Date: 01/27/08 09:08 pm Title: Scene 6, Kiss Me
aww cute!
Author's Response: ^_^ thanks
Date: 01/26/08 04:28 pm Title: Scene 6, Kiss Me
have some1 help you
Author's Response: ^_^ we'll see when it gets to that part.. of course, that's assuming that they GET that far which of course i'm not able to reveal yet, haha. thanks for your reviews, though. =D
Date: 01/25/08 04:55 pm Title: Scene 6, Kiss Me
i hope you don't keep us waiting for this long for a new chapter as well. if you plan on taking it further than just kissing, you might add heavy kink as well.
Author's Response: ^_^ I'll try not to keep you guys hanging too long. As for the heavy kink... I don't know... we'll see... I'm just not too good at writing that kinda stuff, so I usually don't go any further than just implying those kinds of things. Danke for reviewing again! =D
Date: 01/25/08 03:26 pm Title: Scene 6, Kiss Me
ugh, it's getting better! but it's also already a light kink so you might wanna put a warning, maybe?
Author's Response: Ha, thanks. And thank you.. I'm never so sure on the warnings--just added that as a warning though, so thanks. =]
Date: 01/25/08 11:19 am Title: Scene 5, Love is Blind
so sweet :) risking with the exams to please the readers...
Author's Response: oh yes.. i'm a bit crazy like that sometimes. Lol, but the exams turned out great, so it's all good. ^_^ Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 01/25/08 06:34 am Title: Scene 6, Kiss Me
aww wow! This chapter was SO good! :D And Tom's so sweet *_* I listened to the song (kiss me) when I read it and it made such a beautiful impression^^
Author's Response: Aw thank you! Hehe, it's a great song. ^_^
Date: 01/25/08 05:44 am Title: Scene 1, Welcome to Hell on Earth
Lou Bega?
Author's Response: Hah, yeah. Lou Bega- artist of the song "Mambo #5" --used him as a reference in their bickering 'cause Tom is talking about all these girls with names like "Rita" and "Monika"... names listed in that song. Hehe, a bit confusing if you didn't get the reference. ^_^
Date: 01/25/08 05:00 am Title: Scene 6, Kiss Me
this was hell of a cuteness.
me needs more (:.
Author's Response: =) thank youuuu.
Date: 01/25/08 01:53 am Title: Scene 6, Kiss Me
Jeeeej!!!!!!! More more more!!!!!!
Author's Response: ^_^ more to come soon... hopefully.
Date: 01/24/08 10:20 pm Title: Scene 5, Love is Blind
awwwwwww this was my favorite chapter!
Author's Response: =D hah, i'm happy you like it--thanks for reviewing!
Date: 01/24/08 08:27 pm Title: Scene 6, Kiss Me
Cute!
Author's Response: =D thanks!
Date: 01/24/08 06:23 pm Title: Introduction, Welcome to My Life.
This is so amazing, I think I just peed a bit.
Okay, not really, but you get the point x]
Author's Response: Hah, yeah, I get the point. =] Thanks, I'm happy you like it.
Date: 01/24/08 05:00 pm Title: Scene 6, Kiss Me
yes it was worth the wait
Author's Response: =) Yay, I'm glad it was.
Date: 01/24/08 04:39 pm Title: Scene 6, Kiss Me
omg Bill likes Tom to!!! *does little dance*!!!! yay!!!! omg this is awsome!!! yay!! now he just has to accept it!!! hurry and make him accept it!!! update soon please!!!
Author's Response: Haha, thanks!! =D I'll try & update soon!!!
Date: 01/24/08 04:10 pm Title: Scene 6, Kiss Me
wow this was one of the first"kisses" I ever readed!includind the dream one
Author's Response: Haha, thanks. =D
Date: 01/24/08 03:21 pm Title: Scene 6, Kiss Me
oh my GOD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
THIS WAS SOOOOOOOO INTENSE *_*
ok, get ready cause this review will be LONG!
1st: Bill's reaction was SSSSSSSOOOOOO unexpected! I thought he would be like, melting in his bed and thinking of Tom's kiss on his neck but he just started acting like a lutanic, trying to get rid of the feeling that was still lingering in his flesh. How greatly you managed to describe him right there!
2nd: HOLY FUCKING POTATOES! I was soooooooo in love with the dream scene. I swear I was blushing furiously reading Bill's words and what he did...God, that thing with his finger. And then the kiss, it was so intense, the way they grabbed each other and *_*
And you had to cempletely ruin it >.<
I swear I screames when I realised it was just a dream. I thought I'd punch you if you were in front of me cause it felt so DAMN real to me!
3rd: The whole "Tom avoiding Bill" that turned out to be "Bill avoiding Tom too" made me chuckle =D
aaaaaaaand finally, the last scene...So beautiful! Haven't heard that song, don't even know if it's real but I could definitely picture Tom playing his guitar and Bill looking at him with those sweet eyes of his *_*
And their kiss...So small and soft but so full of emotions the same time (L)
And you had to stop it like that >.<
I hate you sometimes! But I think you already know how much I love this story so PLEAAAAASE don't make us wait so much for an update next time!
PS. Sorry for the long review again. I'm just really excited whenever you update! ^_^
PS2. He... he kissed me, he thinks to himself as he watches the object of his infatuation flee from the scene.
Awwww Tomiiii ! That was so sweet!!
Author's Response: Haha, well.. first off, I freaking LOVE your long reviews, and I'm positive I've said this before, but oh well. ^_^ Hah, the dream... I love fooling you guys sometimes... and dream sequences are one of my favorite things to write. *hides* sorry to ruin it for you, but come on? bill saying those things in this story could only happen in a dream. Hah! The song is real; it's called "Kiss Me" by Sixpence None the Richer, hence the title of this chapter, too. Aw, I'm so sorry I made you wait so long... got side-tracked finishing up one of my other stories and I focused all my attention on the last chapter of that. But now... that story's done and my attention is here, so I swear I won't make you guys wait as long for the next update!! And don't apologize for your long reviews... the longer, the more I smile, and I love that you get so excited for the updates. =D Hehe, thanks for the LONG review!!
Date: 01/24/08 03:18 pm Title: Scene 6, Kiss Me
Omg this is great!!
I Love how you're slowly building up the relationship!
and that song,Lol i actually like it!
Author's Response: =D really? thanks!! haha, well it's a good song. ^_^
Date: 01/24/08 03:15 pm Title: Scene 6, Kiss Me
Oh, you are becoming a best selling author for sure!
This was friggin' amazing! How do you do it?!
It was definatly worth the wait, but I can't wait for more now. SO INTENSE!
Jesus christ, I think I just whissed myself, that's how amazing it was! ;D
Author's Response: a best selling author? nah... rnHaha, thanks, i'm so glad you love it. as for how do i do it... well... now that's a secret. ^_^ Haha, thanks again.
Date: 01/24/08 10:34 am Title: Introduction, Welcome to My Life.
I hope this one is not dead cause I really am waiting for an update here ):
Author's Response: ^_^ Editing it right now... will post soon!
Date: 01/23/08 02:25 pm Title: Scene 5, Love is Blind
Owww *-* Tomi's being a sweetheart! Good thing, Bill looked like he needed that :) some rescueing and loving, I mean. Good, go on like this, maybe Bill will allow Tom farther *-*
Author's Response: haha, we'll see where it goes. ^_^ thanks for reviewing!