Date: 01/30/08 09:23 pm Title: Scene 7, Let's Not and Say We Did
i loved it, it was so adorable. I hope everything goes alright for them in the future. Not too much drama ya hear!!!! can't wait for more...^_^
Author's Response: =D thank you! aw, shucks, not too much drama??? hmph. fine. lol... and my drama tends to ruin things, so i'll stray away from the drama, sound good? ^_^ thanks for reviewing
Date: 01/30/08 06:03 pm Title: Introduction, Welcome to My Life.
MORE PLEASE!!!
I NEED MORE
:)
Author's Response: =D I'll try and write more SOON!! THANKS for reviewing ^_^
Date: 01/30/08 04:00 pm Title: Scene 7, Let's Not and Say We Did
wow! This is so good ^^ I love it (: Tom is showing such a nice side now ! ihk, can't wait to see what will happen!
Author's Response: ^_^ thank you! so happy you love it
Date: 01/30/08 03:29 pm Title: Scene 7, Let's Not and Say We Did
i hope this isent the ending
i will be very upset if it is
lol
continue please
Author's Response: oh my, no, it's not the ending. i'd be sure to tell you guys if it was! but it isn't, so nothing to worry about there =D i'll continue soooooon, thanks for the review
Date: 01/30/08 08:57 am Title: Introduction, Welcome to My Life.
i read all the chapters 'cause i needed a break from my study and let me tell you that is really good, i like your style and all the story plot is pretty good, it reminds me a little of a manga named Marmalade boy that i really loved
Author's Response: Aw, thank you!! Cool, though I've never heard of Marmalade boy, maybe i'll check it out in the future. i'm glad you like it, and thanks for reviewing!
Date: 01/30/08 08:47 am Title: Scene 7, Let's Not and Say We Did
It's so sweet I want to cuddle them both ^^ Can't wait to see Tomi teach innocent Bill something. He said there's a lot to teach *winks*
Author's Response: Haha, yep. And teaching as in even the little things =D thanks for reviewing.
Date: 01/30/08 06:17 am Title: Scene 7, Let's Not and Say We Did
Too cute? Is that even possible? I love "the cute side" of Tom, it makes me melt! Probably because you´re such a good writer! Anyway, I´m dying to read the next chapter so don´t take too long! 8)
Author's Response: Lol, I'm beginning to wonder if that IS possible, and I'm leaning toward a "no." Aw, thanks!!
Date: 01/30/08 12:23 am Title: Scene 7, Let's Not and Say We Did
indeed icy!
but cute!
Author's Response: ^_^ thanks
Date: 01/29/08 07:17 pm Title: Scene 7, Let's Not and Say We Did
aweee!! FRIGGAN FINALLY!!!!! lol gawd took long enough!!!!! update soon please!!! perfect chapter jsut like all the others!!
Author's Response: Lol, sorry, I'm not always a fast updater, and for that I am terribly sorry, but life can be rather busy sometimes! But thanks so much for your review & i'll try not to take TOO long on the next update, kay? thanks!!
Date: 01/29/08 07:15 pm Title: Scene 7, Let's Not and Say We Did
Yay!! i love it! and i dont think you could like EVER get too cute with those two...XD please update soon?
^_^[Sagey]
Author's Response: Lol, good point, VERY good point right there. =D I'll try to work on the update soon! Thanks for reviewing Sagey!!
Date: 01/29/08 06:37 pm Title: Scene 1, Welcome to Hell on Earth
AWESOME!!
Author's Response: =D thanks!!
Date: 01/29/08 06:37 pm Title: Scene 7, Let's Not and Say We Did
i just dig how tom is so lovestruck! hahah so friggin cute!
Author's Response: haha, thanks for reviewing!
Date: 01/29/08 06:32 pm Title: Introduction, Welcome to My Life.
I like it. :)
Author's Response: Yay, I'm glad. =]
Date: 01/29/08 06:32 pm Title: Scene 6, Kiss Me
amazing
Author's Response: =D thank you
Date: 01/29/08 04:49 pm Title: Scene 7, Let's Not and Say We Did
*________________*
I can't form any kind of sentence right now, really. I'm gonna leave a long kickass review about this chapter when my brain starts functioning again.
Author's Response: Hah, okay, I'll look forward to reading your long kickass review, you know I love them. =D
Date: 01/29/08 04:28 pm Title: Scene 7, Let's Not and Say We Did
Another great chapter.
The way you had Tom conffese first was adorable.
Bill's answer to his question left me breathless.
Everything was so beautiful, i could imagine them seitting in that park.
Great job Hun, simply amazing!
Author's Response: Aw, thanks! =D Happy you liked it.
Date: 01/29/08 04:16 pm Title: Scene 7, Let's Not and Say We Did
uh, i'm boring, am i not?
but, i can't help it, Bill's hot box is not working *frowns* so i review...
ugh, anyhow...
why are you making bill such a jerk? so what if they are stepbrothers?! they are not blood related... uh, i wish someone would write some chapter a bit easier for me to read... (i mainly read the 'hard' stories, i need sth easy)
Author's Response: .. i'm sorry. i'm not trying to make him a jerk, just trying to make it a little realistic versus having him being swept off head over heels if you catch my drift. thanks for reviewing again. =]
Date: 01/29/08 03:31 pm Title: Scene 7, Let's Not and Say We Did
Oh, I just couldn't wait 'till morning, so I had to read it now.
I was, however, hoping it would be good, so that this wouldn't be a waste of precious sleeping-time.
I was wrong.
It was FUCKING AWSOME! I don't know how you do it, but it's like you reach out and grab me and place me in the scene with them, wearing an invisibility coat, telling me to shut up and watch. And I can't do anything else than watch.
Seriously, I'm now wondering how the hell I managed to be in that park, watching those confused kids by the swing, feeling the cold...
I could go on and on and on.
But I.... Can't.
I'll just leave you with some Norwegian praise;
Dette var helt fantastisk! Jeg skjønner faen med ikke hvordan jeg en gang kunne tenke at.... Nei, den der passet ikke in. Vet du? Dette var så bra at uansett hvilket språk jeg snakker, blir det ikke nok til å fortelle deg hvor utrolig dette var!
Author's Response: Whoa.. say what? And I'm not having much luck with a norwegian translator ^_^ But thanks for your "Norwegian praise" despite my lack of understanding, lol. Hah, well I'm glad it pulls you in... I like trying to make it easy for the reader to visualize and such, so I'm glad it works. =D Thanks for taking your precious sleeping time to read it hun, and danke for the great review! =D
Date: 01/29/08 03:28 pm Title: Scene 7, Let's Not and Say We Did
like 11 degrees... lol, that's hot. it's 17 degrees below freezing here
oh i can tell him what he's gotten himself into...
.L.O.V.E.
Author's Response: woo, okay, 17 below? that's craziness. hah, yea, definitely what he's gotten himself into. thanks for the review.
Date: 01/29/08 01:02 pm Title: Scene 6, Kiss Me
ooooo this is awesome!!
please update sooon!!!
xoxox
Author's Response: ^_^ thanks!