter 4: Flashbacks and Flesh Wounds

I just started this fic today, and I must say I'm hooked. More soon, please? :3

Author's Response: Thanks for reading! We'll have more up next week!

Reviewer: vampireslure1608 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/19/09 08:57 pm Title: Chapter 4: Flashbacks and Flesh Wounds

Awww, Tomi! They're bonding! or will be bonding...yeah...Anyway, love it! Please update soon!

Author's Response: Mmhmm, thanks for reading! :)

Reviewer: bmccray Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/19/09 08:47 pm Title: Chapter 4: Flashbacks and Flesh Wounds

Is that Tom helping Bill? I hope so! This story is really good! I like the concept! Update soon!

Author's Response: You'll just have to see. :) Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: vampireslure1608 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/10/09 08:52 pm Title: Chapter 3: On Bitterness and Burns

Very interesting. Please continue this!

Reviewer: Savannah Suicide Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/08/09 12:20 pm Title: Chapter 3: On Bitterness and Burns

Despite the fact that we're talking to each other on Y!M, I'm still reviewing here xD

Soooo. I was sad when I learned this only had three chapters, it was getting really good ;-; Promise you'll update sometime soon, bitte? :]

I liked how you made him cry black diamonds. That was adorable, especially when he offered them to Tom. Tom makes me laugh with what a total bitch he's being to poor Bill xD Hopefully though they'll see each other as equals and then comes the smutty romancey stuff xDD

Only problem that I found is that metal is extremely hazardous to faeries. It doesn't just cause rashes, and it doesn't need to be magicked. Metal and iron cause burns and blisters and stuff on them. It's pretty bad D; I read this book once and someone used a metal rod or something and dragged it across the faerie's neck and the skin bubbled and melted and it was bad. But since it's fiction and you can make it your own way that doesn't much matter.

So. Yeah. :]



Author's Response: Yeah, metal's really hazardous to most faeries, but we decided to make our own version of them. :) Thanks for reading.

Reviewer: Schwarzendawn Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/30/09 06:41 pm Title: Chapter 3: On Bitterness and Burns

Ok, I'm going to track this story, because it sounds so good. I really want more.

Author's Response: Thank you! Check back on Monday!

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