Date: 08/15/09 12:33 am Title: Closure
Oh, gahhhddd. I teared up >_O. Most definitely, did I tear up.
Short, but sweet =]. Good chapter.
Date: 08/14/09 11:18 pm Title: Closure
aww thatz so sad=[ plz update soon thx soso much=] how old is marcus?? plz let tomi and billa luvz eachother=]
Date: 08/12/09 05:22 pm Title: Confessions
aww poor tomi..make billa go back 2 him plz=]
Date: 08/12/09 02:24 pm Title: Confessions
Oh!!! You updated ^_^!
Guess Tom really isn't so bad after all D:
Author's Response: That's what you think NOW ;] just wait. hehe. Danke for the review!
Date: 07/21/09 06:45 pm Title: Dead Leaves and Black Clouds
That is some serious heavy. I wonder if Tom's name is darkness' name. Hmmmm...
Date: 07/15/09 10:45 pm Title: Dead Leaves and Black Clouds
Omg... my heart like.. hurts now lol. That was so .. so sad v_v, but good. Very good =]. Update again soon!!!
Date: 07/15/09 09:38 pm Title: Dead Leaves and Black Clouds
plzpzlzplz update sooon thx soso much=]=]
Date: 07/14/09 09:30 pm Title: A Friend Amongst Foes
Oh myy!!!!!!! =[. Steven, you inconsiderate butthead >:|. That part so made me flail my arms. Ugh.
Annnddd I see a connection between Tom and Marcus' actions.. hmmm *stares intently at screen* Whelp, I give up. Which means... Update soon !!! Haha.
I love this story more and more each chapter. And I believe I get a little too excited when you update... Know how I know this? I was gone for a few days and when I came back home, I went through all the "recent" stories and opened all the ones I wanted to read in new tabs (I know I know, I have no life -_-), and yours was the very last one to read (save the best for last, :D! haha). And when I clicked on the tab to bring this story up, my internet totally crashed O_O. Omg, it was terrible. I threw a fit... because it took like... hours for it to work again.. haha >_>.
So yes, I love this story =]
Date: 07/10/09 07:05 pm Title: A Friend Amongst Foes
omg..ronalds the killer huh...damn and tom knows...damn..plzplzplz fix thiz...let tomi and billa luvz and be happy thx=]
Author's Response: Haha, well, not quite! Don't worry, things will progress in their relationship =] thanks for the review!
Date: 06/29/09 04:56 pm Title: Revenge is Sweet
Your descriptions on people are awesome lol. And I love the relationship, if you can call it that, between Bill and Tom. It's so amusing x].
And the little murder mystery is getting more and more intriguing... Nothing I guessed seemed right, so I'm way excited to see it all unravel XD!!
This was a really good chapter =]! Good job ^^
Author's Response: THANK YOU =D And things will start unravelling soon on their own, don't worry. Thanks soooo much for your reviews, they are always so great!!!!
Date: 06/27/09 03:29 pm Title: Looks&Facts
mistery....so cooollll i love it!! more pleaseeeee
Author's Response: yeah man! aw thanks :]
Date: 06/26/09 02:08 pm Title: Looks&Facts
Oh! Tom's attitude sucks >:|
Lol, but anyway, good chapter, and poor Marcus =[.
One tiny thing that threw me off: the very last line of this chapter, (it's not that big of a deal, really..), but you wrote "I raced to my car, and sped to the place I once called home." So, since Tom dropped him off a few blocks from the station and Bill walked the rest of the way, does that mean he walked all the way back to the beach to retrieve his car or did it magically appear in front of the station >_>.
idk if that was some sort of typo or if I'm just fucking retarded.. But, whatever! It was a damn good chapter, and I'm all antsy for the next!
Much love ^^!
Author's Response: OH MY GOSH! You're so right! Thanks for pointing that out. I always make embarrassing mistakes like that hehe I shall fix that ASAP!!! I guess Bill will just have to walk :] haha. no car for him! THANKS SO MUCH FOR THE REVIEW!!!! <3
Date: 06/24/09 12:44 am Title: Mountains of Comfort
Oh, wow lol. I really liked this so far. I can't wait to read more x3
Author's Response: danke!!!! =)
Date: 06/23/09 08:41 pm Title: Mountains of Comfort
And I'm wondering what does Tom have against Bill! *pouts*
Update soon, please!
Author's Response: It's a VERY long and complicated story that will make sense later :) don't worry I plan on updating very quickly for this story!
Date: 06/13/09 03:19 am Title: Diamond in the Darkness
I think it's very interesting and looks promising...BUT it would be better if you get rid of those parts where you forget to change Abigail's name for Bill's and things like that.
But despite that this is really good! And I'm truly glad you turned it into slash! =D
Author's Response: Omg sorry for those little gender mistakes!!! I already wrote the story and had to go back and edit everything about 'Abigail' and turn her into Bill haha! Thank you for reading and leaving a review. :DDDD