Date: 09/06/09 08:30 am Title: Hero
Um honestly this story is not well done.
it has potential but you're not using it to your advantage.
Multiple times you have referred cassie to alex.
SO, I'm thinking this is what you want to happen to you.
All in all this story isn't done well.
Author's Response:
I'm sorry you feel that way. I'm surprised that I keep doing the Cassie/Alex thing, and the reason for that is I don't want this to happen to me, but I used the name Alex in one of my other stories, Cupid's Arrow. It was my first story on here, and I keep doing that.
I've decided to go through and read my stories so that I can fix them up a bit so they CAN be better.
By the way, thanks so much for telling me about the Cassie/Alex thing because I never would have noticed.
Date: 09/06/09 08:28 am Title: Hero
Um honestly this story is not well done.
it has potential but you're not using it to your advantage.
Multiple times you have referred cassie to alex.
SO, I'm thinking this is what you want to happen to you.
All in all this story isn't done well.
Date: 09/06/09 07:08 am Title: I Want To Hold Your Hand
Cliffhanger! Waiting for the next chapter... ;)
lol when Tom's like
uh...I love you too?? ;)
oh and about the album...it looks cool but where's the rest of the band??
[confusion]
sorry, not much of a review for ya, but I do love your story :)
Author's Response:
Every review means something to me:) The new album looks okay, I just wish that Tom, Georg, and Gustav were on the cover/in the Automatic video too! But it'll be cool, because it's them:)
Thanks for your review!
Date: 09/04/09 08:40 pm Title: Stumm
omg i do not think your rushing the love jaja its perfectly fine with me!! jaja OMG dude the video was wicked!!! i loved it idk how many times ive seen it already lol oh and my fav. song is one that got leaked its love and death
Author's Response: Aww, thanks! The video was awesome, I just wish it had more Tomi, Gusti, and Georg!:) My favorite song is Pain of Love, the one that got leaked. It reminds me of their old stuff from Scream. Thanks for your review!:)
Date: 09/01/09 07:35 pm Title: About a Girl
WOW! you so have to update this!!
Author's Response: Thanks for your review! I'm glad you like this story.