Date: 06/22/09 04:31 pm Title: I
Ohalalala! Niice. finally. a story i could read.
Author's Response: WOOTWOOT!.:). thank you, lovely.
Date: 06/15/09 11:57 pm Title: II
*jaw drops*
i love you...
O.o that was awkward...lol
but yea i love it,tom is kinda OVER protective but damn...
i would get hella freaked out if i felt that crap..i'll be like.."let me go,please, please, please! i don't wanna die!!!" lol then i'll run away like a scary little black girl!!!
Author's Response: *giggles* I love you too... *awkward silence* haha.:). I know!, but I love it. Simone was in shock though, big time shock, she couldn't move, he wouldn't let her. For that moment he had complete control of her. If he had said, "Strip down to your underwear and dance like a retarded monkey," she would have done it, no problem, not a blink of her eyes.
Date: 06/15/09 10:50 am Title: II
That's was awesome Russia! You've gotten so much better at writing!
Author's Response: Thank you dearly, lottie.:).
Date: 06/15/09 01:21 am Title: II
That was pretty creepy. This is such a different, interesting story! :)
Author's Response: I will settle for creepy!. thank you!.
Date: 06/15/09 12:39 am Title: II
woah
Author's Response: *giggles* good woah, or bad woah?.
Date: 06/14/09 11:41 pm Title: II
Wow! I don't know if I trust Tom in this story. It's a little scary. I kind of like it though. Update soon:)
Author's Response: I don't know if I do either, and thank you!. I will, I will.
Date: 06/14/09 11:29 pm Title: II
O_O
:O
>_>
*hides under blanket and pokes head out* update soon please o_o
Author's Response: *giggles* sorry, but thank you and I will.:).
Date: 06/14/09 11:16 pm Title: II
wow that was unexpected but in a good way
Author's Response: it was?. Well good!.:). thank you.
Date: 06/14/09 10:27 pm Title: II
Whoo! I kind of flailed when I saw this was updated. *cough* >.>
Oh, but this is getting really really interesting! O: Well, it already is, but moreso. ;)
Author's Response: *giggles* that's always good, just don't hurt yourself.:). Thank you, darlin'.
Date: 06/14/09 10:26 pm Title: II
It wasn't scary, but it was certainly unsettleing, to say the least. It's unnerving to think of something like that coming into your home and taking over your kid.
Nice job. More now, please?
Author's Response: Well, at least I got unsettling, that's close.:). It really is, but my crazy mind thought of it.:). I'll try, and thank you.
Date: 06/14/09 10:18 pm Title: I
Very interesting. Alot of small children have imaginary friends, but something tells me that Tom is a bit more than that.
Author's Response: Thank you and, hmmm, something tells me you're right too.:).
Date: 06/14/09 09:55 pm Title: II
OMG! please keep it up, Im already dreaming for the next chapter is so fabolous story!!
Author's Response: Thank you, and I will hopefully!. *smiles*
Date: 06/14/09 09:13 pm Title: II
Yes, it did!
Fantastic job!
Next chapter soon, please?
Author's Response: Thank you darlin', and the next chapter is coming up!.
Date: 06/14/09 08:38 pm Title: II
you are a genius. i must say i'm shocked that simone know knows tom is not just an imaginary friend, but i like it. i like that to is so possesive and proctetive of bill please make this a long interesting story. i hope to seen how bill and tom relationship changes and grows as bill becomes closer. it be cool to see how tom would react if someone like andreas had a crush on bill when he gets older. can you please updat esoon. i really really REALLY love this story.
Author's Response: Thank you, darlin'!. Me too, believe me!. Yes'm and thank you very much, I hope you love the next chapter!.:).
Date: 06/14/09 08:34 pm Title: II
plz update..but i dont want tom 2 be bad or hurt ppl=[
update soon plz thx=]
Author's Response: I will, I promise. He's protective, what can I say?. *giggles*
Date: 06/14/09 08:17 pm Title: II
Oh no worries. You're doing fantastic so far. Tom is definitely creepy; I agree with many others. Lol.
Cant wait for the next part. Weeeee! =D
Author's Response: Thank you!. It's lovely to have encouragement!. I like creepy Tom, It makes me happy.:). It will come soon, promise.:).
Date: 06/14/09 08:17 pm Title: II
Woooow .. so Tom is like 'evil'? Niiice!! I likey lots! ;)
Author's Response: *giggle* I can't say, but you'll know soon.:).thank you,darlin'.
Date: 06/14/09 08:15 pm Title: II
I itttt Russi! More soon please? Ah well, ill be bugging you soon enough, *giggle*
~Luvluv
Author's Response: *giggles* thank you darlin'. I know, I know.:).
Date: 06/14/09 07:52 pm Title: II
Ooooh man. When Simone noticed that Bill already had a mug of warm milk, I went *gasp*. Lol. I guess the "scary" factor wasn't scary, scary to me. More like the...getting tingles down my spine. If that makes sense.
But I kinda feel that said 'scary' factor will become more later on. I love that. It keeps me even more hooked. =D
Author's Response: I know, if I was Simone... damn the things I would have done.:). heehee, well I tried, but I'm not very good at it.:(. I hope I'll get better.:D.rn
Date: 06/14/09 07:49 pm Title: II
I am extremely interested in what Tom is, haha. I will admit... he's really creepy.
:/
Author's Response: *giggle* heehee, good!. He is, he is. I like it that way though.:).